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01-11-17 11:43 AM
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As many of you have been waiting here is the first chapter of this horrible spin-off series I have created. So I hope you enjoy and I hope it isn't too trashy. : D sit back and have some laughs. Season 1: Chapter 1 - new beginnings
At first it was just one lunatic here and there but then the lunatics became the normal and we began to realize only the ones with any hope left were considered the lunies. I’ve been racking my brain for hours trying to come up with one single solution, but none came close to arousing my conscious. My body needs to feed off the hope that Marv’s correct, and that we won’t just die and perish here alone. No answer, definitely strange. I walk toward the front door and look out the peephole… “What the hell!” I scream as I see the neighbours attacking… and EATING my father and brother. “Wh-wha-what the heck is thiss.” My s runs off my tongue as I hear a moaning sound behind me. The back door was wide open, I run over to it leaving my suitcase, I didn’t need the damn thing anyway clothes are overrated, I shut the door and lock it praying my crazy neighbours don’t get me too. I hear the moaning again, I see one of the neighbours, the daughter Tia, walking towards me snapping her teeth. “Get away from me you freak!” I yell at her. She just keeps coming at me though completely unfazed. There is a large bite mark on her arm, it looks painful she’s still bleeding from it. Once she reaches me I kick her away running to the bathroom and locking myself in. I can hear her scratching at the door not giving in. I hear a loud crash, footsteps, and the sound of flesh squelching and the growling coming to an end. The silence unnerves me, but I know I just can’t get up and leave or say something stupid like “hello is anyone there” I’ve watched enough horror movies to know that b**** always dies. “Yahello, is anyone living in there?” A knock comes from the door making the knob rattle. I know that voice it’s the neighbour’s son, Mags short for Maccabe, he always used to stay in his own world but at least he was nice to me. I don’t answer, obviously, but my breathing heightens. At this point I start hyperventilating thinking (Shut up, shut up, he’s going to hear you idiot!) “s***, I guess the daughter locked and killed herself in the bathroom.” I hear his footsteps start to recede from the door. My breathing finally slows down and I stand up listening for any noises, whether is be from those cannibalistic jerks, or any animals. “Coast seems clear.” I say a little too soon… As one of those things jumps right up at me when I open the door. “s***, s***, s***, s***!” It’s soon on top of me. At this point we’re wrestling with each other, I break its hand… Nothing, I punch its face, again no effect. I flinch backwards as it tried to bite my fingers off. I start to close my eyes finally realizing I’m powerless… Day of outbreak 12:00Pm POV Maccabe *Muffled Screams* I start to sigh looking out the window at the few rays of the sun streaming through the cracks of shades. My family seems to be at it again. Fighting is all the seem to do lately. I feel really bad for them it seems like they couldn’t feel joy again if they tried. But the only person in this family is affected by their fighting is Maria, my sister. The poor kid is just confused all the time, and she can never understand them. Yet she’s the only thing in the world that can calm them down. Doesn’t matter when or where, she always finds the right thing to do to help mother and father stop fighting, I wish I knew her secret… It’s days like this that make me wish she didn’t have school or lessons, so she could work her magic. “Mac, come down here for a moment please.” My mother yells. She’s barely uses that tone anymore, there must be someone here for me. I walk down the stairs each creak getting louder and worse as I reach the bottom of the steps of doom. My mother and father are at the door. “Yes, mom, what is it?” I say in the most polite tone I could conjure up. “Isn’t this one of the neighbour’s boys? He’s been standing here at the door a while, and it’s creeping me out. Ask him to leave.” I walk past them and look on the rock path we have, and standing there is Norton, the really annoying kid 3 houses down, but I barely talk to him so I’m wondering what brought him here in the first place. “Um, hey there Norton. What are you doing here? I mean I was told you have just been standing there, could you, ya know not do that…?” No answer, little s***. I start to walk out of the house towards him. He starts to turn around, as if he just heard me… “Holy s***, Norton! What happened dude?!” His face was covered in blood and his cheek looked torn up like a bite mark. He does nothing. I slowly back up, suddenly frightened by this display. Just as I do he starts to stumble towards me. “Fricking creep.” I hear my dad say as he charges past me grabbing Norton by his collar. If just stumbled upon us at this moment it would probably look like my dad just beat this kid’s face in, but that’s not the story. “Get off our property this moment, because I call the cops on you, freak.” He starts shaking Norton in pretend rage to hide his own fright. I start to calm down, considering