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11-11-15 01:24 PM
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Hey all this will be where I post all the songs/poems I write! Hope you enjoy!

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Hey all this will be where I post all the songs/poems I write! Hope you enjoy!

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11-11-15 01:29 PM
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Break the Circle

It's Battered
It's bruised
It's bent but
It's not broken
Around and Around
it goes
When the corruption stops
No one ever knows
Bend it
Spin it
Throw it around
It isn't broken
Around and around
it goes
When the pain stops
No one will ever know
Hit it
Kick it
Fight it all
It never breaks
Around and around
it goes
When the hate stops
No one seems to know
Where does it end?
The pain
The hate
The corruption
No one can say
How did it all begin?
The hurting
The judging
The condemning
No one will say
Why does it happen?
The fighting
The cursing
The killing
Someone will pay
Unless the circle BREAKS
Break the Circle

It's Battered
It's bruised
It's bent but
It's not broken
Around and Around
it goes
When the corruption stops
No one ever knows
Bend it
Spin it
Throw it around
It isn't broken
Around and around
it goes
When the pain stops
No one will ever know
Hit it
Kick it
Fight it all
It never breaks
Around and around
it goes
When the hate stops
No one seems to know
Where does it end?
The pain
The hate
The corruption
No one can say
How did it all begin?
The hurting
The judging
The condemning
No one will say
Why does it happen?
The fighting
The cursing
The killing
Someone will pay
Unless the circle BREAKS
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Post Rating: 1   Liked By: jnisol,

11-11-15 02:41 PM
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Why Me?

Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

All this hurt
All this pain
All this isolation
Why me?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

These scars on my wrist
This pain in my chest
The hurt in my head
It's all too much
I need a hand


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?


I can't take this anymore
I want it all to end!


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

Can anyone hear me crying?
Can anyone see my pain?
Can anyone help me?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

Can anyone save me
Tonight!
Why Me?

Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

All this hurt
All this pain
All this isolation
Why me?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

These scars on my wrist
This pain in my chest
The hurt in my head
It's all too much
I need a hand


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?


I can't take this anymore
I want it all to end!


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

Can anyone hear me crying?
Can anyone see my pain?
Can anyone help me?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?


Why did this happen to me?
What did I do?
Did I break an unknown rule?
Did I do something wrong?

Can anyone save me
Tonight!
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11-12-15 02:16 PM
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Help Me

I need someone to help me
My vision's getting blurry
I need someone to save me
I cut too deep this time
Is anyone there?
My vision's going black
Can anyone hear?
My screams are going silent
Can anyone see?
My wrists are still bleeding
Can anyone help?
My mind is getting fuzzy
Did anyone notice?
That I was even missing
Did anyone even care?
That my pain was too much
No one will notice
Just one more scar
No one will care
It's just a bleeding arm
No one will see
Through my everyday mask
No one can help me
It's just too much
No one can save me
I've had enough
It's time to end it all
Just one more cut
I won't survive at all
Tonight
Help Me

I need someone to help me
My vision's getting blurry
I need someone to save me
I cut too deep this time
Is anyone there?
My vision's going black
Can anyone hear?
My screams are going silent
Can anyone see?
My wrists are still bleeding
Can anyone help?
My mind is getting fuzzy
Did anyone notice?
That I was even missing
Did anyone even care?
That my pain was too much
No one will notice
Just one more scar
No one will care
It's just a bleeding arm
No one will see
Through my everyday mask
No one can help me
It's just too much
No one can save me
I've had enough
It's time to end it all
Just one more cut
I won't survive at all
Tonight
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11-12-15 05:27 PM
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Beating

