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As many of you have been waiting here is the first chapter of this horrible spin-off series I have created. So I hope you enjoy and I hope it isn't too trashy. : D sit back and have some laughs. 

Season 1: Chapter 1 - new beginnings
One month after outbreak.

POV Jax

            Marvin sat at the table, eating his curds and wyne. Staring, staring deeply into the never ending abyss outside our window. He’s been sitting there for some time. Every morning, every night. I do not know what he’s looking for, what he is hoping for… but then maybe again that is what he is waiting for; hope. What else is there. Once hope was lost the colony starting dropping out quickly.

 

At first it was just one lunatic here and there but then the lunatics became the normal and we began to realize only the ones with any hope left were considered the lunies. I’ve been racking my brain for hours trying to come up with one single solution, but none came close to arousing my conscious. My body needs to feed off the hope that Marv’s correct, and that we won’t just die and perish here alone.

POV Marvin

            “Jax… I can’t do this anymore. I’m sick and tired of just waiting for someone to come for us. This is complete bulls***, no one is going to save us, except for ourselves.” I start to sit up from the rickety wooden chair, rocking the table as I stand. I start to point out towards the window. “Those things out there are going to kill us, maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but someday and when they do it’s going to be painful and slow. Unless you and I do something about it.” I walk over towards him, stepping lightly as to not make anymore noise. “I want to survive Jax, I want us both to survive. But we can’t do that unless we try.”

            “What do you even mean! This is surviving, if you didn’t know Marv. Are we dead? No! Did we turn? No! So I don’t understand what you’re trying to tell me, okay!” He starts to pace frantically stressing out. “What we have here isn’t it good enough for you? *He sniffles* We’re both alive and we still have tons of supplies left to last us at least a year. So why can’t you see that we’re perfectly….” His answer was cut short by slamming on the door. The dead ones must have heard us arguing.

            “Hey, we need to go.” I say grabbing the two backpacks on the window sill. “That door won’t hold for long, this building is ancient, and look I’m sorry I really am, but this isn’t living for me. I wish it was, but it never could be.” I grab his arm pulling him towards me as I trudge through the kitchen trying to go to the second floor. We pass on by a mirror, a beautiful mirror, it portrays the fear on both of our faces perfectly.

            My 5”11 figure followed by his 6ft figure. We aren’t muscular but we are noticeably healthy and fit. My 27 year old, reddish brown hair, mud coloured eyes, and a 5 o’clock shadow. I’m wearing a green and grey flannel with a black undershirt, with a nice grey blue jeans, all accentuated by my cheap looking vans. Jax is 25 and a tad more lanky, basically he’s tall as hell, has grand green eyes, and the strangest brown hair. You’ll always find him fumbling his dumb glasses even though he owns plenty pairs of contacts. And you’ll always find him wearing this obnoxious hoodie from a band called monster cat, with his black jeans and high top converse shoes. Typical hipster I guess you could say.

            We quickly ran by the door hearing it shriek at the dead tear to break it open. As we start running up the stairs I can hear the door slamming open and all the sounds and noises those things makes. Once at the top of the stairs we barricade it with a couch, pushing it down the stairs in a position to make it rigid in place. Hopefully it holds long enough for us to escape I think. At the top of the stairs there is a fork, we run to the right. We then barge into what seems to be an unfinished baby room, taking all the supplies we kept hidden up here, Flashlights, more food, filled water canteens, spare knives, sleeping bags, and finally keys.

            “All right, let’s go they could have climbed up that couch and be making their way up these stairs at this moment.” Hurry close the door and push that drawer in front of it while I look for a clear way out.” Jax quickly nods uncertainty shining through his eyes, I feel bad. I hurry towards the window… “s***, it’s locked. What the hell?” I keep turning the locks but the window still won’t budge. “Jax I’m going to break it, throw me that crowbar.” As I turn around and see him struggling to keep the door closed, they made it to us, maybe we will die here. Walking for eternity never dying only causing death. An abyss of darkness.