my dad surely scared him off, or so I thought. Norton being as screwed up as he could be in that moment bit my dad’s hand pretty hard it seems. “Aghh, ouch, you want to play that game you trashy kid!” He started to fist his hands so hard they were turning white even through the blood covering them. “Marco stop he’s just a dumb kid, please let him go.” My mom said worried. But my dad didn’t listen and he smacked Norton, only to get his hand bit once more, even more painful this time. Norton started to hold onto my dad pushing him down grabbing him by the face biting him in the neck. There was blood gushing everywhere on the rock path. My dads pained screeches were drowning out my thoughts entirely I couldn’t think or blink from this horrid sight. “Oh my lord jesus, please save us.” My mom said teary eyed and frantic. I run over to Norton and my dad, kicking Norton off him. Then just seeing the life flow away from my dad’s eyes, closing out a light that would never be reborn. “Norton what is wrong with you, you killed my dad you sick freak!” I started attacking him making sure as to not let him bite me, as he somehow had teeth of glass. I keep kicking him but he seems unhurt by every blow. Until I hear metal scraping the rocks and I move around just to see my mother slamming a shovel down on Norton’s head, making a squelching sound as he head blew open revealing blood and brain. “Eye for an eye, Mags.” She said dead serious and emotionless. Even though we just killed the neighbourhood newsboy I didn’t feel any regret, he killed my dad. Mom was right, take a life to save a life. She then ran to my father and started sobbing making the grossest sounds a crying woman could make. Why would God let this happen to us? We were always such big believers. He heard me. I think, God heard my fear. My father started to flinch and move. His eyes opened but what wasn’t there was the light of a human person. He wasn’t my father anymore, he was Norton. My mom must have saw this transformation as she screamed and backed away. “N-n-no… You’re DEAD, DIABLO (devil) leave this family you creature of death and hatred! Leave us alone!” She yelled tears streaming down her face. My dead dad started crawling towards her, clamping his mouths as he crawled. He was trying to bite her, like Norton. I saw the shovel a few feet away and made a horrible decision. Kill my father or Stay there in fear. Season 1: Chapter 1 - new beginnings
At first it was just one lunatic here and there but then the lunatics became the normal and we began to realize only the ones with any hope left were considered the lunies. I’ve been racking my brain for hours trying to come up with one single solution, but none came close to arousing my conscious. My body needs to feed off the hope that Marv’s correct, and that we won’t just die and perish here alone. No answer, definitely strange. I walk toward the front door and look out the peephole… “What the hell!” I scream as I see the neighbours attacking… and EATING my father and brother. “Wh-wha-what the heck is thiss.” My s runs off my tongue as I hear a moaning sound behind me. The back door was wide open, I run over to it leaving my suitcase, I didn’t need the damn thing anyway clothes are overrated, I shut the door and lock it praying my crazy neighbours don’t get me too. I hear the moaning again, I see one of the neighbours, the daughter Tia, walking towards me snapping her teeth. “Get away from me you freak!” I yell at her. She just keeps coming at me though completely unfazed. There is a large bite mark on her arm, it looks painful she’s still bleeding from it. Once she reaches me I kick her away running to the bathroom and locking myself in. I can hear her scratching at the door not giving in. I hear a loud crash, footsteps, and the sound of flesh squelching and the growling coming to an end. The silence unnerves me, but I know I just can’t get up and leave or say something stupid like “hello is anyone there” I’ve watched enough horror movies to know that b**** always dies. “Yahello, is anyone living in there?” A knock comes from the door making the knob rattle. I know that voice it’s the neighbour’s son, Mags short for Maccabe, he always used to stay in his own world but at least he was nice to me. I don’t answer, obviously, but my breathing heightens. At this point I start hyperventilating thinking (Shut up, shut up, he’s going to hear you idiot!) “s***, I guess the daughter locked and killed herself in the bathroom.” I hear his footsteps start to recede from the door. My breathing finally slows down and I stand up listening for any noises, whether is be from those cannibalistic jerks, or any animals. “Coast seems clear.” I say a little too soon… As one of those things jumps right up at me when I open the door. “s***, s***, s***, s***!” It’s soon on top of me. At this point we’re wrestling with each other, I break its hand… Nothing, I punch its face, again no effect. I flinch backwards as it tried to bite my fingers off. I start to close my eyes finally realizing I’m powerless… Day of outbreak 12:00Pm POV Maccabe *Muffled Screams* I start to sigh looking out the window at the few rays of the sun streaming through the cracks of shades. My family seems to be at it again. Fighting is all the seem to do lately. I feel really bad for