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04-14-14 03:17 PM
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One day, you're sleeping in bed. You're having a pleasant dream about your girlfriend, and the party she's throwing for you tomorrow. Suddenly, you hear a creak of a door, and you jolt awake. I walk into your room, holding a baseball bat and a trash bag. You try to scream, but I'm already upon you, bringing my bat onto your head. You feel fuzzy as you tumble off your bed. You lose all consciousness as I stuff you into my bag.

You wake up gasping for air. You hear the thuds of a shovel on dirt. Terror grasps you as you realize you're being buried alive. All else becomes irrelevant as you struggle to breath, and suffocate. It takes mere minutes before you succumb to darkness...
One day, you're sleeping in bed. You're having a pleasant dream about your girlfriend, and the party she's throwing for you tomorrow. Suddenly, you hear a creak of a door, and you jolt awake. I walk into your room, holding a baseball bat and a trash bag. You try to scream, but I'm already upon you, bringing my bat onto your head. You feel fuzzy as you tumble off your bed. You lose all consciousness as I stuff you into my bag.

You wake up gasping for air. You hear the thuds of a shovel on dirt. Terror grasps you as you realize you're being buried alive. All else becomes irrelevant as you struggle to breath, and suffocate. It takes mere minutes before you succumb to darkness...

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I have never been like this but I hope I never will have that.
I have never been like this but I hope I never will have that.

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Well... this was... um... Okay, I honestly don't know what I just read or why I just read it. But it was definitely interesting. I wasn't really sure what to expect when I saw the title "Suffocation And Darkness". It seemed to conflict a little bit with the peaceful beginning. I knew something was going to happen. Great story! We should do this again sometime. Except I get to bury you alive.

Or does this story have some second deeper meaning that completely went over my head?
Well... this was... um... Okay, I honestly don't know what I just read or why I just read it. But it was definitely interesting. I wasn't really sure what to expect when I saw the title "Suffocation And Darkness". It seemed to conflict a little bit with the peaceful beginning. I knew something was going to happen. Great story! We should do this again sometime. Except I get to bury you alive.

Or does this story have some second deeper meaning that completely went over my head?

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Thebiguglyalien : Nope. No deeper meaning. I wanted to write something scary or creepy, so I wrote this and Plants Are Alive, Too... As for you burying me alive next time? I don't think so!
Thebiguglyalien : Nope. No deeper meaning. I wanted to write something scary or creepy, so I wrote this and Plants Are Alive, Too... As for you burying me alive next time? I don't think so!

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