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Is this even in the right spot? I'm not sure, I'll just post it here.

(Please note I am not trying to rob anyone of their jersey, I just wanted to share a story I made.)

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Beginnings

“Humanity, a word lost in Equestria. Legends say that these so called “humans” lived in a Utopian society, a perfect place. With no problems, they were able to become into flawless, spiritual beings, and left this world.”
Twilight Sparkle was doing her everyday check of the library, making sure ever book was there, in it’s right spot.
“Well Spike, I believe that covers every book, now let’s go get some tea shall we?” – Twilight said.
“Uh, Twi there is another book here, it seems old.” – Spike said, picking up an old, dusty book.
“What do you mean? I have it right here, every book is accounted for, there couldn’t be any book out of it’s place.” – Twilight said, frantically. “Here, let me see it.”
Spike start walking towards the purple unicorn, but she had already used her magic to grab it from his little dragon hands.
“Boy, sure glad I could help” – Spike sarcastically said to her, but Twi was to busy studying the book to notice.
“Hm, where could this have come from? I’ve never seen it before” – She started to dust to book off, and instantly dropped it. “Spike, where did you get this book?” – She said, nervously.
“I found it buried while I was searching for gems” – Spike said, his voice breaking up a bit. “Why, is it something bad?”
“Huh? Oh, no reason...” – Twilight said, chuckling anxiously. “Now, if you excuse me, I have to write a letter to Princess Celestia” As she said that, she grabbed the book and ran to her bedroom, leaving Spike alone.
“Dear Princess Celestia,
I recently found a book, well Spike did, but I can’t read it. It seems to be in another language, one I have no knowledge of. Strange, considering that I have a complete understanding of all languages known to pony-kind.
I would like to get your help on this.
Yours truly,
Princess Twilight Sparkle”

“That should do it, now to send this to Princess Celestia.” – Twilight said to herself. Her horn started lighting up, a light purple glow covering her horn and the letter, before the letter disappeared in thin air.
“Well, it’s a good thing I learned to send letters without the help of Spike, he said it took a lot out of him” – Twilight began saying, before being stopped by a bright white glow of another letter appearing, this time written in royal yellow.
“Dear Princess Twilight,
If this book you found is truly what I fear it is, then I would like to have a word with you. Come to the palace as soon as you can, and bring the other elements of harmony. Come prepared, and bring the book with you.
Yours truly,
Princess Celestia.”

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With the help of Spike and the other mane 6, Twilight was ready to go to Canterlot. In fact, all of them were, physically at least. They had no idea what the book was, or why Celestia feared it. If someone as powerful as her was terrified of it, who knows what it may contain.
“A-Are you sure P-Princess Celestia wants all of us to go?” – Fluttershy peeped, each word breaking
“Y-Yeah, maybe some of us could stay here in case something bad happens” – Rainbow Dash said, siding with Fluttershy.
“Now, Rainbow, Flutters, are y’all telling me y’all are scared to go?” – Apple Jack spoke up, glinting at the two ponies.
“Me? Scared? No way. I just think some ponies should stay in case a monster comes rampaging through the city” – Rainbow said, with false bravery.
“No need, with my brother and his men helping Ponyville, I think the town should be safe.” – Twilight said. “Besides, Princess Celestia said all the elements of harmony should go.”
“Come on Dashie, it’s going to be so much fun!” – Pinkie said jumping around, oblivious to the worried faces of her friends.
“Now darling, let’s not get too ahead of our self's, this might not be a fun mission.” – Rarity said, calming her pink friend.
“Girls, I don’t want to rush you or anything, but the train for Canterlot leaves in five minutes” – Spike said, intruding.
With heavy spirits, the Mane 6 and Spike got their luggage, and jumped into the train.
“Train 314, leaving Ponyville to Canterlot is now departing. Be sure to get on the train!”
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The train still chugging along the tracks, most of the Mane 6 were sleeping, with Twilight being the only one awake on the train, with books up to her neck, reading each one at the same time.
“Darling, I know you’re worried about this book, but you need your rest.” – Rarity said in between yawns.
“I can’t sleep. I need to learn about this language. There seems to be no information about it. It seems that it just died off, as the book is ancient, some of it’s pages are close to tearing off.” – Twilight said, her magic picking up book after book.
“Twi, everyone here is curious about it, but Princess Celestia will answer our questions. She has lived for thousands, maybe even millions of years, she knows everything.” – Rarity said, assuring her purple friend.
“Hmm, maybe you are right.” – Twilight said, putting the books down. “Let’s just hope that it isn't something too bad...” – She said before falling asleep.
Rarity smiled at her sleeping friend, before getting into a comfortable position and falling into deep slumber.