            “Marv, help me!” Jax grunts as the door opens then wildly slams closed once more. It takes me a moment to decide what to do. I run past him snatching the crowbar and sprinting back to the window smashing it open. Excitement flares through me as I see the alley under us clear. But as I turn around a sight to behold is before me…

POV Jax

            I’m thankful for everything in my life that has ever happened to me. Whether it was getting beat by my step-mother, learning to trust others for once, or being saved by Marv. I guess this is what they mean by right before you die everything flashes before your eyes. So why do I see Marv in front of me slamming those dead beasts back with a crowbar? No idea but I’m feeling so tired and I want to sleep. “It’s not your time…” I hear a strange voice before I fall into a deep sleep…

Day of Outbreak. 2:00Pm
POV Christa

            “Christiana! Where are you? My daughter, please hurry!” I hear my father’s muffled shouting from underneath the floorboards of my bedroom. I was thoroughly excited and confused to hear about our surprise vacation this morning. I mean school break hasn’t even started yet, it’s like the middle of spring. I finally finish packing my suitcase and backpack full of clothes, iPod, make-up, pepper-spray, all the basic essentials for a 17yr old female. My brother, Gregor, breaks into my room just as I finish topping my ensemble; high top black boots, black tights, or what I like to call leg-socks, a grey skirt, black tank with a leather jacket. Just to top it off as well a nice fedora to cover my curly black hair, which perfectly fits my tan skin. 

            “Gǎnkuài shàngle dìyù (Hurry the hell up)” He yells at me, in our native tongue of chinese, before closing my door. To be honest he can be a total jerk, but I guess that’s just the perk of being an older brother. I grab all my bags before noticing the hiking knife my mother left me. “Sorry mom, but I’m not leaving you behind yet.” I say before shoving the knife in my pocket. I exit my dark navy blue room smudged in painted murals, and enter the dull eggshell coloured main hall. I quickly jog down the stairs before realising I haven’t heard anything in a few minutes, which is even too long for Gregor… “Something’s seems a bit off. Bàba, Nǐ zài nǎ

(Dad, where are you?)

            No answer, definitely strange. I walk toward the front door and look out the peephole… “What the hell!” I scream as I see the neighbours attacking… and EATING my father and brother. “Wh-wha-what the heck is thiss.” My s runs off my tongue as I hear a moaning sound behind me. The back door was wide open, I run over to it leaving my suitcase, I didn’t need the damn thing anyway clothes are overrated, I shut the door and lock it praying my crazy neighbours don’t get me too. I hear the moaning again, I see one of the neighbours, the daughter Tia, walking towards me snapping her teeth. “Get away from me you freak!” I yell at her. She just keeps coming at me though completely unfazed. There is a large bite mark on her arm, it looks painful she’s still bleeding from it. Once she reaches me I kick her away running to the bathroom and locking myself in. I can hear her scratching at the door not giving in.

            I hear a loud crash, footsteps, and the sound of flesh squelching and the growling coming to an end. The silence unnerves me, but I know I just can’t get up and leave or say something stupid like “hello is anyone there” I’ve watched enough horror movies to know that b**** always dies.

            “Yahello, is anyone living in there?” A knock comes from the door making the knob rattle. I know that voice it’s the neighbour’s son, Mags short for Maccabe, he always used to stay in his own world but at least he was nice to me. I don’t answer, obviously, but my breathing heightens. At this point I start hyperventilating thinking (Shut up, shut up, he’s going to hear you idiot!) “s***, I guess the daughter locked and killed herself in the bathroom.” I hear his footsteps start to recede from the door. My breathing finally slows down and I stand up listening for any noises, whether is be from those cannibalistic jerks, or any animals. “Coast seems clear.” I say a little too soon… As one of those things jumps right up at me when I open the door. “s***, s***, s***, s***!” It’s soon on top of me. At this point we’re wrestling with each other, I break its hand… Nothing, I punch its face, again no effect. I flinch backwards as it tried to bite my fingers off. I start to close my eyes finally realizing I’m powerless…

Day of outbreak 12:00Pm
POV Maccabe

            *Muffled Screams* I start to sigh looking out the window at the few rays of the sun streaming through the cracks of shades. My family seems to be at it again. Fighting is all the seem to do lately. I feel really bad for them it seems like they couldn’t feel joy again if they tried. But the only person in this family is affected by their fighting is Maria, my sister. The poor kid is just confused all the time, and she can never understand them. Yet she’s the only thing in the world that can calm them down. Doesn’t matter when or where, she always finds the right thing to do to help mother and father stop fighting, I wish I knew her secret… It’s days like this that make me wish she didn’t have school or lessons, so she could work her magic.

