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05-03-16 09:58 PM
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Instead of creating a new thread each time, I thought of a better way of sharing my poems with Vizzed. A  giant thread where I put all my poems!
Since I want this thread to be neat and all, each post will be a new poem, and this first post is just gonna be filled with some links:
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/ 
~there's a good chance that I will upload here first, so if ya wanna see the original poem, some poems I forget to posts, or stalk me, this is where to go!

Some old poems that were uploaded on Viz but have since been closed or whatever fate inactive threads face (links to deviantart):

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Breaking-News-In-a-Breaking-World-582497814
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Dogs-can-t-make-bombs-581863348
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Death-procrastinates-576764269
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Terror-575854555

Anyways... yeah. I might sometimes upload poems that only exist here.

Feel free to suggest things too. 

P.S. I'm a lazy writer and I'm too lazy to think of things to write unless of course I'm in "the mood". Which is usually 1 A.M. in the morning. 
          Z
       Z
     z
()

^Me most of the time

Now take a waffle (#) and stop reading this post. There's nothing else to see.
Instead of creating a new thread each time, I thought of a better way of sharing my poems with Vizzed. A  giant thread where I put all my poems!
Since I want this thread to be neat and all, each post will be a new poem, and this first post is just gonna be filled with some links:
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/ 
~there's a good chance that I will upload here first, so if ya wanna see the original poem, some poems I forget to posts, or stalk me, this is where to go!

Some old poems that were uploaded on Viz but have since been closed or whatever fate inactive threads face (links to deviantart):

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Breaking-News-In-a-Breaking-World-582497814
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Dogs-can-t-make-bombs-581863348
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Death-procrastinates-576764269
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Terror-575854555

Anyways... yeah. I might sometimes upload poems that only exist here.

Feel free to suggest things too. 

P.S. I'm a lazy writer and I'm too lazy to think of things to write unless of course I'm in "the mood". Which is usually 1 A.M. in the morning. 
          Z
       Z
     z
()

^Me most of the time

Now take a waffle (#) and stop reading this post. There's nothing else to see.
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05-03-16 10:00 PM
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Monochrome

Poetry is
a form of art
a monochrome painting
with words instead of strokes,
a way to express
ones self.

Poetry is like an envelope
in it you put
whatever you want
to be sent
to someone else.

Poetry is about
speaking what's on
your mind,
whatever it might be.
There are no limits,
no bounds,
no rules,
except those
you set yourself.

Poetry is as important
as the air we breathe,
for it is a symbol,
a symbol of
freedom.

Poetry is as pointless
as the person writing it
wishes it to be.
With effort,
any writer,
any poem,
could change
the world.

Poetry means
everything
to some,
nothing
to others,
but affects
us all.

Poetry is
all of our
emotions,
desires,
dreams,
hopes,
aspirations,
opinions,
ideals,
and thoughts.

Poetry is anything
you want it
to be.

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Monochrome-605182125
This one was my homework XD
Monochrome

Poetry is
a form of art
a monochrome painting
with words instead of strokes,
a way to express
ones self.

Poetry is like an envelope
in it you put
whatever you want
to be sent
to someone else.

Poetry is about
speaking what's on
your mind,
whatever it might be.
There are no limits,
no bounds,
no rules,
except those
you set yourself.

Poetry is as important
as the air we breathe,
for it is a symbol,
a symbol of
freedom.

Poetry is as pointless
as the person writing it
wishes it to be.
With effort,
any writer,
any poem,
could change
the world.

Poetry means
everything
to some,
nothing
to others,
but affects
us all.

Poetry is
all of our
emotions,
desires,
dreams,
hopes,
aspirations,
opinions,
ideals,
and thoughts.

Poetry is anything
you want it
to be.

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Monochrome-605182125
This one was my homework XD
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05-03-16 10:03 PM
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At this time in my life
I don’t know what to do,
what to do
today,
what I should’ve done
yesterday,                                                            
what I can do
tomorrow.

