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I just found this file on my computer I do not know if I wrote it or someone I know did it but let me know what you think

Lonely Child and Lonely Old Woman
Harry Potter knew of his family history since he was age 6.
His twin brother, Hayden, was hailed the boy-who-lived at age one, when they both survived the Dark Lord's power, and the Dark Lord's corpse faced towards Hayden, meaning, he was chosen as his equal...and marked him with a lightning-shaped scar on his forehead while he, was unmarked. He may not understand many things, but this he knew:
Because he wasn't the hero...because he wasn't the one who vanquished the Dark Lord...everyone found him insignificant and just 'the other boy'. His parents didn't spare him a glance. The only one who cared for him was their family elf Sparky. But he wanted a loving family too. A parent who would dote on only him, smile at him, hug him...things he could not have here.
'Sparky...what do kids do when they wish for something that can't be easily given?' Harry asked his only friend in the house.
'...some children pray for what they wish for Master Harry.' said Sparky. 'Does master wish for something?'
'Yeah...I want loving parents.' Harry told his babysitter. 'I have a mum and dad but when did they ever smile at me? When did they ever ask how I am? When was the last time they hugged me? And on our birthday last year, all I saw was Hayden's name on the cake instead of both our names...and we're twins...but everybody forgot about me.' he said sadly. 'Am I...worthless? Unimportant? Unwanted?' Harry sniffled as tears pooled in his bright green eyes. 'I wanted parents who will smile at me, hug me and care for me. And make me feel special too...I want to go to a place where I won't be lonely.'
And to Sparky's horror, Harry disappeared. 'Master Harry!' he choked as his young ward was gone...before sighing. Then again, maybe the boy was right. And he knew that for letting Harry disappear within his watch, the Potters will give him clothes which was the ultimate punishment and disgrace for a House Elf. And being a house elf who is serving the family of the boy-who-lived, he would get a worser punishment from the Ministry of Magic for letting this happen. He would have to find his young charge and stay with him wherever he went...and stop responding from the calls of the Potter Family to avoid such a fate.
...
Elsewhere...
In the mountains, Genkai was playing video games in her room when she felt a powerful presence not far from her. She quickly ran outside to check it out to see a little boy with a messy mop of black hair, lying face first on the front yard. She ran to pick up the boy who was at her height level. The minute she held the boy, she also sensed his weakened powers but she knew he was powerful, judging from the burst she felt earlier. 'Hey! Are you alright boy? Say something!' Harry opened his tired eyes.
'...am I...here?' and he fell asleep.
'Hey!' Genkai cried before sighing in exasperation. 'Might as well put this brat to bed.' she mused as she carried the boy inside her house and put him in one of the rooms she had in her estate and waited for him to wake up...which was hours later that sundown as she had not left his bedside. The boy appeared foreign. He was also quite a beautiful child as well and seeing him like this awoke a maternal instinct in Genkai, which was saying something since she never married. The boy soon woke up and showed her his unusually bright green eyes she swore she was staring at a jewel, not a pair of eyes.
'Where am I?' he croaked as he got up.
'You're in my house, little one.' said Genkai. 'You appeared in my backyard. You can tell me your story after we eat dinner. I am Genkai, owner of this estate. Follow me.' and she left the room. Harry quickly got up his bed and quickly followed the old woman to the dining room, where she cooked dinner. Dinner was a simple curry and water. Dinner was a quiet affair too since both were strangers to each other. Upon finishing their food, Genkai spoke. 'So, what's your story?'
'...you promise to believe me?' Harry asked Genkai. Genkai snorted.
'I've seen many things in my lifetime brat. Demons, ghosts, and now little kids who appear in my front yard.' she chuckled. 'Now spill.'
'Well...I was born to an elite pureblood family of wizards and witches. And I have a twin older brother.' said Harry. 'Six years ago, there was war between the Dark Lord and the Ministry of Magic. It was a reign of terror where normal people and both witches and wizards were killed out of sport and pureblood supremacy. The Dark Lord believes that normal people and half-blood wizards don't deserve to exist and aiming for a pureblood world...which was weird since there aren't that many purebloods left...and he also kills purebloods who dare oppose him. Then six years ago, when we were born...the Dark Lord attacked our home while our parents were out. But they said my twin brother vanquished him since his dead body was lying in front of Hayden and he had a wound on his forehead. Since then he was hailed the boy-who-lived. This story was told to children many times and I'm no exception.'
