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05-11-14 12:30 AM
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I write fanfiction mostly, but there's been a couple times I tried to make Creepypastas. I actually want to eventually make one that is considered decent, but instead I chose to make a couple based around Mephiles from Sonic 06. In the end, it felt more like a fanfic than a CreepyPasta, but I tried to make them have photo and video "proof".

Here's the links here since they might be far too long to put on a thread as a post:?

Sonic 2006 Hidden Ending
Sonic 2006 - Episode of Mephiles

If you ask me, personally, I feel Part 2 is better by far (they were written at least a year apart), but compared to my actual fic writing, it's decent at best. ^^;
I write fanfiction mostly, but there's been a couple times I tried to make Creepypastas. I actually want to eventually make one that is considered decent, but instead I chose to make a couple based around Mephiles from Sonic 06. In the end, it felt more like a fanfic than a CreepyPasta, but I tried to make them have photo and video "proof".

Here's the links here since they might be far too long to put on a thread as a post:?

Sonic 2006 Hidden Ending
Sonic 2006 - Episode of Mephiles

If you ask me, personally, I feel Part 2 is better by far (they were written at least a year apart), but compared to my actual fic writing, it's decent at best. ^^;
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05-24-14 08:10 PM
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RaeLogan :

Wow.

You did really well!

I like how this logically shows another side to Mephalis, now, I never played the game, but I have watched all the cutscenes made into a movie. I know that people give the story a bad wrap, and yeah, time travel. Kinda hard to do logically- but the some of the stuff is pretty epic, and, the stuff you pointed out about Mephalis. I have never thought about this before, and I think that it's awesome that you put this together.

My question is if Mephalis is the conscious of the sun god, or not. 

You did do very well, thank you for sharing this! One critique that I'd like to make, is that the words could flow together a little bit better perhaps, either that or it's my left eye bugging out cause it's weaker then my right and I've forgotten my glasses.

But yes! You did excellent! this kept me entertained for an hour or two just reading it!

This needs more attention, may I summon some others here who may like it?

And oh, I happen to be making a sonic story right now, would you enjoy reading that?

Thanks for keeping your fanfic clean, it is well thought out rather than just using images of corpses that don't make any sense to portray "depth".
RaeLogan :

Wow.

You did really well!

I like how this logically shows another side to Mephalis, now, I never played the game, but I have watched all the cutscenes made into a movie. I know that people give the story a bad wrap, and yeah, time travel. Kinda hard to do logically- but the some of the stuff is pretty epic, and, the stuff you pointed out about Mephalis. I have never thought about this before, and I think that it's awesome that you put this together.

My question is if Mephalis is the conscious of the sun god, or not. 

You did do very well, thank you for sharing this! One critique that I'd like to make, is that the words could flow together a little bit better perhaps, either that or it's my left eye bugging out cause it's weaker then my right and I've forgotten my glasses.

But yes! You did excellent! this kept me entertained for an hour or two just reading it!

This needs more attention, may I summon some others here who may like it?

And oh, I happen to be making a sonic story right now, would you enjoy reading that?

Thanks for keeping your fanfic clean, it is well thought out rather than just using images of corpses that don't make any sense to portray "depth".
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I have to say, this is the best fanfic I have ever read.  (though a little drawn out)


Wonderful job on portraying the character emotions, I never thought much about mephiles not being the bad guy... just treated wrongly.


It's good food for thought. 
I have to say, this is the best fanfic I have ever read.  (though a little drawn out)


Wonderful job on portraying the character emotions, I never thought much about mephiles not being the bad guy... just treated wrongly.


It's good food for thought. 
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Sword legion : Thanks!

I like to explore all sorts of possible (SFW!) things to do with Mephiles, as a way to inspire other people to try something as well. I've also been an active crazed fangirl for the guy since I got the game back in April 2007, so I've had a long time to really pick the guy apart, rebuild him and dissect his aspects (that sounds weird...)

Here's a sub-blog of mine that has some of my headcanons and observations of him, with a lot of the ideas actually getting incorporated as a basis or inspiration for a lot of Tumblr RPers that use Mephiles (they've credited or given nods to me for the one to spark the idea... I squee all the time for that, ha), and one of my observations I gave to the Archie comics at a convention a year before Mephiles had the cameo, actually seems to be accepted as canon to the comics now, so I think I made a good impression on talking with the guys. *grins nervously*

... I should add more that to blog soon... it's been a few months...

I actually think that Mephiles is the conscious half of a clone/imitation of Solaris created in the lab, as it seems kinda strange how everyone just accepts that Soleanna can just harness a god in a tube and just be okay with electrocuting it. But, that's just my speculation...

Ah, I did the entire thing on my iPod with the notes apps, so I tend to not really do much editing at that point... it's usually freestyle there. But, there's always room for improvement, of course. I may make another or something, but it's not really in the writing stage anyway. I also have glasses, and my left eye is my messed up one, so I think I feel your pain too.

