Like I said last time. 
 
Please do not just say it is the same as another game since some people do not know what that is even though it is super mario bros.
 
Also I think you should try to go in to more detail and give examples of everything.
 
Then I think you should stop comparing it to the other games because some people have not played them and do not know what you are talking about. Judge the game for what IT is not what the other games were.

awesomeguy279 : dude now you're just now mocking me so stop mocking me and even if they didn't played it they could find out for them selves so dude you are just hands up wrong oh and I DID JUDGE THE GAME FOR WHAT IT IS and it's msx you can't go into further detail and in a review you got to compare a game to another game to show differences so yeah you wrong. oh btw i bet you don't KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT REVIEWS.also, its just a review you don't have to tell me the flaws

I'll chime in here and say that
"it's just a review you don't have to tell me the flaws"
is just silly. The whole reason we can reply to reviews is to give them criticism, and this review was needing of such criticism.

As for the review, it had poor grammar, little detail, and feels..... rushed. Give more detail, slow down, and check for grammatical issues.

Good luck with future reviews!

Boxia : dude it's msx what do you expect i can't go further detail and since the reviews aren't good i'll just delete them

mostcheats43 :
1) If you can't review a game very "deeply", review another game where there's more to talk about. It's that simple.
2) You can't "delete" a review. You can get the mods to trash it, however, if you so desire.

Your first review you said it is okay and you will try to get better but if your second review is bad you just give up?
 
That seems like a big change.
 
Try reading other reviews and see what they talk about in a game.

I definitely think that it would be beneficial for you to read some professionally written reviews so that you can pick up some good tips and habits for writing good reviews. First off, you should try to review games that have a lot of depth to talk about in the first place, from there things will be a lot easier to talk and write about. 


Another thing, you shouldn't simply say that some parts of the game are just like another game, try to elaborate and talk about what is similar about them, is it a good or bad thing they are similar and just talk about it from there. This review looks like it was rushed and looks like you didn't really put a lot of time and effort into making it. Your grammar isn't the best and you should always try to capitalize your i's so it looks more professional. Other than that, you have the headings for each category down, so that's a good start. 


Overall though I think you should check out some reviews because you might just pick up on a few useful tips you can use in your own reviews. Always remember that you should be original with your work though. All I can say besides that is keep practicing and you will eventually get better with each review. I hope this helps you out!

Razor-987 :
(1 i quit reviewing games now i only play them

(2 you aren't supposed to write a review and steal tips off other
reviewer's, you have to write it in your own way instead of cheating
with tips.


(3 THIS DIDN'T HELP ME OUT, it only made me quit game reviewing even more so yea.