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03-29-14 01:33 PM
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I can't believe after all this time,
My life has been stalled, stopped on a dime.

Goodness, what could we have done to avoid this?
Only I, and I alone was in control, so why?
No, I refuse to accept this stagnation.
No, I refuse to accept that fate.
All I have to do is break the monotony.

Dead or alive, finish the fight,
In time, my good friends, we'll know what's right.
So never be upset when something doesn't go your way,
All of our dreams and fears willl come true on this day.
Please, don't cry.
Please, don't fret.
Every single time, you do that, and it makes it that much harder
As I've been saying all this time,
Really, this one's goodbye.
I can't believe after all this time,
My life has been stalled, stopped on a dime.

Goodness, what could we have done to avoid this?
Only I, and I alone was in control, so why?
No, I refuse to accept this stagnation.
No, I refuse to accept that fate.
All I have to do is break the monotony.

Dead or alive, finish the fight,
In time, my good friends, we'll know what's right.
So never be upset when something doesn't go your way,
All of our dreams and fears willl come true on this day.
Please, don't cry.
Please, don't fret.
Every single time, you do that, and it makes it that much harder
As I've been saying all this time,
Really, this one's goodbye.
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(edited by Frodlex on 04-01-14 06:00 PM)     Post Rating: 1   Liked By: Sword Legion,

03-29-14 03:20 PM
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Nice work on the poem, as always. You always have a certain depth with meaning beyond just the surface value of your words. Very nice.
Nice work on the poem, as always. You always have a certain depth with meaning beyond just the surface value of your words. Very nice.
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03-29-14 06:25 PM
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I hate when my life stalls. Also a question, on the third line you write the word "we" , are you asking your self consious a question? I guess It really doesnt matter, Im just cuious about It.
I hate when my life stalls. Also a question, on the third line you write the word "we" , are you asking your self consious a question? I guess It really doesnt matter, Im just cuious about It.
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03-29-14 06:33 PM
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BtotheH :

Yes, I am asking myself a question.

I talk to myself a lot.
BtotheH :

Yes, I am asking myself a question.

I talk to myself a lot.
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04-07-14 03:42 PM
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The poem means that you're disappointed with yourself and how you spend your time. You want to move forward in life, but it seems like that is almost something that you cannot obtain, yet you know you can. You want the the security of the moment. But that security will bring you to the goal. But's it's hard to do. Hard to leave stuff behind. Or someone behind?

I sense the letting go of a girl?

How was this assesment? :3
The poem means that you're disappointed with yourself and how you spend your time. You want to move forward in life, but it seems like that is almost something that you cannot obtain, yet you know you can. You want the the security of the moment. But that security will bring you to the goal. But's it's hard to do. Hard to leave stuff behind. Or someone behind?

I sense the letting go of a girl?

How was this assesment? :3
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04-07-14 05:40 PM
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Sword legion :

You are over analyzing this. It's not that complicated. In fact, it seems you missed the intent altogether.

Try rereading it. And this time, literally read between the lines
Sword legion :

You are over analyzing this. It's not that complicated. In fact, it seems you missed the intent altogether.

Try rereading it. And this time, literally read between the lines
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