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01-16-12 08:24 PM
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I started writing animes over winter break and when I'm bored in class I kept writing.The Anime is called Memories To Ashes.It's about Siomari Miyruga and well it's hard to explain so I'll just retype it one person read it and said it was generic.But that just motivated me even more so my ego is OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!(how original of me XD)anyways here's the anime:

                                                                                    Introduction


Siomari Miruya has suffered having her memories burned to ashes.Her mother Hisana,died very ill one night in her sleep.Siomari wasn't at home she was at her friend Tasaki's house.Siomari called her mother to ask to take her home.Hisana Didn't answer the phone.Knowing about the deadly illness her mother had,Siomari became consumed with worries.She asked Tasaki to come along in case something was wrong.When they got to the house Siomari was out of breath.Tasaki was a little behind considering the fact that she believed that nothing was wrong.Siomari and Tasaki called Hisana but she didn't respond.A slightly worried look was now on Tasaki's Face.Siomari ran to her Mother's room to find her not breathing.                                        "Mom!Wake up!Don't leave me I'll have no one else!!!
But it was too late to protest.Hisana was already gone.Tasaki stood in shock with tears rolling as well.
When Siomari's dad got the news he seemed unemotional.Maybe it's because they were divorced?Even though it looked like a caring thought passed through his mind a few times.
At her funeral, Siomari couldn't bear the fact that her mother was dead so she left the funeral early.Siomari was only 13 when this all happened.


So how was it?Do You write animes too?Ahhh....Questions,Questions,Questions.And be honest about how it was because Because some honesty can always come in handy.And the intro is all I've written so far If you were wondering.

I started writing animes over winter break and when I'm bored in class I kept writing.The Anime is called Memories To Ashes.It's about Siomari Miyruga and well it's hard to explain so I'll just retype it one person read it and said it was generic.But that just motivated me even more so my ego is OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!!!(how original of me XD)anyways here's the anime:

                                                                                    Introduction


Siomari Miruya has suffered having her memories burned to ashes.Her mother Hisana,died very ill one night in her sleep.Siomari wasn't at home she was at her friend Tasaki's house.Siomari called her mother to ask to take her home.Hisana Didn't answer the phone.Knowing about the deadly illness her mother had,Siomari became consumed with worries.She asked Tasaki to come along in case something was wrong.When they got to the house Siomari was out of breath.Tasaki was a little behind considering the fact that she believed that nothing was wrong.Siomari and Tasaki called Hisana but she didn't respond.A slightly worried look was now on Tasaki's Face.Siomari ran to her Mother's room to find her not breathing.                                        "Mom!Wake up!Don't leave me I'll have no one else!!!
But it was too late to protest.Hisana was already gone.Tasaki stood in shock with tears rolling as well.
When Siomari's dad got the news he seemed unemotional.Maybe it's because they were divorced?Even though it looked like a caring thought passed through his mind a few times.
At her funeral, Siomari couldn't bear the fact that her mother was dead so she left the funeral early.Siomari was only 13 when this all happened.


So how was it?Do You write animes too?Ahhh....Questions,Questions,Questions.And be honest about how it was because Because some honesty can always come in handy.And the intro is all I've written so far If you were wondering.

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By writing anime do you mean like fanfiction or original storylines? You can't really write anime since anime is the show itself and words aren't really animation. =P

I've tried to write an original piece once or twice myself, but they end up being overdramatic or unbelievable. For now, I'm sticking with Touhou fanfiction, but I'll do something original later. xD

Yours above wasn't too bad. It was short but captivating. I agree that it's a bit in the "cliche" group like your friend said, but there are a million different paths you can take from here, should you decide to continue it.
By writing anime do you mean like fanfiction or original storylines? You can't really write anime since anime is the show itself and words aren't really animation. =P

I've tried to write an original piece once or twice myself, but they end up being overdramatic or unbelievable. For now, I'm sticking with Touhou fanfiction, but I'll do something original later. xD

Yours above wasn't too bad. It was short but captivating. I agree that it's a bit in the "cliche" group like your friend said, but there are a million different paths you can take from here, should you decide to continue it.
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I  did like what you wrote. I felt it was kinda cliche, but who cares, it was still good =3

AS for myself, I can't really write anything without ripping off at least 10 other stories of some sort.
I  did like what you wrote. I felt it was kinda cliche, but who cares, it was still good =3

AS for myself, I can't really write anything without ripping off at least 10 other stories of some sort.
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I used to write short stories. However if I changed my protagonist's name to "Hayato Miyazaki" from "Danny Bloomfield" you might consider my short story an anime.

FYI: An anime isn't a story with Japanese-Styled names.
I used to write short stories. However if I changed my protagonist's name to "Hayato Miyazaki" from "Danny Bloomfield" you might consider my short story an anime.

FYI: An anime isn't a story with Japanese-Styled names.
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