“Surskit use Water Pulse!” Ordered Viola.

“Dodge it and use Quick Attack!” Ordered Cedric. Froakie Quick Attacks Surskit which is instantly defeated.

“Not bad...” Said Viola. “Go! Vivillion!” Said Viola.

“Hmm... Isn't that a Butterfree!?” Asked Cedric.

“I JUST SAID ITS A VIVILLION!” Shouted Viola.

“AND WHY IS IT NUMBER 666 ON THE NATIONAL DEX!?” Asked Cedric.

“BECAUSE ITS THE DEVIL, VIVILLION USE DEATH RAY!” Ordered Viola as Vivillion gets devil horns and a devil tail she then launches her Death Ray.

“Froakie! Dodge it!” Ordered Cedric as Froakie dodges the Death Ray.

“FIRE SOME MORE, VIVILLION! FIRE YO LASER!” Ordered Viola. “IMMA FIRIN' MAH LASER! BLAAAAARGH!” Shouted Vivillion as she gets a Shoop Da' Whoop face and fire another Death Ray but instead of Death Ray its Death Laser and even if Froakie is still dodging the Death Lasers, Vivillion can't stop firing!

Then Vivillion charges the laser this time and Cedric gets an idea. “Froakie launch a Water Pulse at Vivillion's mouth!” Ordered Cedric.

“Wha... WHAT!?” Shouted Viola. Then Froakie jumps near Vivillion and launches his Water Pulse inside Vivillion's mouth and Vivillion explodes. “NO MY VIVILLION! Now how I am going to tell the trainer I borrowed her from...” Said Viola.

“So it wasn't your Vivilion!?” Asked Cedric.

“No...” Said Viola.

“Who was its then?!” Asked Cedric.

“Some guy's, AND YOU OBLITERATED IT!” Shouted Viola.

“Can I just have my freaking badge!?” Asked Cedric.

“Sure whatever, here ya go!” Said Viola as she hands over Cedric the Bug Badge. Cedric started drooling on it and is slapped by Viola. “STAHP DROOLING ON THE BADGE!” Shouted Viola.

“Oh yeah, sorry!” Said Cedric.

“Oh and don't worry about the Vivilion I am going to catch some random Vivillion and give it back to the trainer, and no one will ever know this happened!
Hopefully...” Said Viola.

“Alrighty then, bye and good luck with that!” Said Cedric as he leaves the gym.

“So how it went Cedric!?” Asked Wendy. Cedric then shows Wendy the Bug Badge. “Congrats, bro!” Said Wendy.

“Thanks, sis!” Said Cedric.

“Where are we headed now, Cedric?” Asked Wendy.

“To the next gym, I guess!” Said Cedric.

Meanwhile in Mount Coronet...
Many Neo Team Flare Grunts were climbing up Mount Coronet. Then suddenly!

“Are we there yet!?” Asked a Team Flare Grunt named, Harry.

“ARE YOU SERIOUS DO WE HAVE TO START WITH THAT!?” Shouted Lysandre as he hikes up the montain.

“Nn... Nn... No...” Said Harry.

“WELL THEN SHUDDAP!” Shouted Lysandre.

“Ok...” Said Harry.

“Sheesh... Finally, were here!” Said Lysnadre as he takes his first step on
the peak of Mount Coronet, the Spear Pillar. “And now, the world will shall be as I wanted to always be!” Said Lysandre.
“Hahahahahaha!” Laughed Lysandre. “Flare Androids!” Ordered Lysandre.

“Yes, master!?” Asked Android F-601.

“Catch me that Dialga!” Ordered Lysandre as he sees Dialga playing Go Fish with Palkia. “And you get that Palkia!” Ordered Lysnadre.

“Yes mater!” Said Android F-601, and F-602 as they get walk to Palkia and Dialga.


“Got any threes?!” Asked Dialga as she sees her cards.

“Go fish!” Said Palkia.

Then Dialga runs out of cards. “Dangit ran out of cards...” Said Dialga.

“Then that means I won, yeah!” Said Palkia. “Yeah... Yeah... Yeah... Next game...” Said Palkia.

“Not so fast...” Said Android F-601.

“What?!” Said Palkia as he looks at Android F-601 and F-602.

