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04-07-16 01:42 AM
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Salvage by Mangepic,


The mountain-side glistens

with sweat

The oceans brimming with aquatic life

and trash

The picturesque sky is painted with clouds

of smoke and fumes

The forest resonates with sounds of creatures high and low

running from a raging conflagration


The city is filled with people and technology,

so everybody knows,

but not everybody

seems to care,

and almost nobody

knows what to do


How much time

do we have left?

Is there any hope

for this planet?

How much can we

salvage from this dying world?

No one seems to know





A short poem I wrote randomly. Feedback appreciated.


See original here:


http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Salvage-601523578




Also looking for things to write poem about. Suggest them down below.


EDIT: AGHHHH!!! Why do I always forget to remove layout ;-;





Sorry....
EDIT 2: Sorry for all the spaces, each time I edit it keeps putting em' in...
Salvage by Mangepic,


The mountain-side glistens

with sweat

The oceans brimming with aquatic life

and trash

The picturesque sky is painted with clouds

of smoke and fumes

The forest resonates with sounds of creatures high and low

running from a raging conflagration


The city is filled with people and technology,

so everybody knows,

but not everybody

seems to care,

and almost nobody

knows what to do


How much time

do we have left?

Is there any hope

for this planet?

How much can we

salvage from this dying world?

No one seems to know





A short poem I wrote randomly. Feedback appreciated.


See original here:


http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Salvage-601523578




Also looking for things to write poem about. Suggest them down below.


EDIT: AGHHHH!!! Why do I always forget to remove layout ;-;





Sorry....
EDIT 2: Sorry for all the spaces, each time I edit it keeps putting em' in...
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04-07-16 08:00 AM
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Wow this is a pretty good poem, good job for making this. Though I can't help but feel this poem should have been in Captain Planet.
Wow this is a pretty good poem, good job for making this. Though I can't help but feel this poem should have been in Captain Planet.
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