With the ponies all rested, they got out of the train. With their heads up, they started walking towards the big castle of Celestia and Luna. It wasn't long since Twilight had visited here, becoming a Princess herself. It flooded back memories to her, of her childhood, the changeling attack and wedding, all of it rushed into her head.
They soon entered the castle, royal guards around every corner, providing the best protection for her highness.
“Ah, there you are, my little ponies. How good it is to see you.” – Celestia said walking towards them.
“It’s good to see you as well Princess” – Twilight said, her face gleaming with happiness as she saw the tall, white alicorn in front of her.
“Such an honor to see you again” – Rarity said, bowing.
“Please, don’t bow. I am but another pony, I feel no need for royal treatment” – Celestia said, picking Rarity up.
“Oh please, you know you love it when ponies treat you like that.” – A voice said behind Celestia. She looked back, and saw her little sister Luna walking towards her.
“Luna, I thought you were sleeping. I didn't expect you to be here” – Celestia said, blushing a bit at her sisters comment.
“Well, I couldn't miss the opportunity to see something this important.” – Luna said, looking at the other ponies.
“It is great to see you Luna” – Twilight said smiling.
“Yeah! It’s super duper mega ultra-“ – Pinkie started saying, before being interrupted by Apple Jack.
"What my friend’s trying to say, is that it’s wonderful seeing y’all Princess at the same time” – Apple Jack said embarrassed by her pink friend.
“While it is great meeting all of you again, we really must get down to business. Twilight, did you bring the book?” – Luna said, interrupting the ponies.
“Huh? Oh yeah! It’s write here. It’s written in a strange matter, I can’t make any of this out.” – Twilight said, picking the old book from her bag and handing it to Luna
Luna got a quick glimpse of it, before dropping it. A look of worry and terror in her face.
“N-No... It can’t be true, it’s just a myth, a legend. It isn't real...” – Luna said, each word breaking with fear.
“Luna, my sister, what is wrong?” – Celestia said, a worried look on her face by her sister’s reaction.
“T-The book... it’s about... the humans” – Luna said shaking, the last word coming out as a horrified whisper.
“U-mans? What’s that?” – Rainbow Dash said in a confused voice.
“It’s pronounce humans, and they’re a myth. The legends goes like this.” – Twilight said, clearing her throat,
“In a time long past, no pony knows exactly how long, there used to be a species known as the humans. They were a race of perfection, living in an Utopian society. The humans were advanced infinitely beyond us. Each of them was an example of a god. No other species could even come close to them. However, they weren't satisfied. They wanted more. They became obsessed with spiritual transcendence. One day, they reached it and disappeared. Everything about them was gone, no evidence was left.” – Twilight read from a book she was carrying.
“B-But, if they are just legends... why is the book important?” – Fluttershy peeped up, shyly asking.
“Because it is not a myth.” – A voice boomed through the caste.
“Discord! Show yourself. What are you doing here?” – Celestia shouted, showing anger in her voice.
Suddenly, a chill started going around the ponies. A loud cackling, followed by a loud thunder. In front of them now stood a large Draconequus. The god of disharmony himself, Discord.
“My, my. A bit touchy are we today Celestia?” – Discord said, mocking her.
“What are you doing here? I thought you were in the Ever-free Forest!” – Twilight said, while the rest of the ponies were in shock.
“Well, you started talking about myths and legends. Considering I am one, I feel that it’s appropriate I talk too.” – The god said, scaling towards the Princesses.
“Discord, what do you know about this so called “myth”?” – Luna said, backing up.
“Well, I know a lot about it, but I’m not sure I want to say it after being treated like this...” - Discord said, with his hand over his chin.
Celestia and Luna both lighted up their horns with power.
“Well, maybe you would like me to repeat the question... What do you know about the Humans?” – Celestia said, both angrily yet calm at the same time.
“Alright, if you’re gonna get all magic on me,I’ll tell you.” – Discord said.
“Just as precious little Princess Twilight said, the Humans lived a long time ago. However, she got something wrong.
Humans didn't disappear. They’re still alive. The book holds the secret on how to get there, but there is a problem. Humans have been alone for so much time, I don’t know how they will react to newcomers in their utopia. I can translate the book, if you want.” – Discord said, the last line with cockiness.
“Well, it seems we have no choice. Discord, you will translate this book, while we try to find the Humans. Right girls?” – Twilight said turning back. She was responded by 4 “Yeah!”’s and one, soft “not really” from Fluttershy.
“Oh come on Fluttershy! This is the adventure of a life time, finding a lost utu-otu... city!” - Rainbow Dash said. “It wont be the same without you”
“W-Well, if you put it like that...” – Fluttershy started to speak, before Pinkie started to.
“Then it’s settled! We shall leave and find the Humans!” – The pink mare said excitedly whilst dancing.
“Hold on every-pony. This mission is going to be dangerous. I believe that it might not be the best idea for you to take on.” – Celestia said, interrupting Pinkie from her dancing.
“I agree with my sister. You ponies aren't ready for something of this magnitude.” – Luna said siding with her sister.
“Oh please! We are ready to tackle on anything! Plus, the chance to find an ancient civilization is just heart-pounding! – Twilight said, each word getting more vivid and excited.
“Plus, it’s not like their going to be alone, they have me!” – Discord butted in, before looking down after Celestia and Luna gave him a stern look.
Celestia sighed, then said. “Well, if this is what you ponies want, I can’t change your mind. Just promise me you will be safe, and if anything goes wrong, you will come back here immediately.”
“Oh Thank You! Princess, we won’t let you down. – Twilight said, before her and the others got out of the castle, running with excitement.
“Well, I should be going with them...” – Discord said, grabbing the book, before being stopped by Celestia.
“Discord, if anything happens to them and I find out it’s your fault, I swear... You won’t want to know what I will do to you.”
“Don’t worry Celestia, they’re going to be safe, I promise...” – Discord said running away.
“Be careful too Discord” – Celestia called out, which made Discord stop for a moment, before joining the Mane Six.
Is this even in the right spot? I'm not sure, I'll just post it here.

