Prologue I

Angels were born at the same time when God created the world, or rather, the universe, or, whatever. A world without any living things and just a mere place for God to visit once in awhile whenever he needs some rest and peace of mind.

He made the angels to be the earth’s guardian, and they were granted a large amount of power for their task.
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God visited the earth, and stayed there for a while. He’d been fascinated with the nature’s beauty, but there was still something missing; life. So he made lots of animals that will inhabit the earth, first, the birds, second, the fishes, and the third, the animals that lives on land.

But still, he didn’t find himself happy enough, and so he made another specie of animals called humans, who are far superior than other animals in terms of intelligence and spiritual powers, and has the biggest potential in life among them. Anyway, just to make it clear for you, angels aren’t animals. They may have wings, have godly powers, and have the same intelligence level as humans, but they’re not animals; they’re spirits.
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Prologue II

Lucifel, an angel with a pair of big black wings, blacker than crows’, had developed some interest about God’s newest creations. But when he found out about the creation of humans, there he thought of controlling them and gaining absolute power for him, to defeat god and to become the new god. He gathered his entire subordinates and planned to come down to earth in order to make his first move.

Alex, Franz’ guardian, found out about Lucifel’s plan, and so he went to where God was, but He was asleep and can only be awakened if Alex emitted the right amount of force, but he knew he would just fail in doing so, because there is only one man who can wake up god.
So he had no choice but to call the prince of angels; Franz. Franz is the strongest among the angels, second in command next to God, has a pair of blue ocean-colored eyes, big white wings, and a good personality. Ahem, and looks.
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Confronting Lucifel is futile, because not only they are outnumbered (because more than half of the angels are in Lucifel’s side) but although Franz is stronger, their strength gap is just small and if you average their strength, they’re just equal, he can still be defeated by Lucifel.

So Franz woke up God, told Him everything he and Alex knew, and Lucifel received the punishment of becoming the first fallen angel, and of course, his followers became fallen angels as well. Fallen angels are angels who were thrown away from heaven and lived in the darkest parts of the earth. They’re known as devils by humans.
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Prologue III – The European Age

Human population increased, time passed by and they reached the European Age, the age when Europe became the strongest continent, when colonization started, and when the balance of the earth became unstable because of the fallen angels doings, changing pure hearts to tainted souls. A lot of humans have been overcame by them and started to become insanely evil, and kill others just for the sake of greed.

Seeing the situation, Franz asked God to let him have a human body so he could help the humans to save humanity, Alex asked God the same thing as well, and He then approved of their wishes.

Franz have been born as the King of Europe, and Alex as his younger brother.

[prologue3, to be continued]

Wow i like how this is somewhat "theological" lol. This is pretty interesting. You are a Christian right?

Lol, yeah, I'm catholic.

A pretty long prologue, lol. The real story isn't even starting yet.

hahaha well, I'm looking forward to reading some more

Awesome story, Juliet. So your gonna show us the progress before you hand it over, cool! Can't wait to see the next part!

Edit: I must say, the title made me bust out laughing. It's awesome how specifically relative that is, even though it has nothing to do with the story itself. Lol. But overall, I'm impressed with it's turnout. You really care a lot, even though you seem to say different Lol

Lol, I guess I can't help but care for it. Even though I don't know if he's gonna sell my work behind my back or something, it's still my work so I have to make it good.

Thanks for the compliments guys, I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I won't ever submit it to writer's forums coz I can already imagine what they're going to say lol, I'm sick of their advices. I'm a member of three writers' forums and I also passed some works, so I can kinda... predict what they're going to say.

Woah your layout's pink now! Ahem, anywho...

When do you think the next part will be finished? And that's cool that you can proofread and revise your own stuff like a writer's forum would.

Lol, I tried to make it pinkish rose, but I guess I failed.
Maybe later, or tomorrow. It depends whether I'll be lazy today or not.

Err... not that I'm bashing all the writer's forums around but, I really don't like them. I'de rather stick with an RP forum.

Well, I posted my story on deviantART and most of the criticism I got was constructive criticism. Not much people actually had much for me to work on other than a couple of errors, or maybe redundancy or something like that. It's rather nice to have feedback on those types of websites. Except, I don't really have that many people that do read my work lol

Zeldisaster : I'll postpone it for now, gotta think of the characters' names. ^^

Awesome story Juliet keep up the good work

Prologue III – The European Age

Human population increased, time passed by and they reached the European Age, the age when Europe became the strongest continent, when colonization started, and when the balance of the earth became unstable because of the fallen angels doings, changing pure hearts to tainted souls. A lot of humans have been overcame by them and started to become insanely evil, and kill others just for the sake of greed.

Seeing the situation, Franz asked God to let him have a human body so he could help the humans to save humanity, Alex asked God the same thing as well, and He then approved of
their wishes.

Franz has been born as the King of Northern Europe, King Pheobus Aethelfrith Sandelphionne, and Alex as his younger brother, Leander Rousse Sandelphionne.
Lucifel heard about it, and so he gathered all the energies he can, and turned into a human as well, as the king of Southern Europe, King Tyeson Morell Diomedes y Meceau.

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Prologue IV – The Start of Everything
“We better get back to the castle, Vivienne. I’ll help you put up your hair, and you still have to put on your gown. We can’t be late for your own marriage ceremony. And it’ll be a shame to keep Lord Meceau wait right?”

“Adelphie… can we stay here a little longer? 5 minutes. Please?”

“Okay, okay, 5 minutes. I’ll go there first then follow me after 5 minutes, alright?”

“Alright.”
Smelling the scent of roses in a vast flower garden, as the full moon blooms, a man stepped infront of her, and made the full moon as his background. Stella doesn’t know who the man was, and then he spoke:

“Miss Adalbeorht right? Daughter of Lord Adalbeorht of Romania. Bride of Tyeson.”

“Wh- who are you?”

“No need for that.”

Adelphie had been bored of waiting, so she went back to the flower garden, but she was already late unfortunately.

Hard to pronounce names, but an awesome story nonetheless! Lol. Still can't wait for the next part!