Alright Hotel Mario. I only found a couple okay things about this game and a bit more bad stuff. I thought the control was okay. At least you Don't have to press up to jump, not like in the CDI Zelda games which were much worse. But one thing that confused me at first was the game play. When I first played this game (note I did not watch reviews of this game back then) on Vi zed. I was wondering whatever this game was good or not. And when I played the first stage it really disappoint me when I had to close all doors instead of jumping on enemies. And when watched an AVGN video of it I thoughts changed on this game. I now think its bad and should not play it again. Another bad thing that Angry Video Game Nerd did not mention is that the story is not so good.

For one thing, this was a pretty bad review. you really didn't go into detail at all on anything. Also, since this is a family friendly site, mentioning AVGN might raise some controversy. I'm not sure if this is really a review however.


Local Mods : should it be closed? if not, i apologize.

This game review could have been a lot better but there have been worse ones that I have seen before.

I have never played this game before so you need to tell me about your experience and crucial details about the game. Also describe the game into sections with gameplay, graphics, sounds, addictiveness, difficulty, and storyline if there is one. That way, you could make your game review flow and work to stand out other readers who are reading your review. Details are never a bad thing when it comes to game reviews and you need to be more description in order to persuade and help your readers get a sense of this game. Also keep that in mind that everyone has their own perspective and ways of describing on the games that they play. Just because Angry Video Game Nerd said that the story isn't so good, doesn't mean you have to agree as well. You are both two different people with different perspectives. 

However you did get a good start on a little bit detail of the game but you should try to elaborate more on that.

Hopefully my suggestions helped you and will help you continue to write more game reviews with better quality in the future.