Go ahead
Hit me
Kick me
Stab me in the back
It's all been done before
The cursing
The hurting
The beating me blue and black
I don't care anymore
Go ahead and hit me again
My body's already numb
From all the scars
Break my bones
I don't care
Carve my flesh
It's already scarred
Stomp on my heart
It's already broken
It's just another day
Just another beating
Just one. More. Scar
That no one will ever see
Give me your best shot
It doesn't hurt anymore
You can whack me with a pot
I won't feel a thing
My body's already broken
From all the blood
The scars
The beating
I won't feel a thing
Not even when dying
The beatings numbed my pain
But my heart's still breaking
Nothing will ever be the same
After my final beating
TONIGHT
Beating

Go ahead
Hit me
Kick me
Stab me in the back
It's all been done before
The cursing
The hurting
The beating me blue and black
I don't care anymore
Go ahead and hit me again
My body's already numb
From all the scars
Break my bones
I don't care
Carve my flesh
It's already scarred
Stomp on my heart
It's already broken
It's just another day
Just another beating
Just one. More. Scar
That no one will ever see
Give me your best shot
It doesn't hurt anymore
You can whack me with a pot
I won't feel a thing
My body's already broken
From all the blood
The scars
The beating
I won't feel a thing
Not even when dying
The beatings numbed my pain
But my heart's still breaking
Nothing will ever be the same
After my final beating
TONIGHT
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11-12-15 08:07 PM
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Fighting
Based off of Bakugan and YuGiOh
Set the card
Place the battlefield
Toss the ball
Start the fight
No time to think
No time to plan
No time to talk
Cause you're fighting
Fighting for your life
Flip your card
Open the gate
Stand your ground
Hope for the best
No time to talk
No time to blink
No time to breath
Cause the fight started
You're fighting for your life
Say your prayers
as you enter the field
Say your goodbyes
as you prepare to play
No time to breath
No time to pray
No time to wish the pain away
The fight is ending
Your life is fading
Your card is gone
The gate is broken
Your battler fell
It's power was weak
You should have ran
You should have hid
You should have refused the fight
Your sight is darkening
Your mind is slowing
Your heart is stopping
as your life is fading
Because you lost the fight
Fighting
Based off of Bakugan and YuGiOh
Set the card
Place the battlefield
Toss the ball
Start the fight
No time to think
No time to plan
No time to talk
Cause you're fighting
Fighting for your life
Flip your card
Open the gate
Stand your ground
Hope for the best
No time to talk
No time to blink
No time to breath
Cause the fight started
You're fighting for your life
Say your prayers
as you enter the field
Say your goodbyes
as you prepare to play
No time to breath
No time to pray
No time to wish the pain away
The fight is ending
Your life is fading
Your card is gone
The gate is broken
Your battler fell
It's power was weak
You should have ran
You should have hid
You should have refused the fight
Your sight is darkening
Your mind is slowing
Your heart is stopping
as your life is fading
Because you lost the fight
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11-13-15 08:46 AM
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Fire

It burns
It hurts
It helps
Fire fire everywhere
The colors orange red blue green
makes it looks so pretty so deceiving
Summon it up
Throw it around
Feed it anything
Fire fire everywhere
Eatting up everything
Hungry and destructive all the time
It kills
It warms
It heals
Fire fire everywhere
Burning everything and everyone
Turning everything to ash and dust
Burn fire burn!
Turn everything to ash
Burn everyone alive!
Fire fire everywhere
Burn everything down
Burn the whole place down!
Burn it down!
Burn the world to ash
Burn the disease out!
Fire

It burns
It hurts
It helps
Fire fire everywhere
The colors orange red blue green
makes it looks so pretty so deceiving
Summon it up
Throw it around
Feed it anything
Fire fire everywhere
Eatting up everything
Hungry and destructive all the time
It kills
It warms
It heals
Fire fire everywhere
Burning everything and everyone
Turning everything to ash and dust
Burn fire burn!
Turn everything to ash
Burn everyone alive!
Fire fire everywhere
Burn everything down
Burn the whole place down!
Burn it down!
Burn the world to ash
Burn the disease out!
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11-13-15 03:54 PM
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My Hero

