"Who is he!?" Asked Davideo7 as he points at the young boy.
"Allow me to introduce myself... I am Ghoztanno Maffujik, but call me Ghozt!" Said the young boy who's name is Ghozt.
"Why are you doing this!?" Asked Mrfe.
"I thought you never ask..." Said Ghozt.
"I am doing this to take over Vizzed!" Said Ghozt.
"Not if I and my team stop you!" Said Kimmy as she points her Minecraft Diamond Sword at Ghozt.
"You're not getting control of Vizzed!" Said Kimmy.
"Yeah!" Said Greenluigi as he gets out his Magic Wand (not to be confused with Greenluigi's Dark Wand... This story takes place before the events of NFK's and Greenluigi's stories; remember that!).
"Hii-yaa!" Shouted Eirinn as he gets out his Ninja Katana.
"Walk away if you want to live..." Said Mrfe as he gets out his shotgun.
"Grr... I see how it is..." Said Ghozt.
"I will now retreat, but this isn't the end..." Said Ghozt as he teleports away.
"Well good riddance..." Said Mrfe.
"I think Mrfe has a scarier weapon that everyone in Quadron." Said Greenluigi.
"Right." Said Mrfe.
"Quadron, so what now he got away..." Said Davideo7.
"Well he said its not the end for him yet, so we must prepare for his comeback..." Said Kimmy.
"Affirmative, but if he refuses to surrender we have no choice but to terminate him..." Suggested Mrfe.
"Well I wouldn't think that would be too... Humane..." Said Davideo7.
"Is there anything we could do?" Asked Mrfe.
"We must perma-ban Ghozt off the server before he does something that would mess up the server!" Said Davideo7.
They all then leave the Chat Room and go to Davideo7's Profile House and enter his office.

Location: Davideo7's Profile House - Davideo7's Office.

"Dave what happened over there?" Asked Geeogree as he sees Quadron and Davideo7 enter the office.
"Nothing, just some kid nuked a hole in the General Chat!" Said Davideo7.
"Any names?" Asked tRIUNE.
"He said his name was Ghoztanno Maffujik, but he seems to like being called Ghozt..." Said Davideo7.
"Well lets perma-ban him for destroying valuable Vizzed property..." Said tRIUNE.
"Yeah, great idea!" Said Geeogree.
They then get to their PCs and try to perma-ban Ghozt, but unfortunately...
"Umm... It says that Ghozt is in no way part of Vizzed not even a guest!" Said Geeogree.
"So what should we do!?" Asked Davideo7.
"Only one thing, Davideo7; terminate Ghozt..." Suggested Mrfe.
"Mrfe you know killing other people is bad! B-A-D! MUST I SPELL IT OUT!?" Said Davideo7.
"I am very sorry then..." Said Mrfe.
"Well does this Ghozt guy even have a weakness? I mean everything has to have a weakness..." Said Eirinn.
"We don't know for sure just yet..." Said Davideo7.
"Well whatever his weakness is, we must stop him!" Said Kimmy.
Then there was a massive malfunction in Vizzed.
"Wha... What was that!" Shouted Greenluigi.
Then tRIUNE quickly looks at his PC.
"Sir its him!" Said tRIUNE as he gives Davideo7 his PC.
"Oh dear..." Said Davideo7 as he puts tRIUNE's PC on his desk.
"What!?" Asked Kimmy.
"The VZZ-Core, the heart of Vizzed has been destroyed..." Said Davideo7.
"No... NO!" Shouted Kimmy.
"And the server doesn't have that much time left..." Said Davideo7.
"How much..." Said Kimmy as she starts to cry.
"13 days..." Said Davideo7.
Then a death stare formed on Kimmy.

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I mean no disrespect when I say this but honestly this is a shopping list of dialog, there is no real flow to it and no depth, now I understand why you are probably writing this way but your form needs a lot of work. I think it might be a very good idea to go and read some published novels and pay attention to the way they tell their stories, it makes all the difference in the world.

Also the whole Vizzed fan-fiction thing is awfully rinse and repeat really hard core at this point. I'm sure you've got something more original in that head of yours, why not go for that?

Edit: All them admins and David got no real personality to them tho, buddeh, yous gots to know these peoplez before you use zem in yo stori3s tho, its gotss to be somewhat accurate don't itz?