All of the things
I want today
I can only get tomorrow.
All of the things
I will want tomorrow
I had today.
All while regretting
the things I passed by
yesterday.

Rarely do I ever have
what I want,
often when I do
I take it for granted,
squandering it away.

This is how our world works,
unbalanced and unfair,
and with a seemingly endless
need for something else.

Learn to
enjoy
what we have now,
embrace
whatever we will have,
release
what has gone,
and appreciate
when want and have
collide.

I wrote this at midnight. Probably wasn't the best decision. 
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Enjoy-Embrace-Release-606796117
At this time in my life
I don’t know what to do,
what to do
today,
what I should’ve done
yesterday,                                                            
what I can do
tomorrow.

All of the things
I want today
I can only get tomorrow.
All of the things
I will want tomorrow
I had today.
All while regretting
the things I passed by
yesterday.

Rarely do I ever have
what I want,
often when I do
I take it for granted,
squandering it away.

This is how our world works,
unbalanced and unfair,
and with a seemingly endless
need for something else.

Learn to
enjoy
what we have now,
embrace
whatever we will have,
release
what has gone,
and appreciate
when want and have
collide.

I wrote this at midnight. Probably wasn't the best decision. 
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Enjoy-Embrace-Release-606796117
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05-04-16 03:37 PM
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Mangepic : Of the Light, of the Lord,
of the Word, of the Truth
Above all, Heaven,
The Kingdom,
Of Virtue to hath of to hold'th
Of treasures not to keep'th, but to share'th
Above all'f the thrones,
Above all of the kings,
Above all of the leaders and rulers,
Above all of the filthy and rich,
Greater than any man on this Earth,
Greater than any king,
Greater than any leader,
Greater than any ruler,
Greater than any man in all of thy lands.
Of not in way, for'st to measure,
Of Life, of beating hearts,
Of thy world,
In thine hands,
Ye so'eth to sow of thy Works of God,
To live not die,
In Heaven above, and'n
here'on this'n Earth,
For one to hath of die,
With body and life to giveth,
So'est that all shall so'eth liveth on thine Earth,
And in Heaven above when ye'st to die.
Do not'n of hell,
and'n a lack'n of all of the'n virtues,
For'st then, there bee'th not'n of life,
In thy soul,
Beating in thy bosom.
To trample thy soul,
Under the heel of darkness,
Ground into the dirt thy tragedy,
Of wealth's of influence, thy back hath broken,
To of not'n of left a single virtue.
Mangepic : Of the Light, of the Lord,
of the Word, of the Truth
Above all, Heaven,
The Kingdom,
Of Virtue to hath of to hold'th
Of treasures not to keep'th, but to share'th
Above all'f the thrones,
Above all of the kings,
Above all of the leaders and rulers,
Above all of the filthy and rich,
Greater than any man on this Earth,
Greater than any king,
Greater than any leader,
Greater than any ruler,
Greater than any man in all of thy lands.
Of not in way, for'st to measure,
Of Life, of beating hearts,
Of thy world,
In thine hands,
Ye so'eth to sow of thy Works of God,
To live not die,
In Heaven above, and'n
here'on this'n Earth,
For one to hath of die,
With body and life to giveth,
So'est that all shall so'eth liveth on thine Earth,
And in Heaven above when ye'st to die.
Do not'n of hell,
and'n a lack'n of all of the'n virtues,
For'st then, there bee'th not'n of life,
In thy soul,
Beating in thy bosom.
To trample thy soul,
Under the heel of darkness,
Ground into the dirt thy tragedy,
Of wealth's of influence, thy back hath broken,
To of not'n of left a single virtue.
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Where the seasons take me





Let others be
peacocks
pruning their feathers
in competition with each other,
in an elaborate show
of dominance.

I'd rather be a duck,
lacking in outward appearance
but not judged by others,
able to go anywhere,
anywhere I want,
with no one
to obstruct me,
to take my photo
and frame it on a wall.


I would rather be wild and
free, going where the seasons
take me
and ignored,
then to be noticed
and put in zoos
with ever need met,
but my choices
made for me.