'Mother and father loved him while they never spared me even a glance...so I wished hard on my magic to take me to a parent who would love me.' Harry said softly. 'I want a parent to smile at me and care for me too. Nobody wants me where I came from anyway.' he said gloomily.
"Oh boy...NOW I've seen everything." Genkai thought wryly as she looked at the little boy. 'What's your name and how old are you?'
'...Harry Potter and I'm six years old. Just five minutes younger than my twin they said.' said Harry. And just by hearing the name made Genkai knew he was a foreign boy.
'Well, you're an English runaway since you're in Japan. And this country is way across the world.' Genkai said wryly as Harry's jaws dropped. 'And since your powers took you to me and even changed your English into Japanese, your powers think I'm good parent material...but I've been alone since I can remember. I don't have a husband or children so that makes me an old maid. I've never tried out being a parent but I guess I can start with you.' she said kindly as Harry beamed. 'But, you do everything I say.' Harry blinked. 'I'm no ordinary old maid either. I'm the most powerful psychic in the world and I defeated many demons and apparitions since my younger days. I developed quite a reputation so I asked that I live in a place where no demon or apparition can enter so I can live the rest of my life in peace.'
'And you're a child which means I will have to send you to school.' Genkai continued. 'But first I will teach you how to read and write, as well as do basic maths for one year before I send you to school. Just promise me that you'll do your best.'
'Yeah! I'll do my best Granny!' Harry chirped as Genkai nodded. Harry knew he would have to do his best to have Genkai's approval and love. She was a willing parent to him so he would not let her down out of fear she wouldn't want him anymore if he failed.
'Well, I'll start off my first duty as a parent by naming you.' said Genkai. 'I'll tell you your new name tomorrow but for now, take a bath before you go to bed. I'll take you to where the bathroom is. And your new room from now on will be the room you found yourself in.'
'OK Granny.' and Genkai took little Harry to the bathroom. Genkai then took a white bottle and a white bar.
'OK, this is the shampoo, and this is the soap.' said Genkai as she gave Harry a round pumice stone. 'And this is used to scrub your body. Scrub your arms, chest, belly, legs and feet. But be careful because too much scrubbing will hurt. Scrub only until you see no more dirt come off your body. And we scrub only once a week. And of course, scrubbing comes first before you use soap and shampoo. Well, I'll wash the dishes Harry. And don't break the scrubbing stone.' and she left him before Harry did his toiletry duties, before going to bed.
Harry looked forward to a life with his new parent.
He couldn't wait for tomorrow.
I just found this file on my computer I do not know if I wrote it or someone I know did it but let me know what you think

Lonely Child and Lonely Old Woman
Harry Potter knew of his family history since he was age 6.
His twin brother, Hayden, was hailed the boy-who-lived at age one, when they both survived the Dark Lord's power, and the Dark Lord's corpse faced towards Hayden, meaning, he was chosen as his equal...and marked him with a lightning-shaped scar on his forehead while he, was unmarked. He may not understand many things, but this he knew:
Because he wasn't the hero...because he wasn't the one who vanquished the Dark Lord...everyone found him insignificant and just 'the other boy'. His parents didn't spare him a glance. The only one who cared for him was their family elf Sparky. But he wanted a loving family too. A parent who would dote on only him, smile at him, hug him...things he could not have here.
'Sparky...what do kids do when they wish for something that can't be easily given?' Harry asked his only friend in the house.
'...some children pray for what they wish for Master Harry.' said Sparky. 'Does master wish for something?'
'Yeah...I want loving parents.' Harry told his babysitter. 'I have a mum and dad but when did they ever smile at me? When did they ever ask how I am? When was the last time they hugged me? And on our birthday last year, all I saw was Hayden's name on the cake instead of both our names...and we're twins...but everybody forgot about me.' he said sadly. 'Am I...worthless? Unimportant? Unwanted?' Harry sniffled as tears pooled in his bright green eyes. 'I wanted parents who will smile at me, hug me and care for me. And make me feel special too...I want to go to a place where I won't be lonely.'
And to Sparky's horror, Harry disappeared. 'Master Harry!' he choked as his young ward was gone...before sighing. Then again, maybe the boy was right. And he knew that for letting Harry disappear within his watch, the Potters will give him clothes which was the ultimate punishment and disgrace for a House Elf. And being a house elf who is serving the family of the boy-who-lived, he would get a worser punishment from the Ministry of Magic for letting this happen. He would have to find his young charge and stay with him wherever he went...and stop responding from the calls of the Potter Family to avoid such a fate.
