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After Falkner's sudden appearance in the Violet City gym, Chris tackles on Falkner as Cronus experiences his first live gym battle! Find out the outcome, on Johto League Conquest...

Chapter 5: Kikku' em no Kurisu

Falkner stepped on the other side of the arena glancing at the pink haired girl who was looking at Chris nervously. "I'll win...and capture your heart like I did years ago..." He thought to himself tightening his grip on his Pokéball.

"Alright, the gym battle between the leader Falkner, and the challenger Chris of Goldenrod will now begin! You both know the rules, so begin!" The judge declared declared.

"I'm starting off like I did with your girlfriend! Pidgey, get on up there!" Falkner called to his tiny bird Pokémon as it flew towards the field.

Chris glared at him slightly "She's not my girlfriend! Alright buddy let's show him!" Chris tossed out his great ball that bared a star on the top. He released his ghost type friend, Haunter.

"Hmph..." Falkner crossed his arms. "This won't be easy. Pidgey, Gust!" Pidgey flapped it's wings quickly and created a gust and fired it at Haunter. The gust went right through Haunter but it just smiled mischievously. Chris smirked and had an evil look in his eye. He was smiling devilishly as Haunter floated in front of him. Falkner stared in disbelief. He couldn't believe Pidgey had completely missed. Chris had an evil look in his eye and a devilish smile it made everyone tremble.

The pink haired girl was shaking violently "I've never seen....a side of Chris like this....never..."

Cronus looked over at Chris. "What in the world?" he asked himself in disbelief of the situation.

Taro looked back Cronus, then gripped his fist. "This is highly unexplainable. Perhaps, some sort of battle phase the trainer goes through. It should be explained in a bit, hopefully." he said.

"Haunter, hypnosis!" commanded Chris, and his Haunter began giving Pidgey a deep dark stare until Pidgey drop to the ground snoozing away.

"Ugh, Pidgey, come on! Snap out of it!" yelled Falkner, but his Pidgey layed unconscious.

"Haunter, use Dream Eater!" commanded Chris, once again to Haunter and it waving it's hands and closed it's eyes. Pidgey woke up into a dizzy stance and flopped backwards.

"Gah, Pidgey! Sorry, return!" Pidgey was taken back into the Pokéball and took out another Pokéball. "Help us out Pidgeot!" he yelled.

"Fwahhh!" yelled Pidgeot as it flew out and took a flight stance.

"Pidgeot, wing attack, now!" commanded Falkner. Pidgeot then, flew straight towards Haunter but, Haunter merely vanished into thin air. "No....!" said Falkner.

"Haunter, Confuse Ray!" yelled Chris. Pidgeot came to a stop and Haunter appeared right in front of Pidgeot and starred it in the eye. Thus, leaving Pidgeot wandering into a deep confusion.

Falkner gripped his fist and commanded, "Pidgeot, mirror coat!" yet, Pidgeot flew straight into a wall ignoring every word it's master said.

Chris simply gave an evil smiled and crossed his arms. "Go, give it your best!" he yelled in arrogance.

"You don't know when to give up! Pidgeot whirlwind!" Falkner yelled but Haunter had disappeared. "I cringed back knowing it'd miss anyway. I stand alone here on the battlefield. I nearly had Pidgeot faint. Darn, Just Darn it! Falkner thought to himself."

Finally, It was over. Falkner had conceded with defeat. He then walked towards Chris and left his hand out with the Zephyr Badge as proof of Chris' victory.

"Hmph, your strong Chris." Falkner he said. Chris had his eyes shut with arms crossed once he put the badge in his badge case, the judge was studying his badge case, whilst the pink haired girl was peeking over his shoulder and the girl who battled Falkner previously was behind him with her eyes shining in the dawn's sun light.

"Well if you want to head for the next gym take that path there. The path is through rocky mountains so be careful" Falkner told them.

"Nice battle back there, dude! said Taro in amazement. He then, waved looked towards Cronus. "I guess he's too busy."

Cronus looked at Chris with dislike from far away, "Arrogant...I'll beat him one day." Cronus then glanced at Falkner. "Hey, anytime for a new match? I've been waiting!" he asked.

"Meh, my friends are tired. How about you come on to my place for a cup of tea and we'll have out match afterwards?" asked Falkner.

"...Okay." said Cronus in a disappointed manner.

The trio then walked out the gym and Falkner turned around to lock the gym. "I suppose you two like green tea, no?" he asked.

"Green tea is fine." replied Taro, eagerly.

"Well, then, let's go!" said Falkner. The trio then reached a small home which looked like all the others, except this one had only one landing.

"Why such a small place?" asked Cronus.

"Actually, I have another landing down below! It's where me and my Pokémon can have private matches instead of being watched at the gym. Think of it as a dojo." replied Falkner.

