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Another poem by moi

 

11-23-10 03:43 AM
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I am lost, dreaming
Secretly awake,
Full of ambition and hope,
In a place that doesn't feel real

Everything is wonderous,
And nothing represents pain,
The place is quiet and peaceful,
And has no crime, poverty, or war

The happy dreams,
The ones you take me
Away with each night we talk,
The one's I can't wait to see

I'm wise awake,
But I'm dreaming,
How did I meet,
One such as you

You brighten my day,
My world, make it sunny,
Wipe away rain clouds,
Smite non believers

You have given me what I want,
In a perfect world, this is my perfect dream
This world is pleasant, but it comes at a price,
To get in, we have to take a leap of faith
I am lost, dreaming
Secretly awake,
Full of ambition and hope,
In a place that doesn't feel real

Everything is wonderous,
And nothing represents pain,
The place is quiet and peaceful,
And has no crime, poverty, or war

The happy dreams,
The ones you take me
Away with each night we talk,
The one's I can't wait to see

I'm wise awake,
But I'm dreaming,
How did I meet,
One such as you

You brighten my day,
My world, make it sunny,
Wipe away rain clouds,
Smite non believers

You have given me what I want,
In a perfect world, this is my perfect dream
This world is pleasant, but it comes at a price,
To get in, we have to take a leap of faith
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11-23-10 03:55 AM
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It's a very nice poem, Jake.
It has a happy setting...Yet a sad one at the same time.
Keep writing. You're very good at it.
It's a very nice poem, Jake.
It has a happy setting...Yet a sad one at the same time.
Keep writing. You're very good at it.
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11-24-10 04:41 AM
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Good job legacyme3 your very good at writing poems man
Good job legacyme3 your very good at writing poems man
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legacyme3 : I've been reading some of your poems and this one is my favorite one. Like I said in your other thread, you have a talent and really should try to get these published.
legacyme3 : I've been reading some of your poems and this one is my favorite one. Like I said in your other thread, you have a talent and really should try to get these published.
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Very good poem legacy
My favorite poem though is alone that you had written before
Very good poem legacy
My favorite poem though is alone that you had written before
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Mmmmmm, vewy, vewy good poem, legacy.
Your best one to me
Mmmmmm, vewy, vewy good poem, legacy.
Your best one to me
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Wow I have to tell you bro, that is a great poem. It seems like you really have a talent for writing.

I have never been able to write poems. I don't know why I just could never get them to sound decent.
Wow I have to tell you bro, that is a great poem. It seems like you really have a talent for writing.

I have never been able to write poems. I don't know why I just could never get them to sound decent.
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