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A Nod to the Fallen Human. (Undertale)

 

02-27-17 11:21 PM
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One short story long ago,
a human fell beneath,
under the mountain's peak.
I couldn't reach for them,
Oh such danger they were in,
I could not process this,
How could they be nice again?
After the great war..
This was something I adored.

Somewhere near the mountain peak,
there was no-one who could speak,
understanding that they are dead,
All the monsters turned to dust,
It seems it's now rust.
I now dont expect that spark,
How could they have committed this crime?
Even after they made friends, they did it all again.
Killing all who they could see.
What happened to their family?
Was this for their own gain?
And if it was I cant blame.
They might soon be trapped like me.

One more time they fell below.
Doing Pacifism and making friends.
But then I saw the door,
and now I'm not a bore.
Now I'm free like all the rest.
I hope they dont Reset.
Leave this world like it is.
This was all for them...


{END}
{Created by Sonic123amy1}
{Poem was tuned to the song Memory (UT OST)}
{Thanks for reading!}

Image upload: 736x954 totaling 37 KB's.
One short story long ago,
a human fell beneath,
under the mountain's peak.
I couldn't reach for them,
Oh such danger they were in,
I could not process this,
How could they be nice again?
After the great war..
This was something I adored.

Somewhere near the mountain peak,
there was no-one who could speak,
understanding that they are dead,
All the monsters turned to dust,
It seems it's now rust.
I now dont expect that spark,
How could they have committed this crime?
Even after they made friends, they did it all again.
Killing all who they could see.
What happened to their family?
Was this for their own gain?
And if it was I cant blame.
They might soon be trapped like me.

One more time they fell below.
Doing Pacifism and making friends.
But then I saw the door,
and now I'm not a bore.
Now I'm free like all the rest.
I hope they dont Reset.
Leave this world like it is.
This was all for them...


{END}
{Created by Sonic123amy1}
{Poem was tuned to the song Memory (UT OST)}
{Thanks for reading!}

Image upload: 736x954 totaling 37 KB's.
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undertale is dead
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02-28-17 12:18 AM
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yoshirulez! : Undertale isn't dead till the fandom loses interest, and it hasn't.
yoshirulez! : Undertale isn't dead till the fandom loses interest, and it hasn't.
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As i said in chat, in my opinion, this was a really good poem. I liked how you included all of the kinds of gameplay modes in the poem, and it makes me really wanna play the game someday. Good job!
As i said in chat, in my opinion, this was a really good poem. I liked how you included all of the kinds of gameplay modes in the poem, and it makes me really wanna play the game someday. Good job!
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Thanks! This poem was similar to the one I have on my iPad but its different yet similar. The poem took 20 minutes to create.
Thanks! This poem was similar to the one I have on my iPad but its different yet similar. The poem took 20 minutes to create.
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Khfan_D98 : I'm also very surprised how I didnt spoil any of the game, how is this?!
Khfan_D98 : I'm also very surprised how I didnt spoil any of the game, how is this?!
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Pretty good poem until the fan art at the end. I though it was kind of cheesy, but that's just me. I don't particularly like fan art.
Pretty good poem until the fan art at the end. I though it was kind of cheesy, but that's just me. I don't particularly like fan art.
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