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Unfinished LOST chapter of the Tetris story I wrote 2 years ago.

 

07-28-14 11:01 PM
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Eddy88 : You would need to see why I never uploaded chapter 8 for the really old tetris story ever. Plus, you have to see this.

3/8/13 is the original creation date of the cancelled chapter.


Anyone actually remember a old fan story by me about something like Tetris pieces talking? Well, you may wonder why I never uploaded a chapter 8. Why? It's because halfway through, I lost all interest and never touched it again. I'm never going to finish it, so I thought I would just post this unfinished chapter that was archived in my iPod notes. For roughly 500 days. I always write long long posts in my iPod notes.

At the time I wrote this, I was playing Super Smash Bros Brawl all the time. Just a heads-up.

This is the original text:

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This chapter contains new thinking and a different writing style. If you don't like it, oh well. If you do like it, great!

Note: If you don't already know, I almost never get any time to do this. Super Smash Bros Brawl is what always gets in the way of my stuff, and I easily forget about the story.

Chapter VIII: This is why the story was stopped for a while...


Special pokemon... ones that can actually talk the human language. They are known as special to me... The special trio pokemon start to talk to each other about stuff of Super smash brosand they make their way to some random world.

"I need to talk about some Super Smash Bros stuff.", Meowth said. "I may have not been in the original smash bros or melee, but you got to love my attack in brawl. I can attack with furious claws that range enough to knock opponents far enough for help in battles."

"You couldn't believe what happened in brawl." Mewtwo said angrily. "You know how I was in melee? With the shadow ball and stuff? I got replaced by you, Lucario, in brawl! I had the same stuff as you. Almost the same, but you were in Brawl and I was in melee! Plus, I even know why brawl got worse. Pichu, Dr. Mario, Roy, even Young Link along with me weren't in brawl. Young Link became Toon Link, Roy became Ike, and Pikachu lived on while one of our favorites, Pichu ended up getting removed. Pichu may have been able to damage himself, but he was cute."

"First off, you are right about the Aura," Lucario said. "But mainly it's because of tiers."

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That's all I had written. Right when I talk about the tier list for Smash Brothers. Well, I didn't like writting in that format anyways like a book. Next time I ever write a fan story (probably based off something Kirby related with no plot or real ending), I'll be writting in the older way that I had written in the long forgotten 7 chapters before this.
Eddy88 : You would need to see why I never uploaded chapter 8 for the really old tetris story ever. Plus, you have to see this.

3/8/13 is the original creation date of the cancelled chapter.


Anyone actually remember a old fan story by me about something like Tetris pieces talking? Well, you may wonder why I never uploaded a chapter 8. Why? It's because halfway through, I lost all interest and never touched it again. I'm never going to finish it, so I thought I would just post this unfinished chapter that was archived in my iPod notes. For roughly 500 days. I always write long long posts in my iPod notes.

At the time I wrote this, I was playing Super Smash Bros Brawl all the time. Just a heads-up.

This is the original text:

--------------------

This chapter contains new thinking and a different writing style. If you don't like it, oh well. If you do like it, great!

Note: If you don't already know, I almost never get any time to do this. Super Smash Bros Brawl is what always gets in the way of my stuff, and I easily forget about the story.

Chapter VIII: This is why the story was stopped for a while...


Special pokemon... ones that can actually talk the human language. They are known as special to me... The special trio pokemon start to talk to each other about stuff of Super smash brosand they make their way to some random world.

"I need to talk about some Super Smash Bros stuff.", Meowth said. "I may have not been in the original smash bros or melee, but you got to love my attack in brawl. I can attack with furious claws that range enough to knock opponents far enough for help in battles."

