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         The name's Dylan, I live in N/A, Hawaii. My parents don't tell me where we live exactly. Mainly because we live on a military reserve and she fears I might leak it. She thinks this because I love the internet. I have school today, I hate school. I'm smarter than everyone there, yet I still learn the eighth grade curriculum. My teachers are the worst part. My math teacher treats me like crap because I'm smarter than him. Luckily we have a substitute teacher today so I won't be verbally abused. So far this teacher is nice and treats everyone like a normal human. Something is off about this teacher, I keep seeing a constant flicker in his head, it's probably my imagination trying to make a reality. No, something is definitely wrong, now everything is flickering but my hands or myself. I then get up and go to the door. I can't touch it, my hand just goes through it with an electrical sensation. I'm starting to freak out, I can't do anything. I try punching the walls but nothing happens. Then I realize, If my hand goes through it, can I go through it? I then face a wall and begin pushing with all my force. Now I'm falling, I'm falling through an infinite blackness. Now all I hear is "ERROR: Check Systems." Then, the blackness is gone, I wake up somewhere, in a pod. I am surrounded by 6 Computer workers and one who appears to be the boss. "Release the prisoner," the boss says. I then fall to the ground, they bring me to cell I guess. I'm tired now, I then pass out on the cold cell floor. I wake up a few hours later, but it is still as dark as earlier. There is a guard of sorts in... some type of armor. I try to ask where I am, but mid-sentence he hits me with a baton. He then tells me I'm where I'm going to stay forever. He swings his baton at me again, but I catch it in my right hand then punch him in the nose. He then curses an walks down the hallway to a room marked "Barracks." I think he's going to get multiple guards over here to beat me. I try to search for a way out, there isn't one. I'm going to die, in here, today! I'm terrified right now, the guards are running down the hallway. But wait, I think I have a plan. The guards come in and unlock my cell door. The first one swings this sabre lined with wire at me, I catch it by the handle and kick him in the shin. I take the sabre and threaten to stab the other guards. They surrender, I chop them anyway. I take their keys and go into the barracks, I take a set of "Warden's Armor" and a "Static Sabre" and run out of the barracks and run into a hall of guards holding huge weapons with the boss in the front. She then says "Welcome to UnderCity Prison." I get in a battle stance with my Sabre and then say "Bring it!"




Tell me how you liked the first part of the story! This will be a part series.
         The name's Dylan, I live in N/A, Hawaii. My parents don't tell me where we live exactly. Mainly because we live on a military reserve and she fears I might leak it. She thinks this because I love the internet. I have school today, I hate school. I'm smarter than everyone there, yet I still learn the eighth grade curriculum. My teachers are the worst part. My math teacher treats me like crap because I'm smarter than him. Luckily we have a substitute teacher today so I won't be verbally abused. So far this teacher is nice and treats everyone like a normal human. Something is off about this teacher, I keep seeing a constant flicker in his head, it's probably my imagination trying to make a reality. No, something is definitely wrong, now everything is flickering but my hands or myself. I then get up and go to the door. I can't touch it, my hand just goes through it with an electrical sensation. I'm starting to freak out, I can't do anything. I try punching the walls but nothing happens. Then I realize, If my hand goes through it, can I go through it? I then face a wall and begin pushing with all my force. Now I'm falling, I'm falling through an infinite blackness. Now all I hear is "ERROR: Check Systems." Then, the blackness is gone, I wake up somewhere, in a pod. I am surrounded by 6 Computer workers and one who appears to be the boss. "Release the prisoner," the boss says. I then fall to the ground, they bring me to cell I guess. I'm tired now, I then pass out on the cold cell floor. I wake up a few hours later, but it is still as dark as earlier. There is a guard of sorts in... some type of armor. I try to ask where I am, but mid-sentence he hits me with a baton. He then tells me I'm where I'm going to stay forever. He swings his baton at me again, but I catch it in my right hand then punch him in the nose. He then curses an walks down the hallway to a room marked "Barracks." I think he's going to get multiple guards over here to beat me. I try to search for a way out, there isn't one. I'm going to die, in here, today! I'm terrified right now, the guards are running down the hallway. But wait, I think I have a plan. The guards come in and unlock my cell door. The first one swings this sabre lined with wire at me, I catch it by the handle and kick him in the shin. I take the sabre and threaten to stab the other guards. They surrender, I chop them anyway. I take their keys and go into the barracks, I take a set of "Warden's Armor" and a "Static Sabre" and run out of the barracks and run into a hall of guards holding huge weapons with the boss in the front. She then says "Welcome to UnderCity Prison." I get in a battle stance with my Sabre and then say "Bring it!"




Tell me how you liked the first part of the story! This will be a part series.
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