...
Elsewhere...
In the mountains, Genkai was playing video games in her room when she felt a powerful presence not far from her. She quickly ran outside to check it out to see a little boy with a messy mop of black hair, lying face first on the front yard. She ran to pick up the boy who was at her height level. The minute she held the boy, she also sensed his weakened powers but she knew he was powerful, judging from the burst she felt earlier. 'Hey! Are you alright boy? Say something!' Harry opened his tired eyes.
'...am I...here?' and he fell asleep.
'Hey!' Genkai cried before sighing in exasperation. 'Might as well put this brat to bed.' she mused as she carried the boy inside her house and put him in one of the rooms she had in her estate and waited for him to wake up...which was hours later that sundown as she had not left his bedside. The boy appeared foreign. He was also quite a beautiful child as well and seeing him like this awoke a maternal instinct in Genkai, which was saying something since she never married. The boy soon woke up and showed her his unusually bright green eyes she swore she was staring at a jewel, not a pair of eyes.
'Where am I?' he croaked as he got up.
'You're in my house, little one.' said Genkai. 'You appeared in my backyard. You can tell me your story after we eat dinner. I am Genkai, owner of this estate. Follow me.' and she left the room. Harry quickly got up his bed and quickly followed the old woman to the dining room, where she cooked dinner. Dinner was a simple curry and water. Dinner was a quiet affair too since both were strangers to each other. Upon finishing their food, Genkai spoke. 'So, what's your story?'
'...you promise to believe me?' Harry asked Genkai. Genkai snorted.
'I've seen many things in my lifetime brat. Demons, ghosts, and now little kids who appear in my front yard.' she chuckled. 'Now spill.'
'Well...I was born to an elite pureblood family of wizards and witches. And I have a twin older brother.' said Harry. 'Six years ago, there was war between the Dark Lord and the Ministry of Magic. It was a reign of terror where normal people and both witches and wizards were killed out of sport and pureblood supremacy. The Dark Lord believes that normal people and half-blood wizards don't deserve to exist and aiming for a pureblood world...which was weird since there aren't that many purebloods left...and he also kills purebloods who dare oppose him. Then six years ago, when we were born...the Dark Lord attacked our home while our parents were out. But they said my twin brother vanquished him since his dead body was lying in front of Hayden and he had a wound on his forehead. Since then he was hailed the boy-who-lived. This story was told to children many times and I'm no exception.'
'Mother and father loved him while they never spared me even a glance...so I wished hard on my magic to take me to a parent who would love me.' Harry said softly. 'I want a parent to smile at me and care for me too. Nobody wants me where I came from anyway.' he said gloomily.
"Oh boy...NOW I've seen everything." Genkai thought wryly as she looked at the little boy. 'What's your name and how old are you?'
'...Harry Potter and I'm six years old. Just five minutes younger than my twin they said.' said Harry. And just by hearing the name made Genkai knew he was a foreign boy.
'Well, you're an English runaway since you're in Japan. And this country is way across the world.' Genkai said wryly as Harry's jaws dropped. 'And since your powers took you to me and even changed your English into Japanese, your powers think I'm good parent material...but I've been alone since I can remember. I don't have a husband or children so that makes me an old maid. I've never tried out being a parent but I guess I can start with you.' she said kindly as Harry beamed. 'But, you do everything I say.' Harry blinked. 'I'm no ordinary old maid either. I'm the most powerful psychic in the world and I defeated many demons and apparitions since my younger days. I developed quite a reputation so I asked that I live in a place where no demon or apparition can enter so I can live the rest of my life in peace.'
'And you're a child which means I will have to send you to school.' Genkai continued. 'But first I will teach you how to read and write, as well as do basic maths for one year before I send you to school. Just promise me that you'll do your best.'
'Yeah! I'll do my best Granny!' Harry chirped as Genkai nodded. Harry knew he would have to do his best to have Genkai's approval and love. She was a willing parent to him so he would not let her down out of fear she wouldn't want him anymore if he failed.
'Well, I'll start off my first duty as a parent by naming you.' said Genkai. 'I'll tell you your new name tomorrow but for now, take a bath before you go to bed. I'll take you to where the bathroom is. And your new room from now on will be the room you found yourself in.'
