Now I know this isn't really the best story ever, but I'm having to write it. So I thought I might as well share it too. Hope you enjoy .


“Scientists are believed to have just found antidote that will make humans smarter and stronger. A small group of scientists in Moscow, Russia are going to be testing this new ‘antidote’ fairly soon. We only hope that this works.” A news reporter babbled on and on. ”This could be very good for the Russian army, and could be sold as a profit to our allies.”
Meanwhile in Moscow the small, yet intelligent team was preparing for its first test on lab rats. Yes they are going to be using lab rats for test, just like almost every other lab does. “Hey Sergei, are you almost done here. We just got in our shipment of lab rats. What disgusting creatures.” Ivan asked, anxious to get started. “Uh, yeah pretty much. God, can you believe it? We pretty much have created a super human serum!” shouted Sergei. “I know man, we will be so famous, maybe even get a Nobel Prize! Any ways, let’s stay on task here, we don’t have much time left today and I want to get as much done as possible.” Ivan was really excited.
There Egor, the one who was in charge of watching over the rats, was. He was just getting everything set up in the cages, as well as designing new test for the rats for before and after the antidote. “Egor, have you finished running all the tests?” Sergei questioned him. “Uhm, yes sir, everything is set up and ready to go. All tests have been run twice, and the rats are prepped to the serum.” Egor answered nervously, as it was his first day with this group. Sergei very simply gave each lab rat, the serum, mixed in with their food. “Well that was fairly simple. Now all we can do is wait till tomorrow morning for the serum to kick in. Let’s get some shut eye, shall we?” Sergei instructed to the other two men, they all agreed and headed back to their cabins.
That night the lab started to notice things that they had never really noticed before. They could suddenly think easier and move faster, as well as jump higher and farther. What Sergei didn’t realize about his antidote is that it work at an enormously fast pace. Instead of taking a few days to see any change in the rats, the changes were happening in only 6 hours time.
Egor was the first up that morning, he had woken up at 7 a.m. after having some kind of nightmare about something. Although he couldn’t remember what it was about. After sitting at his bed for a few minutes, his mind finally caught up to him and he remembered that he was the one who was supposed to be taking care of the rats. So he finally jerks himself up and out of bed, the first thing he does is fires up the coffee machine, and goes to check up on the rats. As Sergei had said the previous night, there behavior was getting smarter.
Now the rats were getting smart, they had seemed to find a way of communicating with each other very clearly. They weren’t speaking any human language though. Over that night the rats had been talking about lots different things, expressing ideas, feelings, and general chit-chat. One of those feelings was anger towards the humans. They discussed about how they were always being treated so poorly, and that even a stray cat gets better food. They had about had enough, and wanted to revolt. But they did so to where the humans won’t notice it until it happens.
A few weeks pass by, with Sergei, Egor, and Ivan all checking on the rats and doing tests on them. To the humans the rats seemed normal, just as they had planned. All until one day, Ivan started to notice strange behavior in the rats. They were not cooperating with the tests properly; they were pretty much completely ignoring the humans all together. Their plan had begun.
The next day was quiet; all you could here were the sounds of rats making sounds. Those sounds were sounds of cheering. While the humans were asleep the rats took the revolt upon themselves, clawing at the men while they were still asleep. Now these rats were super strong, and had extremely long claws, they had clawed their way into each human’s chest and clawing their hearts out. It’s not like the humans did try to defend themselves, it’s just that they didn’t know that anything like this would ever happen, also they were not allowed to have weapons in the cabins, or lab.
For the first few days without humans the rats did fairly well on their own, the leader rats giving out orders in every which way to establish a small colony, where the rats planned to reside until they could think of a better plan for the future. One of the rats thought about trying to contact other rats, and give them the serum so that they could take over other areas so that the rats could be free. Fortunately, the small rat colony had many volunteers to become scouts and carry the serum with them in little harnesses the humans had made for tests. These two rats were Petr and Ludvig, they happily volunteered for the job.

It's not finished yet... so.. yeah..

Interesting. It reminds me a lot about Planet of the Apes, but almost too much so.

There are also a bunch of grammar errors out there. Many of them will just take away from the experience of your writing. I suggest fixing those right away.

But, I think you have a good concept down. I wonder how the rats and humans will (or won't) get along.