Etrian Mystery Dungeon can leave you bullied and brokenhearted. Picture this: after descending dozens of floors and cutting down swathes of virulent enemies, you step on a trap that fills the room with enough feral boars and sharp-toothed wildcats to take out an army. You're ill-prepared, having already exhausted most of your recovery items, so down goes your only medic. You're fresh out of the nectar and Yggdrasil leaves that had kept you on your feet, and somehow you forgot to bring along an escape item to pull you out of this mess. You continually swing your sword, but even the sharpest steel can't cut through such numbers. With a meaty thud, you drop, and away goes the GOLD, equipment, and items that once stood as trophies of your labor.
Within the dungeons, the lows are quite low; no one wants to watch progress vanish into the ether. But surprisingly, the highs manage to outstrip them. Etrian Mystery Dungeon is a punishing RPG that forces you to think before you dungeon crawl, as the penalties for falling in battle or failing to protect your home base can turn your stomach. But once you fully grasp the game's unique loot loop and begin to enter each area with a purpose, the sense of progression is almost too sweet to spurn. With endless customization options and a rich series of quests and randomly generated locations, this sprawling 3DS treat can devour your free time before you even feel the prick of its teeth.

   In my opinion. This is not really a review since you spent about half of the review just complaining over one floor on one dungeon. You did not really describe the game very well either.
 
   Sorry if it seemed harsh.
 
   To make this review better I think you should more focus on the overall game rather than just one part of the game. Then I also think that you should try to talk about every aspect of the game you rated it on. Such as graphics and sound. Example.
 
   Sound: 7/10
 
   (Words about the sound and why you gave it that rating goes here.)
 
   You could turn this in to a better review with a little practice though.

I agree with awesomeguy. This review could've been much longer and you could've separated it into categories as well. Also, the game has only been out for 7 days, so I think it's a little bit too soon to start reviewing it.

Your review was OK but you focused only on the difficulty level. What about graphics? music? the other dungeons? Are they as unforgiving? Is the customization enough to get over the difficulty level?