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Stress Out - A Leggy Poem

 

06-09-11 03:20 AM
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This is ANOTHER emo-like poem of mine, but I like perfecting my craft, so even my earlier stuff is always available to the public.

This one is one of my early examples of how forced rhyming doesn't do any good. I look back on this and detest it in many ways.

These Mistakes I'm makin'
Preventin' me from going places,
I keep running into walls lately,
Mostly due to being out of Aces

So when the overload
Gets to you
You may ask
"Anything I can do?"

You may wanna
Stop it
Truth it'll
do is give you a fit

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

Impossible
Just improbable
Beginning to think
that I'm incapable

Can't do that
No more to it
I'm just
gonna be another dropout

Poor Grades,
Poor behavior,
Poor relationships,
I need to find a savior!

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

I need
Some help
"AHHH!"
Is what I'll yelp

Please give me
Any advice you can give
Anything's nice
It'll help me live!

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

I'm losing my faith
Stress is gonna win
That's how it all ends
before it begins

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.
This is ANOTHER emo-like poem of mine, but I like perfecting my craft, so even my earlier stuff is always available to the public.

This one is one of my early examples of how forced rhyming doesn't do any good. I look back on this and detest it in many ways.

These Mistakes I'm makin'
Preventin' me from going places,
I keep running into walls lately,
Mostly due to being out of Aces

So when the overload
Gets to you
You may ask
"Anything I can do?"

You may wanna
Stop it
Truth it'll
do is give you a fit

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

Impossible
Just improbable
Beginning to think
that I'm incapable

Can't do that
No more to it
I'm just
gonna be another dropout

Poor Grades,
Poor behavior,
Poor relationships,
I need to find a savior!

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

I need
Some help
"AHHH!"
Is what I'll yelp

Please give me
Any advice you can give
Anything's nice
It'll help me live!

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

I'm losing my faith
Stress is gonna win
That's how it all ends
before it begins

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.

Stuck, Trapped,
Caught up in the middle,
Stress is one
Of life's greatest riddles.
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06-09-11 05:11 AM
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No comment. Actually, there is one. 

I honestly really can see what you went through (assuming your feelings was completely involved in the poem), because I went through that too. 
When I went through that, nobody even understood me. Stress, stress, stress. Everyone thought I was faking stress.
Well, screw them. My stress are real, and its reasons may be either severe or stupid, but it is stress, after all.

That's how I felt, lol. Anyway, nice poem! Not of your best work, but still nice.
No comment. Actually, there is one. 

I honestly really can see what you went through (assuming your feelings was completely involved in the poem), because I went through that too. 
When I went through that, nobody even understood me. Stress, stress, stress. Everyone thought I was faking stress.
Well, screw them. My stress are real, and its reasons may be either severe or stupid, but it is stress, after all.

That's how I felt, lol. Anyway, nice poem! Not of your best work, but still nice.
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06-24-11 09:30 PM
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I just like to get rid of stress in the world. But nice poem
I just like to get rid of stress in the world. But nice poem
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06-26-11 10:20 PM
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Ah a stress out poem, good poem indeed.
Ah a stress out poem, good poem indeed.
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This is a very good poem, maybe you can teach me a few basic principles as I'm looking to try and write some more poems
This is a very good poem, maybe you can teach me a few basic principles as I'm looking to try and write some more poems
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06-29-11 10:48 AM
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Good poem but if you want to make it great, no fantastic edit it a little bit. I would like to see it edited I think it could be very awesome. The underlying story is very good though, I felt the same way the end of this year.
Good poem but if you want to make it great, no fantastic edit it a little bit. I would like to see it edited I think it could be very awesome. The underlying story is very good though, I felt the same way the end of this year.
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