"You couldn't believe what happened in brawl." Mewtwo said angrily. "You know how I was in melee? With the shadow ball and stuff? I got replaced by you, Lucario, in brawl! I had the same stuff as you. Almost the same, but you were in Brawl and I was in melee! Plus, I even know why brawl got worse. Pichu, Dr. Mario, Roy, even Young Link along with me weren't in brawl. Young Link became Toon Link, Roy became Ike, and Pikachu lived on while one of our favorites, Pichu ended up getting removed. Pichu may have been able to damage himself, but he was cute."

"First off, you are right about the Aura," Lucario said. "But mainly it's because of tiers."

--------------------

That's all I had written. Right when I talk about the tier list for Smash Brothers. Well, I didn't like writting in that format anyways like a book. Next time I ever write a fan story (probably based off something Kirby related with no plot or real ending), I'll be writting in the older way that I had written in the long forgotten 7 chapters before this.
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07-28-14 11:07 PM
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What does that have to do with Tetris? It just seems like a Super Smash Bros rant to me lol. Pretty good I guess, considering you were 12 when you wrote it.
What does that have to do with Tetris? It just seems like a Super Smash Bros rant to me lol. Pretty good I guess, considering you were 12 when you wrote it.
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tgags123 : The story that I was making in early 2013 was called, "Life of Tetris" a fan story where all 7 tetris pieces talk while random characters from popular shows and games come in and have big conversations.

I'll link the thread for what this is about:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=42025

It says chapter 4g, but it was when I used the single thread for one big story seperated in chunks of 8 chapters. You can find the other chapters by digging into the first 3 pages of the story forum with "fan fiction" filter only. Your display thread setting would change it a little. I can link them instead if you want.

Also, I was 13 because of my birthday. Sorry if you didn't notice.
tgags123 : The story that I was making in early 2013 was called, "Life of Tetris" a fan story where all 7 tetris pieces talk while random characters from popular shows and games come in and have big conversations.

I'll link the thread for what this is about:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=42025

It says chapter 4g, but it was when I used the single thread for one big story seperated in chunks of 8 chapters. You can find the other chapters by digging into the first 3 pages of the story forum with "fan fiction" filter only. Your display thread setting would change it a little. I can link them instead if you want.

Also, I was 13 because of my birthday. Sorry if you didn't notice.
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08-02-14 12:44 PM
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Hi there... Small problem, new rule. Layouts are to be removed from your post while making a story or poem or the sorts, please keep this in consideration in the future as future offences may result in a ban.
Hi there... Small problem, new rule. Layouts are to be removed from your post while making a story or poem or the sorts, please keep this in consideration in the future as future offences may result in a ban.
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Oh, forgot this, additionally Eddy88 hasn't been on in an incredibly long while and disappeared without a word, summoning him serves no purpose.
Oh, forgot this, additionally Eddy88 hasn't been on in an incredibly long while and disappeared without a word, summoning him serves no purpose.
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Frodlex : There's a new rule for removing layouts from stories? I never knew at all. I'm sorry about that. I believe the reason why you said to remove layouts from posts is because from my experience, the layout doesn't strech down far enough to even show every word. Edited it out now. If I ever do more stories, I'll instantly just edit the posts of mine for stories to remove layout. Now, I got pretty surprised seeing Eddy88 gone, like you said. Never knew he went inactive on vizzed for that long for no real reason.
Frodlex : There's a new rule for removing layouts from stories? I never knew at all. I'm sorry about that. I believe the reason why you said to remove layouts from posts is because from my experience, the layout doesn't strech down far enough to even show every word. Edited it out now. If I ever do more stories, I'll instantly just edit the posts of mine for stories to remove layout. Now, I got pretty surprised seeing Eddy88 gone, like you said. Never knew he went inactive on vizzed for that long for no real reason.
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Well, for all we know there is a good reason he left, I mean for all we know he's dead honestly, just how it is.

As for the rules yeah, it's somewhat new, I added it about a month and a half ago.
Well, for all we know there is a good reason he left, I mean for all we know he's dead honestly, just how it is.

As for the rules yeah, it's somewhat new, I added it about a month and a half ago.
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