            “Mac, come down here for a moment please.” My mother yells. She’s barely uses that tone anymore, there must be someone here for me. I walk down the stairs each creak getting louder and worse as I reach the bottom of the steps of doom. My mother and father are at the door. “Yes, mom, what is it?” I say in the most polite tone I could conjure up. “Isn’t this one of the neighbour’s boys? He’s been standing here at the door a while, and it’s creeping me out. Ask him to leave.” I walk past them and look on the rock path we have, and standing there is Norton, the really annoying kid 3 houses down, but I barely talk to him so I’m wondering what brought him here in the first place. “Um, hey there Norton. What are you doing here? I mean I was told you have just been standing there, could you, ya know not do that…?” No answer, little s***. I start to walk out of the house towards him. He starts to turn around, as if he just heard me…

            “Holy s***, Norton! What happened dude?!” His face was covered in blood and his cheek looked torn up like a bite mark. He does nothing. I slowly back up, suddenly frightened by this display. Just as I do he starts to stumble towards me. “Fricking creep.” I hear my dad say as he charges past me grabbing Norton by his collar. If just stumbled upon us at this moment it would probably look like my dad just beat this kid’s face in, but that’s not the story. “Get off our property this moment, because I call the cops on you, freak.” He starts shaking Norton in pretend rage to hide his own fright. I start to calm down, considering my dad surely scared him off, or so I thought. Norton being as screwed up as he could be in that moment bit my dad’s hand pretty hard it seems. “Aghh, ouch, you want to play that game you trashy kid!” He started to fist his hands so hard they were turning white even through the blood covering them. “Marco stop he’s just a dumb kid, please let him go.” My mom said worried. But my dad didn’t listen and he smacked Norton, only to get his hand bit once more, even more painful this time. Norton started to hold onto my dad pushing him down grabbing him by the face biting him in the neck. There was blood gushing everywhere on the rock path. My dads pained screeches were drowning out my thoughts entirely I couldn’t think or blink from this horrid sight.

            “Oh my lord jesus, please save us.” My mom said teary eyed and frantic. I run over to Norton and my dad, kicking Norton off him. Then just seeing the life flow away from my dad’s eyes, closing out a light that would never be reborn. “Norton what is wrong with you, you killed my dad you sick freak!” I started attacking him making sure as to not let him bite me, as he somehow had teeth of glass. I keep kicking him but he seems unhurt by every blow. Until I hear metal scraping the rocks and I move around just to see my mother slamming a shovel down on Norton’s head, making a squelching sound as he head blew open revealing blood and brain. “Eye for an eye, Mags.” She said dead serious and emotionless. Even though we just killed the neighbourhood newsboy I didn’t feel any regret, he killed my dad. Mom was right, take a life to save a life. She then ran to my father and started sobbing making the grossest sounds a crying woman could make. Why would God let this happen to us? We were always such big believers.

            He heard me. I think, God heard my fear. My father started to flinch and move. His eyes opened but what wasn’t there was the light of a human person. He wasn’t my father anymore, he was Norton. My mom must have saw this transformation as she screamed and backed away. “N-n-no… You’re DEAD, DIABLO (devil) leave this family you creature of death and hatred! Leave us alone!” She yelled tears streaming down her face. My dead dad started crawling towards her, clamping his mouths as he crawled. He was trying to bite her, like Norton. I saw the shovel a few feet away and made a horrible decision. Kill my father or Stay there in fear.

As many of you have been waiting here is the first chapter of this horrible spin-off series I have created. So I hope you enjoy and I hope it isn't too trashy. : D sit back and have some laughs. 

Season 1: Chapter 1 - new beginnings
One month after outbreak.