“Go, Malamar!” Said Android F-601. “Psychic...” Ordered Android F-601.

“Metal Claw!” Said Dialga as she uses Metal Claw on Malamar.

“Malamar, stronger Psychic!” Ordered Android F-601 as Malamar picks up Dialga with Psychic. “Now slam it to the wall!” Ordered Android F-601. “Ugh...” Said Dialga. “Go, Ultra Ball!” Said Android F-601 as he throws a Ultra Ball at Dialga and catches her. “Are you done, F-602?” Asked Android F-601.

“Almost...” Said Android F-602. “Magneton use Magnet Bomb!” Ordered Android F-602. The Magneton uses Magnet Bomb on Palkia one more time and then Palkia faints. “Go! Timer Ball!” Said Android F-602 as he throws a Time Ball at Palkia and catches him.

“Alright, Lysandre, Dialga and Palkia have been caught!” Said Android F-601.

“Excellent work now lets return to the Poke-Earth Moon Base!” Said Lysandre.
Then Team Flare go somewhere...


Meanwhile in the Kalos Region...
In Luminouse City...
In Professor Sycamore's Laboratory...

“Well it seems you guys and Rachel will probably not get along... Oh well...” Said Professor Sycamore after listening to Cedric and Wendy's experience with Rachel.

“So Professor Sycamore what is it?” Asked Wendy.

“Well I want to give you another Pokemon as a reward for coming over here!” Said Professor Sycamore. “Don't be shy choose!” Said Professor Sycamore as he gets the glass container containing 2 PokeBalls and opens it.

“Hey where is the last one!?” Asked Cedric.

“Rachel got it...” Said Professor Sycamore.

“Grr...” Said
Cedric.

“Well what are the choices this time?” Asked Wendy.

“Well Rachel took Squirtle so that leaves you with Bulbasaur and Charmander.

“I choose Bulbasaur.” Said Cedric as he gets the PokeBall containing Bulbasaur.

“Then I choose, Charmander.” Said Wendy as she choses the PokeBall containing Charmander.

“Ok that is all I have to say and good look I say on your adventure!” Said Professor Sycamore.

“Thanks, ciao!” Said Cedric and Wendy as they wave goodbye and leave the laboratory.

Meanwhile in Poke-Earth Moon...
In Neo Team Flare's Moon Base...

“RING RING PHONE CALL! RING RING PHONE CALL!” Said Xerosic's iPhone 6.
“Hello!?” Asked Xerosic.

“Lysandre your pizza is almost here!” Said the Space Pizza Delivery Guy named, Keith.

“I am sorry Mr. Lysandre is not here to take your message please leave a message after the beep. BEEP!” Said Xerosic.

“NO!” Shouted Lysandre as he grabs Xerosic's iPhone 6.

“HELLO!?” Asked Lysandre.

“Oh Mr. Lysandre I'm almost at your house to deliver your pizza!” Said Keith.

“Ok.” Said Lysandre.

“Oh wait I found your house I'll be waiting for you at your door.” Said Keith.

“Ok!” Said Lysandre as he goes to the entrance of his base.
They both then hang up.

Then Lysandre rushes to the base's main door and opens it and gives Keith a 20 PokeDollar bill and shuts the door.

“HEY WHAT ABOUT THE TIP!?” Shouted Keith. “Aww...” Said Keith as he leaves to the Space Pizza Place.

“NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM!” Said Lysandre as he eats the pizza in a minute. “MMM-MMM YUMMY!” Said Lysandre.

“OK WHAT DOES THIS HAVE TO DO WITH THE PLAN!?” Asked Xerosic.

“Absoloutely, nothing!” Said Lysandre.

“GRR...” Growled Xerosic.

Narrator – Oh my, Dialga and Palkia have been kidnapped by Neo Team Flare!
Now how will the world react to this!?
Tune in next time in another chapter of...
Pokemon X2 & Y2!

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Eirinn : What happened I don't see anything wrong with it

Look at it now that I edited it. It should look more like that. Basically when a character starts speaking you should drop down a couple of lines. Each time a new character speaks that should be done. That way it's easier to read.

Not bad work on the story btw.

Eirinn : oh... Okie Dokie then thanks