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01-23-14 09:03 AM
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She was the one I thought was the one
Everyone else a distant two
yet she dropped me to a three
or a four
She was the one that taught me to count
when I was content with the knowledge I had
She was the one I thought was the one
Everyone else a distant two
yet she dropped me to a three
or a four
She was the one that taught me to count
when I was content with the knowledge I had
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Nice poem when I read it I could sense feeling into it. 
Nice poem when I read it I could sense feeling into it. 
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Not bad, man. It was short and sweet, and straight to the point. Showed that it doesn't take a lot of words to make a point.
Not bad, man. It was short and sweet, and straight to the point. Showed that it doesn't take a lot of words to make a point.
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nice job! Your poem was well thought out and straight to the point! It was very interesting for me to read and I would love to read another one of yours if you make more! Keep up the good work!
nice job! Your poem was well thought out and straight to the point! It was very interesting for me to read and I would love to read another one of yours if you make more! Keep up the good work!
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I liked it!
I'm not entirely sure what you mean by being dropped to a three or a four by the others, but your point of the poem is clear. I'd like to read more of your work!
I liked it!
I'm not entirely sure what you mean by being dropped to a three or a four by the others, but your point of the poem is clear. I'd like to read more of your work!
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 should become a poet this is really nice
 should become a poet this is really nice
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Thanks everyone, the feedback is appreciated.
Thanks everyone, the feedback is appreciated.
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