this is about Adam Baker,Adam 2,Enzo Matrix,Party Boy,Perfect,Sensitive,Winston and Zexyzec going to Nintendoland. They met Mario,Link,Conker,Star Fox and, the rest of the other nintendo characters. Everyone went to Witchy World (Banjo-Tooie) to have fun and, they all went to the Sprial Mountain to Banjo and, Kazooie house to relex. Winston was making funny noises like a Elepant and, they all laugh and, telling funy jokes and, they all went to swim and, everyone was having fun. They all went hyrule castle to walk around and, they went to Zora's fountain to see the Zoras and, the Zora was friendly to everyone and they also met the Goron. They were very friendly and, Goron were hangingout with everyone. they all went to Mario's world and, Mario show everyone Princess Peach castle. Winston was dancing around having and, Party Boy was telling everyone let party and, they all had a party. Sensitive was enjoying his self and, so was Adam 2. Adam was like this is the best party ever. Party Boy asked Enzo Matrix to dance with him and, Enzo Matrix went to dance with Party Boy. Winston was making funny faces to make them laugh and they laugh and, say Winston you are so funny and Winston say i love to be funny. Party Boy told Enzo Matrix about having a party back in Adam Baker clubhouse and, they all went back to Adam Baker's club house to have a have a party. They all enjoy hangingout with each other and, they all laugh and, enjoy their self playing video games and, eating pizza and, Drinking can a pop. They all camp out in Adam Baker's club house watching movies & telling stories.


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Party Boy

Oi...I understand you like Splitting adam and stuff but...Make an original story..try one that doesn't involve them at all..

Oh, a Nintendo and Splitting Adam crossover, huh? Interesting!

Looks just like the personal essays my younger self wrote and was praised for x'3!

It's good to see that you're trying; this was another cute story about a group of friends just chilling xD! Also, hanging out is two words, by the way! Don't forget, only put the coma before the "and"! Basically, for example, instead of (this is my own sentence)

"The friends laughed and, they were having a good time,"

it should be

"The friends laughed, and they were having a good time."

Okay ? This was nice, but next time, remember to put things that characters say between quotation marks (these things: ")! Also, don't forget - "i" should be capitalized! It should be "I", not "i" .

Keep putting effort!~

NintendoFanKimmy : Thanks

You're definitely getting better. Keep trying to make stories, and remember, practice makes perfect. I look forward to reading your next stories!

TheFadedWarrior : thanks faded