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The Bus That Never Came

 

10-21-15 02:30 PM
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So, few weeks ago I raved about my attempts with writing a story in the chat. These attempts have somewhat... payed off. I guess.
Anyway, the initial idea of the alleged story is that a school-kid is walking to a bus-stop after a long school-day (I love hyphens), in order to wait for a bus. Thing is, the kid is stuck in a time-loop that is preventing him from leaving the bus stop and the bus will never come, so the kid is stuck in the bus-stop for all of eternity. Terrible, terrible.
I've done some writing, and currently I have a 4.25 page (large font, large letters) rough draft. It's pretty horrible, if you ask me.
I also made a Dropbox account for sharing the draft. This better be worth it.

Here it is.

P.S.: The original title was supposed to be "The Bus That Never Came", but I decided for "Public Transport" for no apparent reason.
P.P.S.: Do you believe that the title should be in the middle, or near the edge of the page?
So, few weeks ago I raved about my attempts with writing a story in the chat. These attempts have somewhat... payed off. I guess.
Anyway, the initial idea of the alleged story is that a school-kid is walking to a bus-stop after a long school-day (I love hyphens), in order to wait for a bus. Thing is, the kid is stuck in a time-loop that is preventing him from leaving the bus stop and the bus will never come, so the kid is stuck in the bus-stop for all of eternity. Terrible, terrible.
I've done some writing, and currently I have a 4.25 page (large font, large letters) rough draft. It's pretty horrible, if you ask me.
I also made a Dropbox account for sharing the draft. This better be worth it.

Here it is.

P.S.: The original title was supposed to be "The Bus That Never Came", but I decided for "Public Transport" for no apparent reason.
P.P.S.: Do you believe that the title should be in the middle, or near the edge of the page?


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