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I have plenty of fanfics to work on... and I did this lol

I ended up wanting to write a fanfic based on a two voice poem I wrote and as much as I want to post that poem, idek how to format it here without screwing that up.

And thanks to 
Eirinn :
For indirectly giving me an idea on making this fanfic a Harvest Moon fanfic. 

This is one side of the two voiced poem. The other side will be published later. 
(and have fun guessing what the other side will be on~)
~~~

I was once her friend

I met her during science class back in middle school. A girl with long, silk black hair and wearing glasses was my science partner. She was really shy upon meeting her, but I saw she owned a manga in her bookbag. Curiously, I asked her about it.

“What are you reading?” That was the first time I ever spoke to her.

“H-huh?”

She looked at me with her brown eyes, and she almost hesitated to speak to me. It was really cute.

“I’m reading Gundam. Why?”

“So you like mecha stories,” I assumed. She nodded. I decided I already like this girl. “I’m Mark,” I introduced myself.

“I’m Sabrina,” she answered meekly. The bell rang, and she simply packed up, but not before saying bye to me. I followed her out of the classroom, and I saw her join a girl with brown hair.
~~~
Now
She’s my girlfriend!

It was a little over three months after Lanna broke up with me. To say that didn’t hurt was a lie. I had thought she was the one, but after six months, I discovered she only wanted me just so she can be close to Danny.

I haven’t talk to either of them since, and I was forced to watch the two be happy to each other.

Through the pain, Sabrina never left my side, and I finally began to see her in a different light.

When I first saw her in middle school, I thought she was simply cute. Years later, in my senior year of highschool, I began to think she was really pretty. Something about her just made me realize just how wonderful she is and how lucky I am to have her.

I decided to see what she’d say if I confessed to her.

On a typical autumn day, as the leaves fell, I took her to the park downtown, and as we chattered endlessly, talking about the books, anime, and games we love, I admitted my true feelings to her.

“To be honestly, I really like you.”

Softly, she said the words I was hoping to hear.

“I like you too.”

Our hands locked into each other’s hold, and in the cool weather, we walked together happily, our hearts feeling warm.
~~~
She is
A beauty,
Kindhearted
Kind of girl who
Will do anything for me.

As winter approached, I was swarmed with work, so I couldn’t spend time with Sabrina as much as I wanted to. At the time, Elliot had helped me get a job at a local food convenience store, so I’ve worked with applications to multiple colleges. It was great applying and getting more money and all, but I was unable to spend my time with my girl.

On Christmas Eve, I got out early, and when I left the store, Sabrina was standing in front of me. She wore her favorite pink coat, and dressed in her beautiful winter dress, gazing at me with her beautiful eyes. In her hands held a bag.

“For Christmas, I would like to have a dinner with you,” she said with a smile. I knew I was so lucky to have a girl like her.
~~~
She even left her for me.

I hate her.

I absolutely hate Sabrina’s friend.

When I finally got to know her, she was really nice at first. She was so caring and thoughtful. We even played games together, and pulled pranks on each other. It wasn’t long until I heard my friends talk about me and her.

“They seem like a good couple, don’t you think?”

Some time after I ended my friendship with her, Sabrina did the same thing, choosing to always be with me.
~~~
That girl was
Obsessive
Clingy
Friend I threw away


After I rejected her feelings for me, she slowly became obsessive towards me. Always wanting my attention, chasing away every single girl who got near me, and even telling others she and I were dating. I knew that last one was true when I heard the people around me talk about us as a couple.

I couldn’t stand it.

I got tired of it.

I cut off all contact with her and told her myself, “I don’t want you as a friend anymore. Don’t talk to me.”

I never spoke to her again afterwards.
~~~
Even then, she
Remained loyal to me

After I ended things with her, there was talk among my friends. I don’t understand it. My friends were saying I was in the wrong. They said she was innocent. They said she had done nothing wrong, and I should’ve been more supportive.

Sabrina wasn’t one of those people.

When everyone said I was at fault for my relationship with that girl, Sabrina always listened to me.

When I started dating Lanna and felt happiness, Sabrina always smiled when I spoke of my dates with her.