them it seems like they couldn’t feel joy again if they tried. But the only person in this family is affected by their fighting is Maria, my sister. The poor kid is just confused all the time, and she can never understand them. Yet she’s the only thing in the world that can calm them down. Doesn’t matter when or where, she always finds the right thing to do to help mother and father stop fighting, I wish I knew her secret… It’s days like this that make me wish she didn’t have school or lessons, so she could work her magic. “Mac, come down here for a moment please.” My mother yells. She’s barely uses that tone anymore, there must be someone here for me. I walk down the stairs each creak getting louder and worse as I reach the bottom of the steps of doom. My mother and father are at the door. “Yes, mom, what is it?” I say in the most polite tone I could conjure up. “Isn’t this one of the neighbour’s boys? He’s been standing here at the door a while, and it’s creeping me out. Ask him to leave.” I walk past them and look on the rock path we have, and standing there is Norton, the really annoying kid 3 houses down, but I barely talk to him so I’m wondering what brought him here in the first place. “Um, hey there Norton. What are you doing here? I mean I was told you have just been standing there, could you, ya know not do that…?” No answer, little s***. I start to walk out of the house towards him. He starts to turn around, as if he just heard me… “Holy s***, Norton! What happened dude?!” His face was covered in blood and his cheek looked torn up like a bite mark. He does nothing. I slowly back up, suddenly frightened by this display. Just as I do he starts to stumble towards me. “Fricking creep.” I hear my dad say as he charges past me grabbing Norton by his collar. If just stumbled upon us at this moment it would probably look like my dad just beat this kid’s face in, but that’s not the story. “Get off our property this moment, because I call the cops on you, freak.” He starts shaking Norton in pretend rage to hide his own fright. I start to calm down, considering my dad surely scared him off, or so I thought. Norton being as screwed up as he could be in that moment bit my dad’s hand pretty hard it seems. “Aghh, ouch, you want to play that game you trashy kid!” He started to fist his hands so hard they were turning white even through the blood covering them. “Marco stop he’s just a dumb kid, please let him go.” My mom said worried. But my dad didn’t listen and he smacked Norton, only to get his hand bit once more, even more painful this time. Norton started to hold onto my dad pushing him down grabbing him by the face biting him in the neck. There was blood gushing everywhere on the rock path. My dads pained screeches were drowning out my thoughts entirely I couldn’t think or blink from this horrid sight. “Oh my lord jesus, please save us.” My mom said teary eyed and frantic. I run over to Norton and my dad, kicking Norton off him. Then just seeing the life flow away from my dad’s eyes, closing out a light that would never be reborn. “Norton what is wrong with you, you killed my dad you sick freak!” I started attacking him making sure as to not let him bite me, as he somehow had teeth of glass. I keep kicking him but he seems unhurt by every blow. Until I hear metal scraping the rocks and I move around just to see my mother slamming a shovel down on Norton’s head, making a squelching sound as he head blew open revealing blood and brain. “Eye for an eye, Mags.” She said dead serious and emotionless. Even though we just killed the neighbourhood newsboy I didn’t feel any regret, he killed my dad. Mom was right, take a life to save a life. She then ran to my father and started sobbing making the grossest sounds a crying woman could make. Why would God let this happen to us? We were always such big believers. He heard me. I think, God heard my fear. My father started to flinch and move. His eyes opened but what wasn’t there was the light of a human person. He wasn’t my father anymore, he was Norton. My mom must have saw this transformation as she screamed and backed away. “N-n-no… You’re DEAD, DIABLO (devil) leave this family you creature of death and hatred! Leave us alone!” She yelled tears streaming down her face. My dead dad started crawling towards her, clamping his mouths as he crawled. He was trying to bite her, like Norton. I saw the shovel a few feet away and made a horrible decision. Kill my father or Stay there in fear. |
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Summoning my children of the night. Lexatom : skrt-lord : Mynamescox44 : I may have forgotten other people but like okay. SORRYYY Lexatom : skrt-lord : Mynamescox44 : I may have forgotten other people but like okay. SORRYYY |
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Great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next. I just can't tell which character is which Vizzed user. It makes the expierence more fun for me if I know who's who, I dunno. |
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Superb work deg! I really enjoyed reading this, please make the second chapter asap heheh, you know, i really wanna know what's up next and i can't wait for the second chapter, nice stuff dude |
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