Can anyone save me?
Will anyone try?
I know I'm not the best
But do I deserve to die?
Save me please
I need a hero
Don't hate me
I'm not useless
I can help
Please don't forsake me
I can feel him getting closer
His footsteps are getting louder
Where is my savoir?
My heart is beating faster
I need a hero
To come for me
I need help
PLEASE!!!
His beady eyes found me
His creepy grin widens
 His hand reaches for me
The knife is gleaming
Where is my hero?
Why won't he save me?
Am I that insignificant?
Am I that unimportant?
That everyone forsakes me?
The knife has stabbed me
My stomach is bleeding
My screams are fading
My vision is darkening
My hero forsake me
My killers face is clear
My eyes fill with tears
My hero hasn't forsaken me
...
My hero's the one who killed me
My Hero

Can anyone save me?
Will anyone try?
I know I'm not the best
But do I deserve to die?
Save me please
I need a hero
Don't hate me
I'm not useless
I can help
Please don't forsake me
I can feel him getting closer
His footsteps are getting louder
Where is my savoir?
My heart is beating faster
I need a hero
To come for me
I need help
PLEASE!!!
His beady eyes found me
His creepy grin widens
 His hand reaches for me
The knife is gleaming
Where is my hero?
Why won't he save me?
Am I that insignificant?
Am I that unimportant?
That everyone forsakes me?
The knife has stabbed me
My stomach is bleeding
My screams are fading
My vision is darkening
My hero forsake me
My killers face is clear
My eyes fill with tears
My hero hasn't forsaken me
...
My hero's the one who killed me
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11-13-15 07:19 PM
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Snarl

You're being ripped up
Torn up
Eaten alive
You heard them snarl
You heard them roar
You heard them quarrel
But you didn't run
Now you're paying a price
But it was way too high
They're covered in ticks and lice
You're in shock as you stare at the sky
You heard a snarl
You should have ran
You didn't expect them to be feral
Now you can fit in a can
They finished their meal
You're lying still
You can't hear a thing
But it feels like you were hit by a train
The snarl was heard
You're dead as a door
There's a reason they're feared
Not that you care anymore
You heard the snarl
You should have ran
You should have ran
If you hear a snarl
Then run run
Run for your life
Or you'll be next
So beware the snarl
Beware the snarl
Beware the snarl

Snarl

You're being ripped up
Torn up
Eaten alive
You heard them snarl
You heard them roar
You heard them quarrel
But you didn't run
Now you're paying a price
But it was way too high
They're covered in ticks and lice
You're in shock as you stare at the sky
You heard a snarl
You should have ran
You didn't expect them to be feral
Now you can fit in a can
They finished their meal
You're lying still
You can't hear a thing
But it feels like you were hit by a train
The snarl was heard
You're dead as a door
There's a reason they're feared
Not that you care anymore
You heard the snarl
You should have ran
You should have ran
If you hear a snarl
Then run run
Run for your life
Or you'll be next
So beware the snarl
Beware the snarl
Beware the snarl

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11-28-15 03:15 PM
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I'm really enjoying these since they remind me of a pack of wolves. A little scary some parts, but that doesn't mean they can't be fun.

Keep up the good work! There will be more, right?
I'm really enjoying these since they remind me of a pack of wolves. A little scary some parts, but that doesn't mean they can't be fun.

Keep up the good work! There will be more, right?
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Great work you have here, I love break the circle and how open it is to allow readers to really think about it, yet still have a directed focus and meaning. And im pretty sure "beating" is supposed to be a poem (correct me if im wrong) but makes a pretty darn amazing rap! Keep it up, can't wait to read more!
Great work you have here, I love break the circle and how open it is to allow readers to really think about it, yet still have a directed focus and meaning. And im pretty sure "beating" is supposed to be a poem (correct me if im wrong) but makes a pretty darn amazing rap! Keep it up, can't wait to read more!
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