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a short story i came up with

 

12-25-09 03:24 AM
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I came up with this story in 5 minutes or so, so don't expect anything fancy. also this story is meant for you as the reader to think of ways for the man to escape. tell me the ideas when you reply.


"You have ten minutes to find a way out of this room."

"OK no problem."

The man walked in to the small room where there was nothing but a chair and the lamp above his head,While the other man closed the door behind him.
The man sat on the chair thinking about how he would make his escape. He examined the door and found that there was a door knob but no key hole.

"Hmmmmmm maybe nah it couldn't be that simple."

The man went back to thinking while he examined the light above his head. He saw that it had a wire shade around it he thought to him self

"Maybe i could some how get the wire off of the lamp and burrow my way out."

the man stood on his chair and reached for the wire on the lamp he started pulling and pulling finally it pooped off. the man then got off his
chair and went to the wall found the sharpest par of the jagged wire and proceeded to chip away at the wall. Finally the man gave up at chipping
away at the wall and went to go sit on the chair when the door opened up and the man from before walked in to the room.

"Time is up please walk this way."

the man walked out of the room and shut the door behind him.
I came up with this story in 5 minutes or so, so don't expect anything fancy. also this story is meant for you as the reader to think of ways for the man to escape. tell me the ideas when you reply.


"You have ten minutes to find a way out of this room."

"OK no problem."

The man walked in to the small room where there was nothing but a chair and the lamp above his head,While the other man closed the door behind him.
The man sat on the chair thinking about how he would make his escape. He examined the door and found that there was a door knob but no key hole.

"Hmmmmmm maybe nah it couldn't be that simple."

The man went back to thinking while he examined the light above his head. He saw that it had a wire shade around it he thought to him self

"Maybe i could some how get the wire off of the lamp and burrow my way out."

the man stood on his chair and reached for the wire on the lamp he started pulling and pulling finally it pooped off. the man then got off his
chair and went to the wall found the sharpest par of the jagged wire and proceeded to chip away at the wall. Finally the man gave up at chipping
away at the wall and went to go sit on the chair when the door opened up and the man from before walked in to the room.

"Time is up please walk this way."

the man walked out of the room and shut the door behind him.


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(edited by rbaranishyn on 12-26-09 12:02 AM)    

12-25-09 03:41 AM
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Nice story sounds like a mix between Saw & Cube but the ending needs work. To me it would be more interesting if this "person" was an electrician and he just happen to be fixing the light in the mental hospital but in the process he goes coco and believes he is a patient there trying to escape idk, I just think that end really needs some fixing though.
Nice story sounds like a mix between Saw & Cube but the ending needs work. To me it would be more interesting if this "person" was an electrician and he just happen to be fixing the light in the mental hospital but in the process he goes coco and believes he is a patient there trying to escape idk, I just think that end really needs some fixing though.

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12-26-09 12:01 AM
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well this story was meant for you to think of ways for him to escape but i for got to say that when i Posted the thread. actually I'm going to fix that after i post this. but good idea jigsaw thanks.
well this story was meant for you to think of ways for him to escape but i for got to say that when i Posted the thread. actually I'm going to fix that after i post this. but good idea jigsaw thanks.


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(edited by rbaranishyn on 12-26-09 12:04 AM)    

02-26-10 02:36 PM
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considering he only has 10 minutes... the first thing that comes to mind is to use the chair to bust off the doorknob, which probably wouldnt help very much...

if anything is made of wood he could maybe try to start a fire using the lamp and burn his way out...

other than that, i would just charge the door hitting it with the chair over and over...

not alot of options for this poor guy LOL
considering he only has 10 minutes... the first thing that comes to mind is to use the chair to bust off the doorknob, which probably wouldnt help very much...

if anything is made of wood he could maybe try to start a fire using the lamp and burn his way out...

other than that, i would just charge the door hitting it with the chair over and over...

not alot of options for this poor guy LOL


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03-14-10 04:13 PM
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Just open the door, according to the logic, their was no mentioning of locking the door, they just closed it....


Just open the door, according to the logic, their was no mentioning of locking the door, they just closed it....

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you my friend have the right idea and the correct answer to the story thing.... just because you got it rite and i have extra vizzed I'll give you some vizzed for your answer.
you my friend have the right idea and the correct answer to the story thing.... just because you got it rite and i have extra vizzed I'll give you some vizzed for your answer.


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omg, lolz! i didn't think i was right I just thought we were supposed to automatically think that the door was locked and i thought it might have been a stupid answer, but i went for it XD, lol


omg, lolz! i didn't think i was right I just thought we were supposed to automatically think that the door was locked and i thought it might have been a stupid answer, but i went for it XD, lol

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