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Mindwarp - Chapter 2

 

03-28-15 05:34 PM
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Singelli: I knew you always wanted me to do well so the rest of the story is dedicated to you.

TO RECAP: Todd, a regular man from Kansas, finds himself in China. He talks to an old man who lets him stay at his house. After leaving his house, which was in fact a tent, goes to the fields. A group of young boys and girls are playing a game with a ball. Todd realizes that the objective of the game is to throw the ball as far as you can. A younger boy, presumably the youngest child there, can't throw the ball well. Todd helps the boy by changing his stance, and when he throws the ball again, goes very far.

WARNING: This story does include some elements of murder, disappearance, terrorism, and violence. If you don't like those topics or don't like to discuss them, please, don't read this! I want everyone to be happy!

   I walked from the fields, to the market area. I saw all these fruits, veggies, and meats. No wonder everyone was so healthy there! From thinking about it, I remembered that the Chinese used the yuan. But what the people were holding wasn't the yuan. It was something else. I couldn't exactly put my finger on it, but I moved on.
   I came across this gravel path. I wasn't sure where it lead to, but I was curious to see where it was going to. I walked for about 10 minutes. Then, finally, I couldn't believe my eyes. There was a big city! Not only that, but it was futuristic! I walked around the streets of the city for only 15 seconds when a flying car almost hit me. The driver (or pilot, I should say) beeped the horn at me. I started to run, but I didn't know where I was going.

   After 2 minutes of running, I went into a building that had the words "FREE INFO" on it. I sprinted to get there. I walked in, exhausted from what I just saw.
   "Hello, sir, do you need help?" asked a woman, kindly.
   "YES!" I exclaimed. "I need help right now!"
   "Well, sir," she said, "what is it?"
   "I, like, ended up here! I came here from nowhere! I went to bed, and woke up in a village nearby!"
   "Okay, calm down. I'll give you everything you need to know." This woman was still calm.
   "Alright." I calmed down. "I want to know where I am, what year this is, and why I'm here. Oh, and, I want to know how I can get back to my home in Kansas!"
   "Well, you are in New Hong Kong. After the old Hong Kong was brought down by terrorists, you know. The year is 2044. I'm not sure how you got here or how you will get back. Now, let me scan you." She pulled out some device that reminded me of the "Name Your Price" tool. A bright light flashed for only a quick second and then nothing else.
   "Okay, Todd Withers. From Pleasanton, Kansas. It also says here that you were in the news, but 30 years ago. 'Man missing from home with no evidence of a murder or suicide', 'No appearance in 3 months from Todd Withers', 'Todd Withers presumed dead'. These are all news articles from the years of 2014 and 2015. So, you are probably from the past. Now, I am looking for similar articles to yours to see if there is anythi--oh yes, there is! Many people were missing from the years of 2014 and 2018 without any trace or evidence. So you weren't the only one missing. Also, we've had many people not knowing what's going on. I guess we'll find out soon."
   "Well, that's interesting. Anyways, I'll be coming back here sometime soon. Thanks so much!"
   "You're welcome! See you soon!"
   I walked out the building, only to hear a voice coming from thin air. "The war will begin soon," the voice said, seriously. "All 'visitors' must report to the town central tomorrow at seven PM. You better be there!"

Singelli: I knew you always wanted me to do well so the rest of the story is dedicated to you.

TO RECAP: Todd, a regular man from Kansas, finds himself in China. He talks to an old man who lets him stay at his house. After leaving his house, which was in fact a tent, goes to the fields. A group of young boys and girls are playing a game with a ball. Todd realizes that the objective of the game is to throw the ball as far as you can. A younger boy, presumably the youngest child there, can't throw the ball well. Todd helps the boy by changing his stance, and when he throws the ball again, goes very far.

WARNING: This story does include some elements of murder, disappearance, terrorism, and violence. If you don't like those topics or don't like to discuss them, please, don't read this! I want everyone to be happy!

   I walked from the fields, to the market area. I saw all these fruits, veggies, and meats. No wonder everyone was so healthy there! From thinking about it, I remembered that the Chinese used the yuan. But what the people were holding wasn't the yuan. It was something else. I couldn't exactly put my finger on it, but I moved on.
   I came across this gravel path. I wasn't sure where it lead to, but I was curious to see where it was going to. I walked for about 10 minutes. Then, finally, I couldn't believe my eyes. There was a big city! Not only that, but it was futuristic! I walked around the streets of the city for only 15 seconds when a flying car almost hit me. The driver (or pilot, I should say) beeped the horn at me. I started to run, but I didn't know where I was going.

   After 2 minutes of running, I went into a building that had the words "FREE INFO" on it. I sprinted to get there. I walked in, exhausted from what I just saw.
   "Hello, sir, do you need help?" asked a woman, kindly.
   "YES!" I exclaimed. "I need help right now!"
   "Well, sir," she said, "what is it?"
   "I, like, ended up here! I came here from nowhere! I went to bed, and woke up in a village nearby!"
   "Okay, calm down. I'll give you everything you need to know." This woman was still calm.
   "Alright." I calmed down. "I want to know where I am, what year this is, and why I'm here. Oh, and, I want to know how I can get back to my home in Kansas!"
   "Well, you are in New Hong Kong. After the old Hong Kong was brought down by terrorists, you know. The year is 2044. I'm not sure how you got here or how you will get back. Now, let me scan you." She pulled out some device that reminded me of the "Name Your Price" tool. A bright light flashed for only a quick second and then nothing else.
   "Okay, Todd Withers. From Pleasanton, Kansas. It also says here that you were in the news, but 30 years ago. 'Man missing from home with no evidence of a murder or suicide', 'No appearance in 3 months from Todd Withers', 'Todd Withers presumed dead'. These are all news articles from the years of 2014 and 2015. So, you are probably from the past. Now, I am looking for similar articles to yours to see if there is anythi--oh yes, there is! Many people were missing from the years of 2014 and 2018 without any trace or evidence. So you weren't the only one missing. Also, we've had many people not knowing what's going on. I guess we'll find out soon."
   "Well, that's interesting. Anyways, I'll be coming back here sometime soon. Thanks so much!"
   "You're welcome! See you soon!"
   I walked out the building, only to hear a voice coming from thin air. "The war will begin soon," the voice said, seriously. "All 'visitors' must report to the town central tomorrow at seven PM. You better be there!"

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