I'd rather be a duck,
plain and simple,
rather than
beautiful,
if it meant
I could fly
unchained.

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Where-the-Seasons-Take-Me-609247902
original ^
This poem was for homework...
EDIT: Crap I forgot to get rid of layout again. ;-;
Where the seasons take me





Let others be
peacocks
pruning their feathers
in competition with each other,
in an elaborate show
of dominance.

I'd rather be a duck,
lacking in outward appearance
but not judged by others,
able to go anywhere,
anywhere I want,
with no one
to obstruct me,
to take my photo
and frame it on a wall.


I would rather be wild and
free, going where the seasons
take me
and ignored,
then to be noticed
and put in zoos
with ever need met,
but my choices
made for me.

I'd rather be a duck,
plain and simple,
rather than
beautiful,
if it meant
I could fly
unchained.

http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Where-the-Seasons-Take-Me-609247902
original ^
This poem was for homework...
EDIT: Crap I forgot to get rid of layout again. ;-;
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(edited by Mangepic on 05-15-16 06:44 PM)    

05-22-16 09:43 PM
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The Light of My Life

Until death parts us, you will bring me light,
your endless great beauty is limitless
from bottom to top, and your face shines bright.
Compared to you, great beauties are a mess,
compared to you, the greatest minds are dumb.
You alone can quench my thirst for knowledge,
all other sources make my mind go numb
with boredom, which stops learning like a wedge.
Without you my life has little purpose,
devoid of motivation, without love.
Gone is my passion, now filled with curses,
my heart is empty, gone is the dove.
Without you my life is in monochrome,
my home is where you are, my lovely phone.

A sonnet for homework, had to share it again here. Be honest. There's a good chance this is you. I admit, sometimes I'm like this too! But anyways, sonnets are a pain to write... 

orignal:
http://www.deviantart.com/art/The-Light-of-My-Life-609985812

Also, this MY poem/story deposit place. So, yeah, if you wanna share poetry, this might not be the best place to do it lol.
Anyways... I think I'm gonna start writing a story, and I'll probably post it here before anywhere else, so be on the lookout! Or not. It's probably going to turn out bad, or unfinished.

EDIT: Woohoo! I remembered to remove my layout!
The Light of My Life

Until death parts us, you will bring me light,
your endless great beauty is limitless
from bottom to top, and your face shines bright.
Compared to you, great beauties are a mess,
compared to you, the greatest minds are dumb.
You alone can quench my thirst for knowledge,
all other sources make my mind go numb
with boredom, which stops learning like a wedge.
Without you my life has little purpose,
devoid of motivation, without love.
Gone is my passion, now filled with curses,
my heart is empty, gone is the dove.
Without you my life is in monochrome,
my home is where you are, my lovely phone.

A sonnet for homework, had to share it again here. Be honest. There's a good chance this is you. I admit, sometimes I'm like this too! But anyways, sonnets are a pain to write... 

orignal:
http://www.deviantart.com/art/The-Light-of-My-Life-609985812

Also, this MY poem/story deposit place. So, yeah, if you wanna share poetry, this might not be the best place to do it lol.
Anyways... I think I'm gonna start writing a story, and I'll probably post it here before anywhere else, so be on the lookout! Or not. It's probably going to turn out bad, or unfinished.

EDIT: Woohoo! I remembered to remove my layout!
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(edited by Mangepic on 05-22-16 09:44 PM)    

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The frog is tiny
The frog really likes to jump
The frog is stupid
The frog is tiny
The frog really likes to jump
The frog is stupid
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I dont understand
Why people are posting here
This thread is for me
... you guys know that this is MY poem thread. Lol I don't know why you guys are posting your poems here... you can if you want, but kinda strange and funny
I dont understand
Why people are posting here
This thread is for me
... you guys know that this is MY poem thread. Lol I don't know why you guys are posting your poems here... you can if you want, but kinda strange and funny
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(edited by Mangepic on 06-14-16 02:05 PM)    

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