"Awesome!" said Taro. He then walked into the home looked around. "Wow, it's so fragrant here."

"Thank you very much, find a set if you please it can get crowded easily. I for one, have to rest up my Pokémon up at the Pokémon Center. I'll be back in a jiffy." said Falkner as he exited his house. He then peeped back in. "The tea is in the pot over there on the steel grate." he said followed by finally leaving his house.

"Well, what now?" said Taro, absent minded.

"Tea of course!" replied Cronus as he stood up and walked over to the steel grate. "Okay, we'll need cups so..." Cronus looked up at a cup board and opened it to only find fancy tea cups with some sort of foreign handwriting on them with gorgeous blue pattering. "I bet these are it." he then served tea for both Taro and him. "I can't wait to battle Falkner! It's gonna be so epic!"

"And if you lose?" asked Taro with a clever look on his face.

"Not funny, I'm gonna win, hopefully..." replied Cronus, nervously. "He's right, what if I do lose, this is my first match too. I'm sure I'll make out fine!" Cronus thought to himself.

"Well, then! Props to you for bravery and confidence! Once Falkner walks in, it's battle time!" said Taro.

"Say, don't you want to battle him too? You know, for a badge? wondered Cronus.

"No way, I'm trying to become a Pokémon Professor! I don't want badges! I want to explore. That's why I tagged along in the first place. I know you're going to travel far and wide, so if I come along I'll do so as well." said Taro.

"I see. Hmm, okay then! I won't give up! Promise we'll travel together?" asked Cronus.

"Promise!" said Taro. "Hey! Look Falkner is back!" he said while quickly glancing at Falkner.

"Wow, quick eyes, man." said Falkner. "How is the tea?"

"Good. In fact, it's gotten me in the mood for our battle." Cronus said with a confident smile.

"Awww, so quick! Meh, you trainers are like this anyway. Alright, let's go! said Falkner as Taro and Cronus stood up and followed him out to his gym.

Can Cronus win his first Pokémon gym battle, or will he utterly fail and forever rue his defeat? Find out next week on Johto League Conquest.

Author's Pins: Did you ever notice that Taro acts a lot more like Crono himself. It turns out, Crono likes to add a little spice to the deuteragonist, . Another thing is, our future Cronus rival Cole, will be included in the group and will "________" Cronus and Taro on their adventures! First person to get the hidden word in the blank gets 250 Viz. Well, that's Author's Pins and Sayonara!
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After Falkner's sudden appearance in the Violet City gym, Chris tackles on Falkner as Cronus experiences his first live gym battle! Find out the outcome, on Johto League Conquest...

Chapter 5: Kikku' em no Kurisu

Falkner stepped on the other side of the arena glancing at the pink haired girl who was looking at Chris nervously. "I'll win...and capture your heart like I did years ago..." He thought to himself tightening his grip on his Pokéball.

"Alright, the gym battle between the leader Falkner, and the challenger Chris of Goldenrod will now begin! You both know the rules, so begin!" The judge declared declared.

"I'm starting off like I did with your girlfriend! Pidgey, get on up there!" Falkner called to his tiny bird Pokémon as it flew towards the field.

Chris glared at him slightly "She's not my girlfriend! Alright buddy let's show him!" Chris tossed out his great ball that bared a star on the top. He released his ghost type friend, Haunter.

"Hmph..." Falkner crossed his arms. "This won't be easy. Pidgey, Gust!" Pidgey flapped it's wings quickly and created a gust and fired it at Haunter. The gust went right through Haunter but it just smiled mischievously. Chris smirked and had an evil look in his eye. He was smiling devilishly as Haunter floated in front of him. Falkner stared in disbelief. He couldn't believe Pidgey had completely missed. Chris had an evil look in his eye and a devilish smile it made everyone tremble.

The pink haired girl was shaking violently "I've never seen....a side of Chris like this....never..."

Cronus looked over at Chris. "What in the world?" he asked himself in disbelief of the situation.

Taro looked back Cronus, then gripped his fist. "This is highly unexplainable. Perhaps, some sort of battle phase the trainer goes through. It should be explained in a bit, hopefully." he said.

"Haunter, hypnosis!" commanded Chris, and his Haunter began giving Pidgey a deep dark stare until Pidgey drop to the ground snoozing away.

"Ugh, Pidgey, come on! Snap out of it!" yelled Falkner, but his Pidgey layed unconscious.

"Haunter, use Dream Eater!" commanded Chris, once again to Haunter and it waving it's hands and closed it's eyes. Pidgey woke up into a dizzy stance and flopped backwards.

"Gah, Pidgey! Sorry, return!" Pidgey was taken back into the Pokéball and took out another Pokéball. "Help us out Pidgeot!" he yelled.

