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The story of team BADT - Chapter 1

 

10-03-14 07:17 PM
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So, me a and a friend have been working on a story for a long, entitled " The Story of Team BADT " Now, while I have done most of the editing, and my friend has done more of the writing, we have both contributed to the story and the editing, so we are billing it as " Co - Authors " and " Co - Editors " . 

So, without further ado, and with that out of the way, I will start the story at Chapter 1, and will try to post a chapter a day. 

The journey of team A.T.B.D
So our story begins in the land of vale on a dark night and the moon is as bright as ever. But, a dark feeling fills the air as our heroins disembark the cargo vessel in a dead run to get away from the crew.
"You think it was a good idea now, Kas?"
"Of course I do. It was the fastest way to get to Vale without having to pay."
"And of course you risk our lives to save a quick buck."
"I don't know. It was kind of fun to be able to ride on a boat instead of hiking through the desert like we usually do."
"Quiet Nibi.  Don't give her any reason to think she made a good decision."
"Eh, whatever."
"Quit running! Get back here, you stowaway," yells one one the hands of the vessel they traveled on.  "Dangit, they got way."
After running for awhile, the heroines decide to stop at a café to catch their breath. This cafe is about about three blocks from the docks.
"Man, it's so much more vibrant here. I love it." Nibi says.
"Eh I just can't wait to start the tournament this week end."
"YOU DOLT! Only students can be in the tournament." Turk says.
"Then we better find a school to join soon, Kas, if we want to compete." Zar explains.
"Oh, look at those people over there. They look tough. Why don't we ask them to fight." Nibi inquires.
"I don't know, Nibi. They seem to be robbing that store."
"Hey! Those are white fang! Let's get them." Turk says.
"YEA!" everybody says together as they get up from the table and begin walking towards them. "HEY YOU!"
"Huh? Who are you?"
"Leave them.  They are just a bunch of girls. They are of no threat to us."
Kas' face becomes completely red with anger.
"Uh oh, now you did it." Turk says. "Guys, lets leave this to her. Oh, and Nibi? Queue the her angry music"
Kas whips her rifle from her back and takes aim, but instead flips it over and engages her axe and in one slash takes down the first White Fang member like a flash of light. The other three turn to see her straighten up with blood dripping from her axe.
"We cant fail this job now! Get her!"
Two of them rush her with swords. She blocks one blow and narrowly dodges the other one as it cuts into her ear ring and scratches it, causing a trickle of blood to run down the side of her face. Her eyes burn with even more rage and Kas lets loose a fury of blows to the second White Fang goon. She literally dices him to pieces. The third struck with fear attempts to flee but Kas flips her axe back over, putting it into rifle mode and fires three rounds into his back. He drops with a look of shock on his face.
"Hmph. Now, either you can surrender, or die quickly. What will it be, boys? Are we gonna do this the easy way or are we going to do this the hard way?"
As Kas turns around, her face goes from anger to complete shock and disappointment. The last guy appears to have gotten away.
"Aw, man. I missed one. And it was just starting to get fun."
"Well, you can't win them all, sis." Turk says.
"You guys didn't see where the one guy went, did you? "
"Naw, I didn't. I was playing your music."
"Well, drat. Let's find a hotel." Kas says.
"OH NOW YOU'LL SPEND MONEY." Turk yells.
They all laugh. 

Local Mods : This is on FanFiction.net already. If this is not allowed, just let me know. But, as far as I know, it is allowed, as long as it is my work. 
So, me a and a friend have been working on a story for a long, entitled " The Story of Team BADT " Now, while I have done most of the editing, and my friend has done more of the writing, we have both contributed to the story and the editing, so we are billing it as " Co - Authors " and " Co - Editors " . 

So, without further ado, and with that out of the way, I will start the story at Chapter 1, and will try to post a chapter a day. 