(Please note I am not trying to rob anyone of their jersey, I just wanted to share a story I made.)

---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

Beginnings

“Humanity, a word lost in Equestria. Legends say that these so called “humans” lived in a Utopian society, a perfect place. With no problems, they were able to become into flawless, spiritual beings, and left this world.”
Twilight Sparkle was doing her everyday check of the library, making sure ever book was there, in it’s right spot.
“Well Spike, I believe that covers every book, now let’s go get some tea shall we?” – Twilight said.
“Uh, Twi there is another book here, it seems old.” – Spike said, picking up an old, dusty book.
“What do you mean? I have it right here, every book is accounted for, there couldn’t be any book out of it’s place.” – Twilight said, frantically. “Here, let me see it.”
Spike start walking towards the purple unicorn, but she had already used her magic to grab it from his little dragon hands.
“Boy, sure glad I could help” – Spike sarcastically said to her, but Twi was to busy studying the book to notice.
“Hm, where could this have come from? I’ve never seen it before” – She started to dust to book off, and instantly dropped it. “Spike, where did you get this book?” – She said, nervously.
“I found it buried while I was searching for gems” – Spike said, his voice breaking up a bit. “Why, is it something bad?”
“Huh? Oh, no reason...” – Twilight said, chuckling anxiously. “Now, if you excuse me, I have to write a letter to Princess Celestia” As she said that, she grabbed the book and ran to her bedroom, leaving Spike alone.
“Dear Princess Celestia,
I recently found a book, well Spike did, but I can’t read it. It seems to be in another language, one I have no knowledge of. Strange, considering that I have a complete understanding of all languages known to pony-kind.
I would like to get your help on this.
Yours truly,
Princess Twilight Sparkle”

“That should do it, now to send this to Princess Celestia.” – Twilight said to herself. Her horn started lighting up, a light purple glow covering her horn and the letter, before the letter disappeared in thin air.
“Well, it’s a good thing I learned to send letters without the help of Spike, he said it took a lot out of him” – Twilight began saying, before being stopped by a bright white glow of another letter appearing, this time written in royal yellow.
“Dear Princess Twilight,
If this book you found is truly what I fear it is, then I would like to have a word with you. Come to the palace as soon as you can, and bring the other elements of harmony. Come prepared, and bring the book with you.
Yours truly,
Princess Celestia.”