"Fwahhh!" yelled Pidgeot as it flew out and took a flight stance.

"Pidgeot, wing attack, now!" commanded Falkner. Pidgeot then, flew straight towards Haunter but, Haunter merely vanished into thin air. "No....!" said Falkner.

"Haunter, Confuse Ray!" yelled Chris. Pidgeot came to a stop and Haunter appeared right in front of Pidgeot and starred it in the eye. Thus, leaving Pidgeot wandering into a deep confusion.

Falkner gripped his fist and commanded, "Pidgeot, mirror coat!" yet, Pidgeot flew straight into a wall ignoring every word it's master said.

Chris simply gave an evil smiled and crossed his arms. "Go, give it your best!" he yelled in arrogance.

"You don't know when to give up! Pidgeot whirlwind!" Falkner yelled but Haunter had disappeared. "I cringed back knowing it'd miss anyway. I stand alone here on the battlefield. I nearly had Pidgeot faint. Darn, Just Darn it! Falkner thought to himself."

Finally, It was over. Falkner had conceded with defeat. He then walked towards Chris and left his hand out with the Zephyr Badge as proof of Chris' victory.

"Hmph, your strong Chris." Falkner he said. Chris had his eyes shut with arms crossed once he put the badge in his badge case, the judge was studying his badge case, whilst the pink haired girl was peeking over his shoulder and the girl who battled Falkner previously was behind him with her eyes shining in the dawn's sun light.

"Well if you want to head for the next gym take that path there. The path is through rocky mountains so be careful" Falkner told them.

"Nice battle back there, dude! said Taro in amazement. He then, waved looked towards Cronus. "I guess he's too busy."

Cronus looked at Chris with dislike from far away, "Arrogant...I'll beat him one day." Cronus then glanced at Falkner. "Hey, anytime for a new match? I've been waiting!" he asked.

"Meh, my friends are tired. How about you come on to my place for a cup of tea and we'll have out match afterwards?" asked Falkner.

"...Okay." said Cronus in a disappointed manner.

The trio then walked out the gym and Falkner turned around to lock the gym. "I suppose you two like green tea, no?" he asked.

"Green tea is fine." replied Taro, eagerly.

"Well, then, let's go!" said Falkner. The trio then reached a small home which looked like all the others, except this one had only one landing.

"Why such a small place?" asked Cronus.

"Actually, I have another landing down below! It's where me and my Pokémon can have private matches instead of being watched at the gym. Think of it as a dojo." replied Falkner.

"Awesome!" said Taro. He then walked into the home looked around. "Wow, it's so fragrant here."

"Thank you very much, find a set if you please it can get crowded easily. I for one, have to rest up my Pokémon up at the Pokémon Center. I'll be back in a jiffy." said Falkner as he exited his house. He then peeped back in. "The tea is in the pot over there on the steel grate." he said followed by finally leaving his house.

"Well, what now?" said Taro, absent minded.

"Tea of course!" replied Cronus as he stood up and walked over to the steel grate. "Okay, we'll need cups so..." Cronus looked up at a cup board and opened it to only find fancy tea cups with some sort of foreign handwriting on them with gorgeous blue pattering. "I bet these are it." he then served tea for both Taro and him. "I can't wait to battle Falkner! It's gonna be so epic!"

"And if you lose?" asked Taro with a clever look on his face.

"Not funny, I'm gonna win, hopefully..." replied Cronus, nervously. "He's right, what if I do lose, this is my first match too. I'm sure I'll make out fine!" Cronus thought to himself.

"Well, then! Props to you for bravery and confidence! Once Falkner walks in, it's battle time!" said Taro.

"Say, don't you want to battle him too? You know, for a badge? wondered Cronus.

"No way, I'm trying to become a Pokémon Professor! I don't want badges! I want to explore. That's why I tagged along in the first place. I know you're going to travel far and wide, so if I come along I'll do so as well." said Taro.

"I see. Hmm, okay then! I won't give up! Promise we'll travel together?" asked Cronus.

"Promise!" said Taro. "Hey! Look Falkner is back!" he said while quickly glancing at Falkner.

"Wow, quick eyes, man." said Falkner. "How is the tea?"

"Good. In fact, it's gotten me in the mood for our battle." Cronus said with a confident smile.

"Awww, so quick! Meh, you trainers are like this anyway. Alright, let's go! said Falkner as Taro and Cronus stood up and followed him out to his gym.

Can Cronus win his first Pokémon gym battle, or will he utterly fail and forever rue his defeat? Find out next week on Johto League Conquest.