The journey of team A.T.B.D
So our story begins in the land of vale on a dark night and the moon is as bright as ever. But, a dark feeling fills the air as our heroins disembark the cargo vessel in a dead run to get away from the crew.
"You think it was a good idea now, Kas?"
"Of course I do. It was the fastest way to get to Vale without having to pay."
"And of course you risk our lives to save a quick buck."
"I don't know. It was kind of fun to be able to ride on a boat instead of hiking through the desert like we usually do."
"Quiet Nibi.  Don't give her any reason to think she made a good decision."
"Eh, whatever."
"Quit running! Get back here, you stowaway," yells one one the hands of the vessel they traveled on.  "Dangit, they got way."
After running for awhile, the heroines decide to stop at a café to catch their breath. This cafe is about about three blocks from the docks.
"Man, it's so much more vibrant here. I love it." Nibi says.
"Eh I just can't wait to start the tournament this week end."
"YOU DOLT! Only students can be in the tournament." Turk says.
"Then we better find a school to join soon, Kas, if we want to compete." Zar explains.
"Oh, look at those people over there. They look tough. Why don't we ask them to fight." Nibi inquires.
"I don't know, Nibi. They seem to be robbing that store."
"Hey! Those are white fang! Let's get them." Turk says.
"YEA!" everybody says together as they get up from the table and begin walking towards them. "HEY YOU!"
"Huh? Who are you?"
"Leave them.  They are just a bunch of girls. They are of no threat to us."
Kas' face becomes completely red with anger.
"Uh oh, now you did it." Turk says. "Guys, lets leave this to her. Oh, and Nibi? Queue the her angry music"
Kas whips her rifle from her back and takes aim, but instead flips it over and engages her axe and in one slash takes down the first White Fang member like a flash of light. The other three turn to see her straighten up with blood dripping from her axe.
"We cant fail this job now! Get her!"
Two of them rush her with swords. She blocks one blow and narrowly dodges the other one as it cuts into her ear ring and scratches it, causing a trickle of blood to run down the side of her face. Her eyes burn with even more rage and Kas lets loose a fury of blows to the second White Fang goon. She literally dices him to pieces. The third struck with fear attempts to flee but Kas flips her axe back over, putting it into rifle mode and fires three rounds into his back. He drops with a look of shock on his face.
"Hmph. Now, either you can surrender, or die quickly. What will it be, boys? Are we gonna do this the easy way or are we going to do this the hard way?"
As Kas turns around, her face goes from anger to complete shock and disappointment. The last guy appears to have gotten away.
"Aw, man. I missed one. And it was just starting to get fun."
"Well, you can't win them all, sis." Turk says.
"You guys didn't see where the one guy went, did you? "
"Naw, I didn't. I was playing your music."
"Well, drat. Let's find a hotel." Kas says.
"OH NOW YOU'LL SPEND MONEY." Turk yells.
They all laugh. 

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10-03-14 07:29 PM
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Using a story which has 31 chapters and which you and someone else wrote (no telling how long ago, plus you are not the only author... AND it's already published somewhere else)... posting a chapter a day during the TdV... is done in rather bad taste, in my opinion.  (Even if it's not against the rules.)

(And yeah, the grammar of this post sucks. I know.)
Using a story which has 31 chapters and which you and someone else wrote (no telling how long ago, plus you are not the only author... AND it's already published somewhere else)... posting a chapter a day during the TdV... is done in rather bad taste, in my opinion.  (Even if it's not against the rules.)

(And yeah, the grammar of this post sucks. I know.)
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(edited by Singelli on 10-03-14 07:31 PM)    

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Singelli : I actually just found it. We wrote it a few months ago, but we are just now getting around to editing it. 

And Ethan insisted that he wanted the story to read a certain way. His call, not mine. 

Singelli : I actually just found it. We wrote it a few months ago, but we are just now getting around to editing it. 

And Ethan insisted that he wanted the story to read a certain way. His call, not mine. 

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thing1 : I honestly don't know what your post has to do with the point I was trying to make in mine. Sorry.
thing1 : I honestly don't know what your post has to do with the point I was trying to make in mine. Sorry.
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(edited by Singelli on 10-03-14 07:38 PM)    

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thing1 : hmm this turned to be a pretty interesting chapter. i was hoping someone would make her mad just cause she was a girl. She seems like very powerful person at that i'll be waiting for chapter 2. but i do hope you don't post them everyday as that wouldn't seem right during tdv
thing1 : hmm this turned to be a pretty interesting chapter. i was hoping someone would make her mad just cause she was a girl. She seems like very powerful person at that i'll be waiting for chapter 2. but i do hope you don't post them everyday as that wouldn't seem right during tdv
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deg2000 : Eh, maybe every few days. I don't know to be honest. It depends on how often I actually go and edit the story like I am supposed to. I am supposed to do 1 chapter a day, but, I have until Christmas to edit everything, so I don't know. Just depends on how lazy I am with editing the story. 

Singelli : You mentioned the grammar. I was saying that Ethan wanted tit to read that way. Why? I don't know. But his call. 
And I when I say I just found it, I was referring the fact that I just found it in our old messages, and realized that I was supposed to edit it a long time ago, but had forgotten about it. So, I decided to edit the first chapter, and that took me about half an hour. 
And it being during the Tour de Vizzed is just coincidence. 
deg2000 : Eh, maybe every few days. I don't know to be honest. It depends on how often I actually go and edit the story like I am supposed to. I am supposed to do 1 chapter a day, but, I have until Christmas to edit everything, so I don't know. Just depends on how lazy I am with editing the story. 

Singelli : You mentioned the grammar. I was saying that Ethan wanted tit to read that way. Why? I don't know. But his call. 
And I when I say I just found it, I was referring the fact that I just found it in our old messages, and realized that I was supposed to edit it a long time ago, but had forgotten about it. So, I decided to edit the first chapter, and that took me about half an hour. 
And it being during the Tour de Vizzed is just coincidence. 
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thing1 :  I was saying the grammar of my post sucked.  Sorry for being unclear.

And no, it's not a coincidence. I won't feed the back and forth posting anymore.  I'm sure you'll find places to post without me sparking conversation and encouraging it.
thing1 :  I was saying the grammar of my post sucked.  Sorry for being unclear.

And no, it's not a coincidence. I won't feed the back and forth posting anymore.  I'm sure you'll find places to post without me sparking conversation and encouraging it.
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