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

With the help of Spike and the other mane 6, Twilight was ready to go to Canterlot. In fact, all of them were, physically at least. They had no idea what the book was, or why Celestia feared it. If someone as powerful as her was terrified of it, who knows what it may contain.
“A-Are you sure P-Princess Celestia wants all of us to go?” – Fluttershy peeped, each word breaking
“Y-Yeah, maybe some of us could stay here in case something bad happens” – Rainbow Dash said, siding with Fluttershy.
“Now, Rainbow, Flutters, are y’all telling me y’all are scared to go?” – Apple Jack spoke up, glinting at the two ponies.
“Me? Scared? No way. I just think some ponies should stay in case a monster comes rampaging through the city” – Rainbow said, with false bravery.
“No need, with my brother and his men helping Ponyville, I think the town should be safe.” – Twilight said. “Besides, Princess Celestia said all the elements of harmony should go.”
“Come on Dashie, it’s going to be so much fun!” – Pinkie said jumping around, oblivious to the worried faces of her friends.
“Now darling, let’s not get too ahead of our self's, this might not be a fun mission.” – Rarity said, calming her pink friend.
“Girls, I don’t want to rush you or anything, but the train for Canterlot leaves in five minutes” – Spike said, intruding.
With heavy spirits, the Mane 6 and Spike got their luggage, and jumped into the train.
“Train 314, leaving Ponyville to Canterlot is now departing. Be sure to get on the train!”
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The train still chugging along the tracks, most of the Mane 6 were sleeping, with Twilight being the only one awake on the train, with books up to her neck, reading each one at the same time.
“Darling, I know you’re worried about this book, but you need your rest.” – Rarity said in between yawns.
“I can’t sleep. I need to learn about this language. There seems to be no information about it. It seems that it just died off, as the book is ancient, some of it’s pages are close to tearing off.” – Twilight said, her magic picking up book after book.
“Twi, everyone here is curious about it, but Princess Celestia will answer our questions. She has lived for thousands, maybe even millions of years, she knows everything.” – Rarity said, assuring her purple friend.
“Hmm, maybe you are right.” – Twilight said, putting the books down. “Let’s just hope that it isn't something too bad...” – She said before falling asleep.
Rarity smiled at her sleeping friend, before getting into a comfortable position and falling into deep slumber.