POV Jax

            Marvin sat at the table, eating his curds and wyne. Staring, staring deeply into the never ending abyss outside our window. He’s been sitting there for some time. Every morning, every night. I do not know what he’s looking for, what he is hoping for… but then maybe again that is what he is waiting for; hope. What else is there. Once hope was lost the colony starting dropping out quickly.

 

At first it was just one lunatic here and there but then the lunatics became the normal and we began to realize only the ones with any hope left were considered the lunies. I’ve been racking my brain for hours trying to come up with one single solution, but none came close to arousing my conscious. My body needs to feed off the hope that Marv’s correct, and that we won’t just die and perish here alone.

POV Marvin

            “Jax… I can’t do this anymore. I’m sick and tired of just waiting for someone to come for us. This is complete bulls***, no one is going to save us, except for ourselves.” I start to sit up from the rickety wooden chair, rocking the table as I stand. I start to point out towards the window. “Those things out there are going to kill us, maybe not today, maybe not tomorrow, but someday and when they do it’s going to be painful and slow. Unless you and I do something about it.” I walk over towards him, stepping lightly as to not make anymore noise. “I want to survive Jax, I want us both to survive. But we can’t do that unless we try.”

            “What do you even mean! This is surviving, if you didn’t know Marv. Are we dead? No! Did we turn? No! So I don’t understand what you’re trying to tell me, okay!” He starts to pace frantically stressing out. “What we have here isn’t it good enough for you? *He sniffles* We’re both alive and we still have tons of supplies left to last us at least a year. So why can’t you see that we’re perfectly….” His answer was cut short by slamming on the door. The dead ones must have heard us arguing.

            “Hey, we need to go.” I say grabbing the two backpacks on the window sill. “That door won’t hold for long, this building is ancient, and look I’m sorry I really am, but this isn’t living for me. I wish it was, but it never could be.” I grab his arm pulling him towards me as I trudge through the kitchen trying to go to the second floor. We pass on by a mirror, a beautiful mirror, it portrays the fear on both of our faces perfectly.

            My 5”11 figure followed by his 6ft figure. We aren’t muscular but we are noticeably healthy and fit. My 27 year old, reddish brown hair, mud coloured eyes, and a 5 o’clock shadow. I’m wearing a green and grey flannel with a black undershirt, with a nice grey blue jeans, all accentuated by my cheap looking vans. Jax is 25 and a tad more lanky, basically he’s tall as hell, has grand green eyes, and the strangest brown hair. You’ll always find him fumbling his dumb glasses even though he owns plenty pairs of contacts. And you’ll always find him wearing this obnoxious hoodie from a band called monster cat, with his black jeans and high top converse shoes. Typical hipster I guess you could say.

            We quickly ran by the door hearing it shriek at the dead tear to break it open. As we start running up the stairs I can hear the door slamming open and all the sounds and noises those things makes. Once at the top of the stairs we barricade it with a couch, pushing it down the stairs in a position to make it rigid in place. Hopefully it holds long enough for us to escape I think. At the top of the stairs there is a fork, we run to the right. We then barge into what seems to be an unfinished baby room, taking all the supplies we kept hidden up here, Flashlights, more food, filled water canteens, spare knives, sleeping bags, and finally keys.

            “All right, let’s go they could have climbed up that couch and be making their way up these stairs at this moment.” Hurry close the door and push that drawer in front of it while I look for a clear way out.” Jax quickly nods uncertainty shining through his eyes, I feel bad. I hurry towards the window… “s***, it’s locked. What the hell?” I keep turning the locks but the window still won’t budge. “Jax I’m going to break it, throw me that crowbar.” As I turn around and see him struggling to keep the door closed, they made it to us, maybe we will die here. Walking for eternity never dying only causing death. An abyss of darkness.