Author's Pins: Did you ever notice that Taro acts a lot more like Crono himself. It turns out, Crono likes to add a little spice to the deuteragonist, . Another thing is, our future Cronus rival Cole, will be included in the group and will "________" Cronus and Taro on their adventures! First person to get the hidden word in the blank gets 250 Viz. Well, that's Author's Pins and Sayonara!
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Nice chapter!
Wow, this turned out to be a shocking episode, when Pidgeot didn't hit Haunter once!
I like these stories.
Nice chapter!
Wow, this turned out to be a shocking episode, when Pidgeot didn't hit Haunter once!
I like these stories.
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Once I saw the Haunter, I knew the kid was gonna win XD. I was a little surprised that gust and wing attack didn't do anything though hahaha.
Once I saw the Haunter, I knew the kid was gonna win XD. I was a little surprised that gust and wing attack didn't do anything though hahaha.
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You'll learn more about THAT boy later in the perhaps in chapter 7 or 6.
You'll learn more about THAT boy later in the perhaps in chapter 7 or 6.
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I can't wait for the next chapter!
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Crono : has anyone gotten the hidden word? if not im gana guess "join"
Crono : has anyone gotten the hidden word? if not im gana guess "join"
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Yes, Crono was did that to see who ACTUALLY read all the way through. But, he can see not many people did. Well, you WIN! 250Viz for you! HOHOHOHO!
Yes, Crono was did that to see who ACTUALLY read all the way through. But, he can see not many people did. Well, you WIN! 250Viz for you! HOHOHOHO!
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Crono : yay! thanks lol its a good story so far i hope the next chapter comes soon
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I like this story, a lot, so Imma sticky it as a good example of what should be in this forum.

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I like this story, a lot, so Imma sticky it as a good example of what should be in this forum.

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Alex, thank you very much~! In fact, because of that Crono thinks he won't need a forum for it anymore, ^-^. Oh, and guys, it will have to be delayed 'til this Saturday or Sunday because of house drama. Really hadn't had the time to type down a good chapter. Crono knows you want to see how Cronus and Falkners battle will turn out. In fact, it's almost done.
Alex, thank you very much~! In fact, because of that Crono thinks he won't need a forum for it anymore, ^-^. Oh, and guys, it will have to be delayed 'til this Saturday or Sunday because of house drama. Really hadn't had the time to type down a good chapter. Crono knows you want to see how Cronus and Falkners battle will turn out. In fact, it's almost done.
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Can't wait for the next chapter!
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Crono is terribly sorry for the Chapter delay, guys! Crono only has SO much time on the computer lately. He has Summer homework to do so he can help boost his grade for a nice headstart in school this year. Therefore, the chapter will be up soon, and yes Crono will continue the Fan Fic. Sorry, ¬¬"
Crono is terribly sorry for the Chapter delay, guys! Crono only has SO much time on the computer lately. He has Summer homework to do so he can help boost his grade for a nice headstart in school this year. Therefore, the chapter will be up soon, and yes Crono will continue the Fan Fic. Sorry, ¬¬"
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No problem, just update when you're ready.
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Hey i like your story a lot. I have a story too but its more of a monologue type one. There isn't any dialogue or anything. But its my first ever story so yea. But i like the way you write. Maybe we could talk and compare ideas ?
Hey i like your story a lot. I have a story too but its more of a monologue type one. There isn't any dialogue or anything. But its my first ever story so yea. But i like the way you write. Maybe we could talk and compare ideas ?
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Nice story, I really like it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Nice story, I really like it! Can't wait for the next chapter!
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I do not want this valuable thread to die!
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RedMageCole : wtf? what was the point in that? its stickied so i dont think its going to die
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10-02-10 06:49 PM
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People~! If Crono is still on Vizzed then it won't die. But, he doesn't have as much time work on chapters as he had in the Summer. Crono gets a lot of Weekend homework too ya' know. Hopefully, there will be free time to work on it. Crono only has limited time on the computer a day. :'(
People~! If Crono is still on Vizzed then it won't die. But, he doesn't have as much time work on chapters as he had in the Summer. Crono gets a lot of Weekend homework too ya' know. Hopefully, there will be free time to work on it. Crono only has limited time on the computer a day. :'(
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10-09-10 06:10 PM
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Same here. I don't have as much time to sork on other things recently because of hmwk and other stuff. Good luck with the next chapters.
Same here. I don't have as much time to sork on other things recently because of hmwk and other stuff. Good luck with the next chapters.
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11-01-10 04:48 PM
Crono is Offline
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Actually guys, sorry for taking so long. But, it turns out Crono has been writing loads of chapters on Notepad and plans to post them eventually, but they need editing. That aside, just to give you the heads up THIS STORY STILL LIVES.
Actually guys, sorry for taking so long. But, it turns out Crono has been writing loads of chapters on Notepad and plans to post them eventually, but they need editing. That aside, just to give you the heads up THIS STORY STILL LIVES.
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