Again, thank you! I even tried to make it have "proof" stuff, and here's a fun fact: All of Mephiles dialogue that's not in the XBL message system is all juxtapositions of actual dialogue he has in the game. You can actually cobble the pieces together to create them, which I would have, but as I eventually established that I was supposed to not be able to capture much of the evidence, then having high quality audio would be a bit hokey for that. I had the game script on standby and ran through all the text from Mephiles to build his dialogue to help it feel plausible, as it's accessible on the disc anyway. I did that as a hidden sort of touch that probably no one would notice unless I told them. XD

Sure! Attract all the people you want! I love to share my stories.

Thank you, again, and sure, I'd like to see it.?

I find that things can be scarier when you leave it to your own imagination rather than just describe all the gore. "Nothing" is scarier, I guess. Like the first Alien movie... where you didn't really see the creature until around the end. You just knew it was there, and lurking... but it wasn't out in the open. Classic.

Slightly off topic, here's another sort of creepy-ish short fic I did a few years ago that messes with the idea of being a mindscrew without resorting to gore and violence. And here's a short sad one also about Mephiles... He's my favorite fic fodder.

bombchu link: Thank you!
Sword legion : Thanks!

I like to explore all sorts of possible (SFW!) things to do with Mephiles, as a way to inspire other people to try something as well. I've also been an active crazed fangirl for the guy since I got the game back in April 2007, so I've had a long time to really pick the guy apart, rebuild him and dissect his aspects (that sounds weird...)

Here's a sub-blog of mine that has some of my headcanons and observations of him, with a lot of the ideas actually getting incorporated as a basis or inspiration for a lot of Tumblr RPers that use Mephiles (they've credited or given nods to me for the one to spark the idea... I squee all the time for that, ha), and one of my observations I gave to the Archie comics at a convention a year before Mephiles had the cameo, actually seems to be accepted as canon to the comics now, so I think I made a good impression on talking with the guys. *grins nervously*

... I should add more that to blog soon... it's been a few months...

I actually think that Mephiles is the conscious half of a clone/imitation of Solaris created in the lab, as it seems kinda strange how everyone just accepts that Soleanna can just harness a god in a tube and just be okay with electrocuting it. But, that's just my speculation...

Ah, I did the entire thing on my iPod with the notes apps, so I tend to not really do much editing at that point... it's usually freestyle there. But, there's always room for improvement, of course. I may make another or something, but it's not really in the writing stage anyway. I also have glasses, and my left eye is my messed up one, so I think I feel your pain too.

Again, thank you! I even tried to make it have "proof" stuff, and here's a fun fact: All of Mephiles dialogue that's not in the XBL message system is all juxtapositions of actual dialogue he has in the game. You can actually cobble the pieces together to create them, which I would have, but as I eventually established that I was supposed to not be able to capture much of the evidence, then having high quality audio would be a bit hokey for that. I had the game script on standby and ran through all the text from Mephiles to build his dialogue to help it feel plausible, as it's accessible on the disc anyway. I did that as a hidden sort of touch that probably no one would notice unless I told them. XD

Sure! Attract all the people you want! I love to share my stories.

Thank you, again, and sure, I'd like to see it.?

I find that things can be scarier when you leave it to your own imagination rather than just describe all the gore. "Nothing" is scarier, I guess. Like the first Alien movie... where you didn't really see the creature until around the end. You just knew it was there, and lurking... but it wasn't out in the open. Classic.

Slightly off topic, here's another sort of creepy-ish short fic I did a few years ago that messes with the idea of being a mindscrew without resorting to gore and violence. And here's a short sad one also about Mephiles... He's my favorite fic fodder.

bombchu link: Thank you!
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RaeLogan :

okay, all my fanfics can be read here:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74789

And that's my work! I hope that you enjoy it! The Sonic Story that I'm making takes place after a fan retconned sonic 06, since time travel kinda messes with the story to much, and I want to use Silver. In my fan story, cause it's easier that way, Silver comes from the Sol Dimension with Blaze rather than the future.

I'm REALLY impressed by your Mephalis blog! That is some real dedication! Keep it up!

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You guys might like this.

we actually have a story writer's club here if you want part of that. I am part of it, and recommend it if you plan on writing anything here.

Thank you for showing us this, I really appreciate dedicated fans.

RaeLogan :

okay, all my fanfics can be read here:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=74789

And that's my work! I hope that you enjoy it! The Sonic Story that I'm making takes place after a fan retconned sonic 06, since time travel kinda messes with the story to much, and I want to use Silver. In my fan story, cause it's easier that way, Silver comes from the Sol Dimension with Blaze rather than the future.

I'm REALLY impressed by your Mephalis blog! That is some real dedication! Keep it up!

Gamin'Gal :
sonicthehedgehog57 :

You guys might like this.

we actually have a story writer's club here if you want part of that. I am part of it, and recommend it if you plan on writing anything here.

Thank you for showing us this, I really appreciate dedicated fans.

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I fully agree with you as well. Part two is much better. It's refreshing to see a creepypasta that doesn't focus on hyper-realistic-scary stuff.
I would actually love to see more if you ever write anymore ^.^
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I fully agree with you as well. Part two is much better. It's refreshing to see a creepypasta that doesn't focus on hyper-realistic-scary stuff.
I would actually love to see more if you ever write anymore ^.^
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