            “Marv, help me!” Jax grunts as the door opens then wildly slams closed once more. It takes me a moment to decide what to do. I run past him snatching the crowbar and sprinting back to the window smashing it open. Excitement flares through me as I see the alley under us clear. But as I turn around a sight to behold is before me…

POV Jax

            I’m thankful for everything in my life that has ever happened to me. Whether it was getting beat by my step-mother, learning to trust others for once, or being saved by Marv. I guess this is what they mean by right before you die everything flashes before your eyes. So why do I see Marv in front of me slamming those dead beasts back with a crowbar? No idea but I’m feeling so tired and I want to sleep. “It’s not your time…” I hear a strange voice before I fall into a deep sleep…

Day of Outbreak. 2:00Pm
POV Christa

            “Christiana! Where are you? My daughter, please hurry!” I hear my father’s muffled shouting from underneath the floorboards of my bedroom. I was thoroughly excited and confused to hear about our surprise vacation this morning. I mean school break hasn’t even started yet, it’s like the middle of spring. I finally finish packing my suitcase and backpack full of clothes, iPod, make-up, pepper-spray, all the basic essentials for a 17yr old female. My brother, Gregor, breaks into my room just as I finish topping my ensemble; high top black boots, black tights, or what I like to call leg-socks, a grey skirt, black tank with a leather jacket. Just to top it off as well a nice fedora to cover my curly black hair, which perfectly fits my tan skin. 

            “Gǎnkuài shàngle dìyù (Hurry the hell up)” He yells at me, in our native tongue of chinese, before closing my door. To be honest he can be a total jerk, but I guess that’s just the perk of being an older brother. I grab all my bags before noticing the hiking knife my mother left me. “Sorry mom, but I’m not leaving you behind yet.” I say before shoving the knife in my pocket. I exit my dark navy blue room smudged in painted murals, and enter the dull eggshell coloured main hall. I quickly jog down the stairs before realising I haven’t heard anything in a few minutes, which is even too long for Gregor… “Something’s seems a bit off. Bàba, Nǐ zài nǎ

(Dad, where are you?)

            No answer, definitely strange. I walk toward the front door and look out the peephole… “What the hell!” I scream as I see the neighbours attacking… and EATING my father and brother. “Wh-wha-what the heck is thiss.” My s runs off my tongue as I hear a moaning sound behind me. The back door was wide open, I run over to it leaving my suitcase, I didn’t need the damn thing anyway clothes are overrated, I shut the door and lock it praying my crazy neighbours don’t get me too. I hear the moaning again, I see one of the neighbours, the daughter Tia, walking towards me snapping her teeth. “Get away from me you freak!” I yell at her. She just keeps coming at me though completely unfazed. There is a large bite mark on her arm, it looks painful she’s still bleeding from it. Once she reaches me I kick her away running to the bathroom and locking myself in. I can hear her scratching at the door not giving in.

            I hear a loud crash, footsteps, and the sound of flesh squelching and the growling coming to an end. The silence unnerves me, but I know I just can’t get up and leave or say something stupid like “hello is anyone there” I’ve watched enough horror movies to know that b**** always dies.

            “Yahello, is anyone living in there?” A knock comes from the door making the knob rattle. I know that voice it’s the neighbour’s son, Mags short for Maccabe, he always used to stay in his own world but at least he was nice to me. I don’t answer, obviously, but my breathing heightens. At this point I start hyperventilating thinking (Shut up, shut up, he’s going to hear you idiot!) “s***, I guess the daughter locked and killed herself in the bathroom.” I hear his footsteps start to recede from the door. My breathing finally slows down and I stand up listening for any noises, whether is be from those cannibalistic jerks, or any animals. “Coast seems clear.” I say a little too soon… As one of those things jumps right up at me when I open the door. “s***, s***, s***, s***!” It’s soon on top of me. At this point we’re wrestling with each other, I break its hand… Nothing, I punch its face, again no effect. I flinch backwards as it tried to bite my fingers off. I start to close my eyes finally realizing I’m powerless…

Day of outbreak 12:00Pm
POV Maccabe

            *Muffled Screams* I start to sigh looking out the window at the few rays of the sun streaming through the cracks of shades. My family seems to be at it again. Fighting is all the seem to do lately. I feel really bad for them it seems like they couldn’t feel joy again if they tried. But the only person in this family is affected by their fighting is Maria, my sister. The poor kid is just confused all the time, and she can never understand them. Yet she’s the only thing in the world that can calm them down. Doesn’t matter when or where, she always finds the right thing to do to help mother and father stop fighting, I wish I knew her secret… It’s days like this that make me wish she didn’t have school or lessons, so she could work her magic.

