Hi guys, noahs_brother here with a little special story i wrote for school. it passed, and i was wondering if you guys would like it. yeah, it's small, but i tried really hard and hope you will like it. i'm hoping to be a good writer.     


THE DIAMOND
                                   A fictional
narrative by noahs_brother
It was a
cold, dark night. 1:00 A.M. to be exact. Seth Dunsky was preparing for his
major break- in at Liberty Bank.

The bank was
heavily guarded; with dangerous big red lasers, that if tripped could set off
the loud, loud alarm. Then his cover would be blown. His plan was to sneak in
the vents in the back of the building; the vents led to the main reception of
the bank. Once he was there, it was easy. He just needed to knock out the one
guard there, and he had miniature mirrors to reflect the lasers. In the bank,
(as with all banks,) there was a vault. Inside the vault, there was millions of
dollars in cash. But that’s not what he was there for. Mainly, he was there for
the Akbar Shah, the single most expensive and large diamond in the world. If he
got away with that, he was set for life.

Seth had
been poor for all 25 years of his life. Poverty-struck, it was like out of all
those sob stories. But, this was real. He had worn rags all his life, barely
being able to afford small morsels to eat. At age 10, his parents died, and
Seth was left to fend for himself. Developing street smarts, he managed to make
do, stealing everything he could. From that day forward though, he vowed that
one day he would be rich. This was that day. Make or break time.

Spence Knoll
made his rounds through Liberty Bank. He was incredibly tired, but as his
workaholic father always said, “work is before sleep.”
His father
died when he was 15, leaving him to help his mother, wheelchair-bound and
paralyzed from the waist down. Those times were hard, but he always had just
enough money from his work cutting logs to help him and his mother live. That
was 25 years ago.

Now he had a job at the Liberty bank, and he
made pretty good money. He made $20 an hour. But the catch was this bank housed
the largest diamond in the world. He had to be especially cautious.
Seth Dunsky

pulled the grate off the vent in the back of the bank, cutting his finger in
the process. “Crap”, he thought, “what if they notice the blood when they
notice the diamond is gone?” But he didn’t worry that much about it, because
this was the biggest night of his life. He climbed into the vent and started
crawling.

After about 10 minutes of crawling, he
saw an opening. He reached the end of the vent, and pulled the grate off, this
time being especially careful not to cut his finger. Those grates were sharp,
after all. He fell out of the end of the vent, not noticing how high up it was.
BAM! He landed on the ground in a heap.

Spence Knoll
was making his rounds, when he heard a sound. He sneakily snuck over to where
it was, finding a man dressed in all black. “You’re coming with me!” said Spence,
not noting that the man was incredibly fast.
Seth got up, and started running as fast as he
could, getting a good fifty feet before tripping over a stanchion and falling
flat on his face. He was not the most agile. Spence caught up to him, pulled
out his taser, and stunned him. BZZT! It knocked Seth out cold.
Spence grabbed Seth by the leg and dragged him off into the
holding cells. “I’ve called the police. They should be on their way soon.” Says
Spence to the man dressed in completely black. “You know, crime doesn’t pay.
Hard work does.”

                             ‘FIN