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Tears That I Shed

 

04-21-14 02:29 PM
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Water droplets falling down 
Upon my blackened gown
The sky grows bleak and gray
Indicating a dark, sad day

Of mourning and despair
Life is so unfair
Why did you go away?
Why couldn't I be the one to pay,
For the sin we committed?

The sin of forbidden love
Between two people of different classes
The love we felt came in flashes
Not caring if our social stances clashes

Death took you quickly and quietly
Here I visit your grave with the rain falling lightly
The rain...the rain
The rain are the tears that I shed for you


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Water droplets falling down 
Upon my blackened gown
The sky grows bleak and gray
Indicating a dark, sad day

Of mourning and despair
Life is so unfair
Why did you go away?
Why couldn't I be the one to pay,
For the sin we committed?

The sin of forbidden love
Between two people of different classes
The love we felt came in flashes
Not caring if our social stances clashes

Death took you quickly and quietly
Here I visit your grave with the rain falling lightly
The rain...the rain
The rain are the tears that I shed for you


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04-21-14 03:45 PM
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Very nice work. This poem has depth and heart to it. I could rave on about it, but with the brevity and sweetness of the emotions in the poem, a long winded reply would seem out of place.

Suffice to say, I'm looking forward to seeing more poems from you, should you choose to share them with us.
Very nice work. This poem has depth and heart to it. I could rave on about it, but with the brevity and sweetness of the emotions in the poem, a long winded reply would seem out of place.

Suffice to say, I'm looking forward to seeing more poems from you, should you choose to share them with us.

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EDIT: double post.
EDIT: double post.

Quote of the week: "Love is a bit of a mix between a healthy obsession, and the best parts of the best kind of an addiction" ~Me
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(edited by Eirinn on 04-21-14 07:46 PM)    

04-21-14 04:44 PM
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Eirinn : Thank you so much! I will be sharing some more work here!
Eirinn : Thank you so much! I will be sharing some more work here!

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04-21-14 04:54 PM
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That was a very nice Poem! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work, and keep writing Poems! 9,9/10 (It's actually a 10/10.)
That was a very nice Poem! I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the good work, and keep writing Poems! 9,9/10 (It's actually a 10/10.)

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04-21-14 05:04 PM
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Alex2323 : Thanks so much for the comment! I'm definitely going to share some more work here.
Alex2323 : Thanks so much for the comment! I'm definitely going to share some more work here.

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