When Lanna broke up with me, Sabrina always comforted me as I cried in her arms.
~~~
And finally
She ended things with
Her
For me

Months after I left her, I noticed Sabrina feeling unusually stoic. Of course, she was shy, but even she wasn’t this unnaturally quiet. I got her to consult to me one day.

“I don’t know what to do with her anymore,” she began. “I feel she wants me to leave you behind just because of what you did to her,” she told me.

“Sabrina,” I started to tell her. “If she’s pressuring you to do things you don’t like, then she’s not worth it.”

The next day, she came up to me with a smile. “I’m done with her,” she told me. “I told her it was over.”

I was surprised. I never thought she would have ended everything she had with her just to be with me.
~~~
It doesn’t matter anymore
She’s my loving girlfriend
and I’ll treasure her.

As the spring flowers bloom and the trees restored its leaves, Sabrina and I walked together, hand in hand. As prom was coming up, she and I dressed up, wearing our best clothes. Sabrina had her hair up and curled, and I wore my favorite tux.

My mother took pictures of us, telling us how wonderful we look. My father smiled proudly.

Sabrina and I had the greatest night we could possibly have. We danced and bonded with our friends, and at midnight, we shared a blissful kiss under the moonlight. Nothing could ruin this moment.

Not even her.
~~~
She doesn’t need that girl.

Sabrina deserves the best, and I know I can give everything she ever needs to her. That girl can never do such a thing for Sabrina anymore.

Sabrina doesn’t need her ever again.
I have plenty of fanfics to work on... and I did this lol

I ended up wanting to write a fanfic based on a two voice poem I wrote and as much as I want to post that poem, idek how to format it here without screwing that up.

And thanks to 
Eirinn :
For indirectly giving me an idea on making this fanfic a Harvest Moon fanfic. 

This is one side of the two voiced poem. The other side will be published later. 
(and have fun guessing what the other side will be on~)
~~~

I was once her friend

I met her during science class back in middle school. A girl with long, silk black hair and wearing glasses was my science partner. She was really shy upon meeting her, but I saw she owned a manga in her bookbag. Curiously, I asked her about it.

“What are you reading?” That was the first time I ever spoke to her.

“H-huh?”

She looked at me with her brown eyes, and she almost hesitated to speak to me. It was really cute.

“I’m reading Gundam. Why?”

“So you like mecha stories,” I assumed. She nodded. I decided I already like this girl. “I’m Mark,” I introduced myself.

“I’m Sabrina,” she answered meekly. The bell rang, and she simply packed up, but not before saying bye to me. I followed her out of the classroom, and I saw her join a girl with brown hair.
~~~
Now
She’s my girlfriend!

It was a little over three months after Lanna broke up with me. To say that didn’t hurt was a lie. I had thought she was the one, but after six months, I discovered she only wanted me just so she can be close to Danny.

I haven’t talk to either of them since, and I was forced to watch the two be happy to each other.

Through the pain, Sabrina never left my side, and I finally began to see her in a different light.

When I first saw her in middle school, I thought she was simply cute. Years later, in my senior year of highschool, I began to think she was really pretty. Something about her just made me realize just how wonderful she is and how lucky I am to have her.

I decided to see what she’d say if I confessed to her.

On a typical autumn day, as the leaves fell, I took her to the park downtown, and as we chattered endlessly, talking about the books, anime, and games we love, I admitted my true feelings to her.

“To be honestly, I really like you.”

Softly, she said the words I was hoping to hear.

“I like you too.”

Our hands locked into each other’s hold, and in the cool weather, we walked together happily, our hearts feeling warm.
~~~
She is
A beauty,
Kindhearted
Kind of girl who
Will do anything for me.

As winter approached, I was swarmed with work, so I couldn’t spend time with Sabrina as much as I wanted to. At the time, Elliot had helped me get a job at a local food convenience store, so I’ve worked with applications to multiple colleges. It was great applying and getting more money and all, but I was unable to spend my time with my girl.

