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The Modern High School Story - Chapter 1

 

05-22-14 10:30 PM
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Characters In This Chapter:

Gus Zeeks
Clothes: Dark Purple Sweater with Hoodie, Dark Gray Jeans, Black All-Star
Shoes, 1 Black Spike Bracelet in each arm (sometimes wear nerdy
glasses {The ones with a tape in the middle})
Eye Color: Bloody Red
Hair Color: (Dyed) Black with Dark Blue and Blue-Green
Personalityhy, Zesty, Emo, Cute, Kind of Glam, Hated By All Boys and Most
Girls, Nerd, Creative, Computer Wizard, Skater, Artist, Prodigy
Hair Style: Very Long and Emo
Crush: No One
Friends: No One
Gender: Male

Simon Plasmin
Clothes: Green T-Shirt, Blue Shorts, Brown Tennis Shoes,
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Brown
Personality:
Hair Style: Normal
Crush: Vitaliana
Friends: James
Gender: Male

James Murkyz
Clothes: Sky Blue T-Shirt, Blue Jeans, Red All-Star Shoes.
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Personality:
Hair Style: Normal
Crush: No One
Friends: Simon
Gender: Male

Vitaliana Vasquez (Vita)
Clothes: Electric Blue T-Shirt, Dark Blue Jeans, Black Boots
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Personality:
Hair Style: Girly and Long
Crush: Gus
Friends: None
Gender: Female
==============================================================

It was once again the beginning of school and summer had just came to an
end and many former students had arrived to the high school. Right
now it was the time before 1st period and many former
students where with their friends outside of the classrooms and in
the hallways, however one boy was at the P.E. Field sitting down in
the bleachers drawing on his sketching book. His name is Gus Zeeks
he was a very handsome and emo guy you think he would be a stupid
person, but he is actually a nerd, sadly he is hated by all of the
boys and most of the girls for his personality, however he didn't
care all he wanted to do in the world was to become someone amazing,
but he still hasn't have any ideas of what to do, but surely he will
think about it, but right now he is drawing, however 2 boys who were
friends saw him and came by and sit next to him, Gus only moved away a little bit.
“What are you doing there, emo?” Asked Simon.
However Gus didn't respond.
“HE ASKED WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” Shouted Simon's friend, James as he gestures a punch.
“Leave me alone...” Said Gus in a scared voice.
“How about? NO!” Said Simon as he grabs Gus' sketching book and throws it to a puddle of mud.
“Lets go, Simon...” Suggested James as he leaves the P.E. Field he is then followed by Simon after wards.
Then Gus gets up and gets his wet and dirty sketchpad, then he gets his
NES Controller backpack and sees a girl in the distance, but pretends
to not notice her, but the girl did and she happens to have a crush
on Gus. This girl was near the north benches which are next to a gate
which separates the P.E. Field and the north benches.
“Poor, Gus...” Said Vitaliana, the girl that was seeing Gus.
Then the bell rings thus bringing the beginning of 1st period...
Characters In This Chapter:

Gus Zeeks
Clothes: Dark Purple Sweater with Hoodie, Dark Gray Jeans, Black All-Star
Shoes, 1 Black Spike Bracelet in each arm (sometimes wear nerdy
glasses {The ones with a tape in the middle})
Eye Color: Bloody Red
Hair Color: (Dyed) Black with Dark Blue and Blue-Green
Personalityhy, Zesty, Emo, Cute, Kind of Glam, Hated By All Boys and Most
Girls, Nerd, Creative, Computer Wizard, Skater, Artist, Prodigy
Hair Style: Very Long and Emo
Crush: No One
Friends: No One
Gender: Male

Simon Plasmin
Clothes: Green T-Shirt, Blue Shorts, Brown Tennis Shoes,
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Brown
Personality:
Hair Style: Normal
Crush: Vitaliana
Friends: James
Gender: Male

James Murkyz
Clothes: Sky Blue T-Shirt, Blue Jeans, Red All-Star Shoes.
Eye Color: Green
Hair Color: Black
Personality:
Hair Style: Normal
Crush: No One
Friends: Simon
Gender: Male

Vitaliana Vasquez (Vita)
Clothes: Electric Blue T-Shirt, Dark Blue Jeans, Black Boots
Eye Color: Blue
Hair Color: Dark Brown
Personality:
Hair Style: Girly and Long
Crush: Gus
Friends: None
Gender: Female
==============================================================

It was once again the beginning of school and summer had just came to an
end and many former students had arrived to the high school. Right
now it was the time before 1st period and many former
students where with their friends outside of the classrooms and in
the hallways, however one boy was at the P.E. Field sitting down in
the bleachers drawing on his sketching book. His name is Gus Zeeks
he was a very handsome and emo guy you think he would be a stupid
person, but he is actually a nerd, sadly he is hated by all of the
boys and most of the girls for his personality, however he didn't
care all he wanted to do in the world was to become someone amazing,
but he still hasn't have any ideas of what to do, but surely he will
think about it, but right now he is drawing, however 2 boys who were
friends saw him and came by and sit next to him, Gus only moved away a little bit.
“What are you doing there, emo?” Asked Simon.
However Gus didn't respond.
“HE ASKED WHAT ARE YOU DOING!” Shouted Simon's friend, James as he gestures a punch.
“Leave me alone...” Said Gus in a scared voice.
“How about? NO!” Said Simon as he grabs Gus' sketching book and throws it to a puddle of mud.
“Lets go, Simon...” Suggested James as he leaves the P.E. Field he is then followed by Simon after wards.
Then Gus gets up and gets his wet and dirty sketchpad, then he gets his
NES Controller backpack and sees a girl in the distance, but pretends
to not notice her, but the girl did and she happens to have a crush
on Gus. This girl was near the north benches which are next to a gate
which separates the P.E. Field and the north benches.
“Poor, Gus...” Said Vitaliana, the girl that was seeing Gus.
Then the bell rings thus bringing the beginning of 1st period...
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06-03-14 12:34 PM
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VideogamemanX : I really like how you put all that effort into talking about the characters, but I think you did a little too much when compared to the rest of the story. The actual story might only come out to be about 300 words. It's a good first chapter but could have been a bit longer.

I like how you threw in a game related thing in the backpack.
VideogamemanX : I really like how you put all that effort into talking about the characters, but I think you did a little too much when compared to the rest of the story. The actual story might only come out to be about 300 words. It's a good first chapter but could have been a bit longer.

I like how you threw in a game related thing in the backpack.
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