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MARIO: Why I think it's bad

 
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03-07-14 06:26 PM
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Staboo1616 here with my 1st game/hack review.

MARIO, a creepypasta that some people are still trying to crack. I'm not here to Crack though, I'm here to review.
Graphics:4     I'm not a hater but this is weird. The Graphics are like any Mario Game. 
Sound:5          The sound was weird. The last level had the Mario dies music playing first, indicating it was the last level. So, I guess you     could say it was well organized? 
 Story:2            The story is that Mario has captured the princess and your someone else in the Land after Mario. Pretty basic. Too basic.
Depth:1            You can literally beat the game in under 25 minutes. Enough said.
Difficulty:2        The game is pretty easy, but things like hidden platforms and pipes make it sort of challenging.

Thank you for reading this Game/Hack review. Staboo1616 Out!
Staboo1616 here with my 1st game/hack review.

MARIO, a creepypasta that some people are still trying to crack. I'm not here to Crack though, I'm here to review.
Graphics:4     I'm not a hater but this is weird. The Graphics are like any Mario Game. 
Sound:5          The sound was weird. The last level had the Mario dies music playing first, indicating it was the last level. So, I guess you     could say it was well organized? 
 Story:2            The story is that Mario has captured the princess and your someone else in the Land after Mario. Pretty basic. Too basic.
Depth:1            You can literally beat the game in under 25 minutes. Enough said.
Difficulty:2        The game is pretty easy, but things like hidden platforms and pipes make it sort of challenging.

Thank you for reading this Game/Hack review. Staboo1616 Out!
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03-07-14 06:50 PM
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Not terrible, but it is lacking. A lot. I like that you broke it into categories, but you really did not explain the categories well. You gave one example for each thing. You should give a lot more examples, and also explain the category as a whole. After reading your review, I still have no idea what the game is about, nor do i know if it is a good game or not. That is not good. That means that your review did not serve it's purpose. Again, it is not terrible for a first review, but it is not very good. Maybe this will help you in the future:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

Read that thread before making your next review, it will help you out a lot.
Not terrible, but it is lacking. A lot. I like that you broke it into categories, but you really did not explain the categories well. You gave one example for each thing. You should give a lot more examples, and also explain the category as a whole. After reading your review, I still have no idea what the game is about, nor do i know if it is a good game or not. That is not good. That means that your review did not serve it's purpose. Again, it is not terrible for a first review, but it is not very good. Maybe this will help you in the future:

https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

Read that thread before making your next review, it will help you out a lot.
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03-07-14 09:05 PM
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tgags123 :   Thank you for the advice. It will really help me later.

tgags123 :   Thank you for the advice. It will really help me later.
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04-03-14 09:52 PM
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I agree with tgags, but I am going to cut you a break since this is your first review. I am glad that you broke it down into categories which is the professional way of starting off a review, but I think you could definitely go into greater detail with each category of the review and talk about the good or bad points and explain why. What you say for each part of the review should be indicative of your overall score. 


Not bad for a first review though, you have the basic organization for a review down and you met the 100 word minimum requirements.  All I can say is keep reviewing because you will get better with practice. It is just one if those things you get better at through mastery. So by all means don't be discouraged and keep on making more reviews!
I agree with tgags, but I am going to cut you a break since this is your first review. I am glad that you broke it down into categories which is the professional way of starting off a review, but I think you could definitely go into greater detail with each category of the review and talk about the good or bad points and explain why. What you say for each part of the review should be indicative of your overall score. 


Not bad for a first review though, you have the basic organization for a review down and you met the 100 word minimum requirements.  All I can say is keep reviewing because you will get better with practice. It is just one if those things you get better at through mastery. So by all means don't be discouraged and keep on making more reviews!
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