On Christmas Eve, I got out early, and when I left the store, Sabrina was standing in front of me. She wore her favorite pink coat, and dressed in her beautiful winter dress, gazing at me with her beautiful eyes. In her hands held a bag.

“For Christmas, I would like to have a dinner with you,” she said with a smile. I knew I was so lucky to have a girl like her.
~~~
She even left her for me.

I hate her.

I absolutely hate Sabrina’s friend.

When I finally got to know her, she was really nice at first. She was so caring and thoughtful. We even played games together, and pulled pranks on each other. It wasn’t long until I heard my friends talk about me and her.

“They seem like a good couple, don’t you think?”

Some time after I ended my friendship with her, Sabrina did the same thing, choosing to always be with me.
~~~
That girl was
Obsessive
Clingy
Friend I threw away


After I rejected her feelings for me, she slowly became obsessive towards me. Always wanting my attention, chasing away every single girl who got near me, and even telling others she and I were dating. I knew that last one was true when I heard the people around me talk about us as a couple.

I couldn’t stand it.

I got tired of it.

I cut off all contact with her and told her myself, “I don’t want you as a friend anymore. Don’t talk to me.”

I never spoke to her again afterwards.
~~~
Even then, she
Remained loyal to me

After I ended things with her, there was talk among my friends. I don’t understand it. My friends were saying I was in the wrong. They said she was innocent. They said she had done nothing wrong, and I should’ve been more supportive.

Sabrina wasn’t one of those people.

When everyone said I was at fault for my relationship with that girl, Sabrina always listened to me.

When I started dating Lanna and felt happiness, Sabrina always smiled when I spoke of my dates with her.

When Lanna broke up with me, Sabrina always comforted me as I cried in her arms.
~~~
And finally
She ended things with
Her
For me

Months after I left her, I noticed Sabrina feeling unusually stoic. Of course, she was shy, but even she wasn’t this unnaturally quiet. I got her to consult to me one day.

“I don’t know what to do with her anymore,” she began. “I feel she wants me to leave you behind just because of what you did to her,” she told me.

“Sabrina,” I started to tell her. “If she’s pressuring you to do things you don’t like, then she’s not worth it.”

The next day, she came up to me with a smile. “I’m done with her,” she told me. “I told her it was over.”

I was surprised. I never thought she would have ended everything she had with her just to be with me.
~~~
It doesn’t matter anymore
She’s my loving girlfriend
and I’ll treasure her.

As the spring flowers bloom and the trees restored its leaves, Sabrina and I walked together, hand in hand. As prom was coming up, she and I dressed up, wearing our best clothes. Sabrina had her hair up and curled, and I wore my favorite tux.

My mother took pictures of us, telling us how wonderful we look. My father smiled proudly.

Sabrina and I had the greatest night we could possibly have. We danced and bonded with our friends, and at midnight, we shared a blissful kiss under the moonlight. Nothing could ruin this moment.

Not even her.
~~~
She doesn’t need that girl.

Sabrina deserves the best, and I know I can give everything she ever needs to her. That girl can never do such a thing for Sabrina anymore.

Sabrina doesn’t need her ever again.
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Yay! I am... inspirational. :3

I'm not sure what to think of this guy. It seems he's a genuinely nice guy at first, but the way he talks about "her" toward the end in relation to Sabrina makes me wonder if he's secretly controlling. .__. Hopefully the second voice clears up the matter. I really hope he's cool like he seemed at first.


Anyway, nice work, Aria. I always enjoy seeing you post a fanfic. They offer a look at things I'm interested in, but from a different angle than I would have looked at them myself. Always fun even when they make Muffy a Monster and I never get over it. Right it plz.
Yay! I am... inspirational. :3

I'm not sure what to think of this guy. It seems he's a genuinely nice guy at first, but the way he talks about "her" toward the end in relation to Sabrina makes me wonder if he's secretly controlling. .__. Hopefully the second voice clears up the matter. I really hope he's cool like he seemed at first.


Anyway, nice work, Aria. I always enjoy seeing you post a fanfic. They offer a look at things I'm interested in, but from a different angle than I would have looked at them myself. Always fun even when they make Muffy a Monster and I never get over it. Right it plz.
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