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01-02-16 03:36 AM
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http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Dogs-can-t-make-bombs-581863348
Wrote this quickly on my phone so forgive mistakes...

Have you ever wondered why,
In our world lies,
So much animosity,
And idiocracy
Right before our very eyes?
Do humans have
A law of wisdom,
Very much like physics?
For every reaction,
For every wise thought,
There is an equal and opposite reaction,
There is a equally foolish thought?
Does our blessing of intelligence,
Come with the curse of stupidity?
Does our knowledge enable,
The dumb act we do?
Does our intellegience,
Our superiority,
Cause us to become rash,
And do and not think?
After all,
Cats can't drive,
And can't crash cars
And dogs can't make bombs,
And can't start wars.
Many people say,
Humans are defined
By our intelligence
And ability to love.
But I say,
We are defined,
By our foolishness, stupidity,
And ability to hate.

Check deviantart one for line breaks cause im too lazy to add them in on my phone.

Helpful comments, constructive criticism, compliments, etc. appreciated!

Edit: also, should I just make one thread and post all my poems there instead of individual threads? Only downside is gettting help on individual poems will be annoying.
http://mangepic.deviantart.com/art/Dogs-can-t-make-bombs-581863348
Wrote this quickly on my phone so forgive mistakes...

Have you ever wondered why,
In our world lies,
So much animosity,
And idiocracy
Right before our very eyes?
Do humans have
A law of wisdom,
Very much like physics?
For every reaction,
For every wise thought,
There is an equal and opposite reaction,
There is a equally foolish thought?
Does our blessing of intelligence,
Come with the curse of stupidity?
Does our knowledge enable,
The dumb act we do?
Does our intellegience,
Our superiority,
Cause us to become rash,
And do and not think?
After all,
Cats can't drive,
And can't crash cars
And dogs can't make bombs,
And can't start wars.
Many people say,
Humans are defined
By our intelligence
And ability to love.
But I say,
We are defined,
By our foolishness, stupidity,
And ability to hate.

Check deviantart one for line breaks cause im too lazy to add them in on my phone.

Helpful comments, constructive criticism, compliments, etc. appreciated!

Edit: also, should I just make one thread and post all my poems there instead of individual threads? Only downside is gettting help on individual poems will be annoying.
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This is a very accurate representation of the world and everything going on nowadays. Although, not every single human is stupid. But I can see what this poem is saying nonetheless. Great job!
This is a very accurate representation of the world and everything going on nowadays. Although, not every single human is stupid. But I can see what this poem is saying nonetheless. Great job!
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Love this one. You drive right down to your point, and pull no punches. We are so smart that we've become idiots, and so wise that we've become fools. I can appreciate anything that can boldly refute the self sufficiency that we tend to think we have. Also it provokes thought. I love that about all of your work that I've seen so far. Please share some more!
Love this one. You drive right down to your point, and pull no punches. We are so smart that we've become idiots, and so wise that we've become fools. I can appreciate anything that can boldly refute the self sufficiency that we tend to think we have. Also it provokes thought. I love that about all of your work that I've seen so far. Please share some more!
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