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04-12-14 07:09 PM

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ok so like the games good in all but its really hard to understand the japan. the story i can't read on japan like i can only read the moves. also a few secs in it gives you trainers instently to the first route also you even got the coler wrong its not sand also i got stuck on first city so good luck getting likes

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04-12-14 07:17 PM

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Hello and welcome to vizzed! I'm not sure if you read the rules, but I just wanted to let you know that reviews are supposed to be at least 100 words in length.

However, if you wanted to discuss the game, there IS an area for game discussions!

How did you get through the game if you couldn't read the words? hehe What color is wrong? You never made it past the first city? Maybe you can get some help from someone else on here who's a little older

Hello and welcome to vizzed! I'm not sure if you read the rules, but I just wanted to let you know that reviews are supposed to be at least 100 words in length.

However, if you wanted to discuss the game, there IS an area for game discussions!

How did you get through the game if you couldn't read the words? hehe What color is wrong? You never made it past the first city? Maybe you can get some help from someone else on here who's a little older

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04-12-14 07:32 PM

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Singelli : the color was sand and that's not right

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04-12-14 08:00 PM

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As singelli said, reviews have to at least be 100 words, and I am going to give you a few good tips to improve your reviews! The first thing you should do for your review is break it down into categories and go from there with talking about each one in greater detail. Not only does it look more professional than just one biog block of text, but it is just visually easier to look at.

Also, you should be honest about your scores and really talk about the key pros and cons about the game and what the reason behind your scoring was. Hopefully this helps, and don't give up, reviewing is just one of those things you get better at with practice. Keep working at it and I promise you will get better at it!