            “Mac, come down here for a moment please.” My mother yells. She’s barely uses that tone anymore, there must be someone here for me. I walk down the stairs each creak getting louder and worse as I reach the bottom of the steps of doom. My mother and father are at the door. “Yes, mom, what is it?” I say in the most polite tone I could conjure up. “Isn’t this one of the neighbour’s boys? He’s been standing here at the door a while, and it’s creeping me out. Ask him to leave.” I walk past them and look on the rock path we have, and standing there is Norton, the really annoying kid 3 houses down, but I barely talk to him so I’m wondering what brought him here in the first place. “Um, hey there Norton. What are you doing here? I mean I was told you have just been standing there, could you, ya know not do that…?” No answer, little s***. I start to walk out of the house towards him. He starts to turn around, as if he just heard me…

            “Holy s***, Norton! What happened dude?!” His face was covered in blood and his cheek looked torn up like a bite mark. He does nothing. I slowly back up, suddenly frightened by this display. Just as I do he starts to stumble towards me. “Fricking creep.” I hear my dad say as he charges past me grabbing Norton by his collar. If just stumbled upon us at this moment it would probably look like my dad just beat this kid’s face in, but that’s not the story. “Get off our property this moment, because I call the cops on you, freak.” He starts shaking Norton in pretend rage to hide his own fright. I start to calm down, considering my dad surely scared him off, or so I thought. Norton being as screwed up as he could be in that moment bit my dad’s hand pretty hard it seems. “Aghh, ouch, you want to play that game you trashy kid!” He started to fist his hands so hard they were turning white even through the blood covering them. “Marco stop he’s just a dumb kid, please let him go.” My mom said worried. But my dad didn’t listen and he smacked Norton, only to get his hand bit once more, even more painful this time. Norton started to hold onto my dad pushing him down grabbing him by the face biting him in the neck. There was blood gushing everywhere on the rock path. My dads pained screeches were drowning out my thoughts entirely I couldn’t think or blink from this horrid sight.

            “Oh my lord jesus, please save us.” My mom said teary eyed and frantic. I run over to Norton and my dad, kicking Norton off him. Then just seeing the life flow away from my dad’s eyes, closing out a light that would never be reborn. “Norton what is wrong with you, you killed my dad you sick freak!” I started attacking him making sure as to not let him bite me, as he somehow had teeth of glass. I keep kicking him but he seems unhurt by every blow. Until I hear metal scraping the rocks and I move around just to see my mother slamming a shovel down on Norton’s head, making a squelching sound as he head blew open revealing blood and brain. “Eye for an eye, Mags.” She said dead serious and emotionless. Even though we just killed the neighbourhood newsboy I didn’t feel any regret, he killed my dad. Mom was right, take a life to save a life. She then ran to my father and started sobbing making the grossest sounds a crying woman could make. Why would God let this happen to us? We were always such big believers.

            He heard me. I think, God heard my fear. My father started to flinch and move. His eyes opened but what wasn’t there was the light of a human person. He wasn’t my father anymore, he was Norton. My mom must have saw this transformation as she screamed and backed away. “N-n-no… You’re DEAD, DIABLO (devil) leave this family you creature of death and hatred! Leave us alone!” She yelled tears streaming down her face. My dead dad started crawling towards her, clamping his mouths as he crawled. He was trying to bite her, like Norton. I saw the shovel a few feet away and made a horrible decision. Kill my father or Stay there in fear.

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Summoning my children of the night.

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Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. I just can't tell which character is which Vizzed user. It makes the expierence more fun for me if I know who's who, I dunno.
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Superb work deg! I really enjoyed reading this, please make the second chapter asap heheh, you know, i really wanna know what's up next and i can't wait for the second chapter, nice stuff dude
Superb work deg! I really enjoyed reading this, please make the second chapter asap heheh, you know, i really wanna know what's up next and i can't wait for the second chapter, nice stuff dude
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