'OK Granny.' and Genkai took little Harry to the bathroom. Genkai then took a white bottle and a white bar.
'OK, this is the shampoo, and this is the soap.' said Genkai as she gave Harry a round pumice stone. 'And this is used to scrub your body. Scrub your arms, chest, belly, legs and feet. But be careful because too much scrubbing will hurt. Scrub only until you see no more dirt come off your body. And we scrub only once a week. And of course, scrubbing comes first before you use soap and shampoo. Well, I'll wash the dishes Harry. And don't break the scrubbing stone.' and she left him before Harry did his toiletry duties, before going to bed.
Harry looked forward to a life with his new parent.
He couldn't wait for tomorrow.
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What do you mean you don't know if you wrote it? Is this a shared computer? If it isn't your work you should not post without the person's permission. I would like to know if this is your actual work.
What do you mean you don't know if you wrote it? Is this a shared computer? If it isn't your work you should not post without the person's permission. I would like to know if this is your actual work.
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Well, considering that you do not remember whether you wrote such a long story after reading it, then it probably isn't you who wrote it. I'm not going to rant on how it is actually slight cheating since it gives you chance at the red jersey for the day on a work that may not be yours, instead I will comment on the actual work.

I find it interesting to see a 'parody' of sorts on the Harry Potter series. Frankly, I actually do not remember ever reading one as a story, only verbal jokes that my friends used to crack from time to time.
Well, considering that you do not remember whether you wrote such a long story after reading it, then it probably isn't you who wrote it. I'm not going to rant on how it is actually slight cheating since it gives you chance at the red jersey for the day on a work that may not be yours, instead I will comment on the actual work.

I find it interesting to see a 'parody' of sorts on the Harry Potter series. Frankly, I actually do not remember ever reading one as a story, only verbal jokes that my friends used to crack from time to time.
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septembern : The file was from a few years ago so I honestly do not remember where it came from it could have been me or it could have been from a person i knew who was writing stories on one of the sites i visit i tried googling it and i cant find it anywhere on the web so it could have been deleted or like i said i might have written it though you'd think i'd remember writing that good lol
septembern : The file was from a few years ago so I honestly do not remember where it came from it could have been me or it could have been from a person i knew who was writing stories on one of the sites i visit i tried googling it and i cant find it anywhere on the web so it could have been deleted or like i said i might have written it though you'd think i'd remember writing that good lol
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Well, I did not mean to come off sounding rude or anything, just that I saw quite a few people today posting large posts trying to get the red, and I just found it a little unfair if this was not actually yours.

If it is on your personal computer, then I somewhat doubt that it was anyone but you who wrote it, but hey, who knows? Quite a lengthy story, lol. In my own personal writing excursions I do not believe that I have actually typed up that much and finish a story. I tend to write a few chapters, have around 8000-9000 words and give up. Or I have around 1000 words and a really short story. I just need to keep searching for that in between.
Well, I did not mean to come off sounding rude or anything, just that I saw quite a few people today posting large posts trying to get the red, and I just found it a little unfair if this was not actually yours.

If it is on your personal computer, then I somewhat doubt that it was anyone but you who wrote it, but hey, who knows? Quite a lengthy story, lol. In my own personal writing excursions I do not believe that I have actually typed up that much and finish a story. I tend to write a few chapters, have around 8000-9000 words and give up. Or I have around 1000 words and a really short story. I just need to keep searching for that in between.
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septembern : Hey back in high school all i did was write poems lol
septembern : Hey back in high school all i did was write poems lol
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Well why I ask is that it's not good and against tour de vizzed rules to post other peoples work. Since this is on your computer and I did not find anything like it on the web I let it slide. Please though next time make sure the work is yours before posting ok.
Well why I ask is that it's not good and against tour de vizzed rules to post other peoples work. Since this is on your computer and I did not find anything like it on the web I let it slide. Please though next time make sure the work is yours before posting ok.
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RequiemHaunt : Aye i understand I was curious about what people thought of it and wasnt even trying to get in on the contest you just mentioned honestly i didnt even know it was still going on and i highly doubt id get into it now that its almost over.
RequiemHaunt : Aye i understand I was curious about what people thought of it and wasnt even trying to get in on the contest you just mentioned honestly i didnt even know it was still going on and i highly doubt id get into it now that its almost over.
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