With the ponies all rested, they got out of the train. With their heads up, they started walking towards the big castle of Celestia and Luna. It wasn't long since Twilight had visited here, becoming a Princess herself. It flooded back memories to her, of her childhood, the changeling attack and wedding, all of it rushed into her head.
They soon entered the castle, royal guards around every corner, providing the best protection for her highness.
“Ah, there you are, my little ponies. How good it is to see you.” – Celestia said walking towards them.
“It’s good to see you as well Princess” – Twilight said, her face gleaming with happiness as she saw the tall, white alicorn in front of her.
“Such an honor to see you again” – Rarity said, bowing.
“Please, don’t bow. I am but another pony, I feel no need for royal treatment” – Celestia said, picking Rarity up.
“Oh please, you know you love it when ponies treat you like that.” – A voice said behind Celestia. She looked back, and saw her little sister Luna walking towards her.
“Luna, I thought you were sleeping. I didn't expect you to be here” – Celestia said, blushing a bit at her sisters comment.
“Well, I couldn't miss the opportunity to see something this important.” – Luna said, looking at the other ponies.
“It is great to see you Luna” – Twilight said smiling.
“Yeah! It’s super duper mega ultra-“ – Pinkie started saying, before being interrupted by Apple Jack.
"What my friend’s trying to say, is that it’s wonderful seeing y’all Princess at the same time” – Apple Jack said embarrassed by her pink friend.
“While it is great meeting all of you again, we really must get down to business. Twilight, did you bring the book?” – Luna said, interrupting the ponies.
“Huh? Oh yeah! It’s write here. It’s written in a strange matter, I can’t make any of this out.” – Twilight said, picking the old book from her bag and handing it to Luna
Luna got a quick glimpse of it, before dropping it. A look of worry and terror in her face.
“N-No... It can’t be true, it’s just a myth, a legend. It isn't real...” – Luna said, each word breaking with fear.
“Luna, my sister, what is wrong?” – Celestia said, a worried look on her face by her sister’s reaction.
“T-The book... it’s about... the humans” – Luna said shaking, the last word coming out as a horrified whisper.
“U-mans? What’s that?” – Rainbow Dash said in a confused voice.
“It’s pronounce humans, and they’re a myth. The legends goes like this.” – Twilight said, clearing her throat,
“In a time long past, no pony knows exactly how long, there used to be a species known as the humans. They were a race of perfection, living in an Utopian society. The humans were advanced infinitely beyond us. Each of them was an example of a god. No other species could even come close to them. However, they weren't satisfied. They wanted more. They became obsessed with spiritual transcendence. One day, they reached it and disappeared. Everything about them was gone, no evidence was left.” – Twilight read from a book she was carrying.
“B-But, if they are just legends... why is the book important?” – Fluttershy peeped up, shyly asking.
“Because it is not a myth.” – A voice boomed through the caste.
“Discord! Show yourself. What are you doing here?” – Celestia shouted, showing anger in her voice.
Suddenly, a chill started going around the ponies. A loud cackling, followed by a loud thunder. In front of them now stood a large Draconequus. The god of disharmony himself, Discord.
“My, my. A bit touchy are we today Celestia?” – Discord said, mocking her.
“What are you doing here? I thought you were in the Ever-free Forest!” – Twilight said, while the rest of the ponies were in shock.
“Well, you started talking about myths and legends. Considering I am one, I feel that it’s appropriate I talk too.” – The god said, scaling towards the Princesses.
“Discord, what do you know about this so called “myth”?” – Luna said, backing up.
“Well, I know a lot about it, but I’m not sure I want to say it after being treated like this...” - Discord said, with his hand over his chin.
Celestia and Luna both lighted up their horns with power.
“Well, maybe you would like me to repeat the question... What do you know about the Humans?” – Celestia said, both angrily yet calm at the same time.
“Alright, if you’re gonna get all magic on me,I’ll tell you.” – Discord said.
“Just as precious little Princess Twilight said, the Humans lived a long time ago. However, she got something wrong.
Humans didn't disappear. They’re still alive. The book holds the secret on how to get there, but there is a problem. Humans have been alone for so much time, I don’t know how they will react to newcomers in their utopia. I can translate the book, if you want.” – Discord said, the last line with cockiness.
“Well, it seems we have no choice. Discord, you will translate this book, while we try to find the Humans. Right girls?” – Twilight said turning back. She was responded by 4 “Yeah!”’s and one, soft “not really” from Fluttershy.
“Oh come on Fluttershy! This is the adventure of a life time, finding a lost utu-otu... city!” - Rainbow Dash said. “It wont be the same without you”
“W-Well, if you put it like that...” – Fluttershy started to speak, before Pinkie started to.
“Then it’s settled! We shall leave and find the Humans!” – The pink mare said excitedly whilst dancing.
“Hold on every-pony. This mission is going to be dangerous. I believe that it might not be the best idea for you to take on.” – Celestia said, interrupting Pinkie from her dancing.
“I agree with my sister. You ponies aren't ready for something of this magnitude.” – Luna said siding with her sister.
“Oh please! We are ready to tackle on anything! Plus, the chance to find an ancient civilization is just heart-pounding! – Twilight said, each word getting more vivid and excited.
“Plus, it’s not like their going to be alone, they have me!” – Discord butted in, before looking down after Celestia and Luna gave him a stern look.
Celestia sighed, then said. “Well, if this is what you ponies want, I can’t change your mind. Just promise me you will be safe, and if anything goes wrong, you will come back here immediately.”
“Oh Thank You! Princess, we won’t let you down. – Twilight said, before her and the others got out of the castle, running with excitement.
“Well, I should be going with them...” – Discord said, grabbing the book, before being stopped by Celestia.
“Discord, if anything happens to them and I find out it’s your fault, I swear... You won’t want to know what I will do to you.”
“Don’t worry Celestia, they’re going to be safe, I promise...” – Discord said running away.
“Be careful too Discord” – Celestia called out, which made Discord stop for a moment, before joining the Mane Six.
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