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Demon Spotting Blues
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12-12-13 08:28 AM
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(Sean,Hailey,Matthew and Father McGeady were all hiding in some bushes by a large field at night,no one else was around but them,the field was empty)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 SEAN: So instead of going out for a drink with my friend,I chose to come here because you believe you think a demon lives here in this field?

HAILEY: It's true,I know people who have seen it every night,people in my prayer group have spotted it,it lurks in the shadows and I want Father McGeady to drive it away,it is making people uneasy

SEAN: Do you know how crazy that sounds? A demon? Nothing in this field but grass and cow sh...dirt

MCGEADY: Sean my son,Hailey believes in all these things as do I and I know there are demons all over,and this one stays by the field because it is near my church,it wants to invade the church and make people follow his evil ways

SEAN: Did you have a drink before coming here Father? Do you know how mental you sound?

MCGEADY: Sean,you are not a true believer in a lot of religious aspects,but Satan is always wanting people to go against God and all that is good in life

SEAN: Ok,ok,this is not one of your sermons now,I get this on Sundays,if people have seen a demon then wouldn't this be a big deal with news crews everywhere?

HAILEY: No one believes it,so we are here to find it and then get it out of here for good,Good will always triumph over evil

SEAN: I really wish this was a bad dream but it's not,Matthew,you buy into this?

MATTHEW: I just wanted out the house,my room mate is driving me crazy,so this is a nice change of pace

HAILEY: Look,look

(Hailey points to the field)

MCGEADY: You see it my child?

SEAN: I don't see anything

HAILEY: By the trees

(They all look at the trees by the field and see what looks like a pair of red glowing eyes)

SEAN: What? It is probably nothing,probably some sad teens with nothing else to do,although they are doing something better than I am right now

HAILEY: That is what everyone sees,the eyes,glowing red and fierce in the dark

MATTHEW: Whatever it is,it is not moving

HAILEY: It's watching us,waiting to see what we will do

SEAN: (sighs) I know what I want to do,meet my friend for that drink

MCGEADY: I think we should go into the middle of the field and present ourselves to it and then I can convince it to go back to where it came from

SEAN: Ok Superpriest,you do that

HAILEY: Let's do that then

(All 4 of them walked out to the middle of the field and then stood and waited)

HAILEY: Now the demon can see us better,he will come to us I am sure

MATTHEW: Do we really want that? I am getting a little freaked now

MCGEADY: Oh demon,why do you stalk our land? This is Holy land,go back to where you came

SEAN: You think that is going to work? This is so ridicu....

(Before Sean could finish his sentence the demon sprinted out from the trees at lightning speed and decapitated Sean with one of it's claws,Hailey screams and runs away with Matthew)

MCGEADY: You may strike me down,but God's soldiers fight on and Satan will never win

(The demon punches Father McGeady so hard it makes him fly through the air and hit hard against the trees,the demon then sprints after Hailey and Matthew who are nearly out the field)

MATTHEW: Oh man,oh man,I should of just stayed home with my stupid room mate

(The demon sprints by Matthew,slicing him in half as it goes by with it's razor sharp claws,it heads to Hailey and tackles her down)

HAILEY: You will not win,you will never win

(The demon blows out black smoke from it's mouth into Hailey's mouth,her eyes soon turn red and glowing like the demon's,she stands up,no emotion in her face,she walks back into the field with the demon and hides in the trees as more people come into the field to take a shortcut,the demon smiles,Hailey smiles back)

THE END
(Sean,Hailey,Matthew and Father McGeady were all hiding in some bushes by a large field at night,no one else was around but them,the field was empty)                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 SEAN: So instead of going out for a drink with my friend,I chose to come here because you believe you think a demon lives here in this field?

HAILEY: It's true,I know people who have seen it every night,people in my prayer group have spotted it,it lurks in the shadows and I want Father McGeady to drive it away,it is making people uneasy

SEAN: Do you know how crazy that sounds? A demon? Nothing in this field but grass and cow sh...dirt

MCGEADY: Sean my son,Hailey believes in all these things as do I and I know there are demons all over,and this one stays by the field because it is near my church,it wants to invade the church and make people follow his evil ways

SEAN: Did you have a drink before coming here Father? Do you know how mental you sound?

MCGEADY: Sean,you are not a true believer in a lot of religious aspects,but Satan is always wanting people to go against God and all that is good in life

SEAN: Ok,ok,this is not one of your sermons now,I get this on Sundays,if people have seen a demon then wouldn't this be a big deal with news crews everywhere?

HAILEY: No one believes it,so we are here to find it and then get it out of here for good,Good will always triumph over evil

SEAN: I really wish this was a bad dream but it's not,Matthew,you buy into this?

MATTHEW: I just wanted out the house,my room mate is driving me crazy,so this is a nice change of pace

HAILEY: Look,look

(Hailey points to the field)

MCGEADY: You see it my child?

SEAN: I don't see anything

HAILEY: By the trees

(They all look at the trees by the field and see what looks like a pair of red glowing eyes)

SEAN: What? It is probably nothing,probably some sad teens with nothing else to do,although they are doing something better than I am right now

HAILEY: That is what everyone sees,the eyes,glowing red and fierce in the dark

MATTHEW: Whatever it is,it is not moving

HAILEY: It's watching us,waiting to see what we will do

SEAN: (sighs) I know what I want to do,meet my friend for that drink

MCGEADY: I think we should go into the middle of the field and present ourselves to it and then I can convince it to go back to where it came from

SEAN: Ok Superpriest,you do that

HAILEY: Let's do that then

(All 4 of them walked out to the middle of the field and then stood and waited)

HAILEY: Now the demon can see us better,he will come to us I am sure

MATTHEW: Do we really want that? I am getting a little freaked now

MCGEADY: Oh demon,why do you stalk our land? This is Holy land,go back to where you came

SEAN: You think that is going to work? This is so ridicu....

(Before Sean could finish his sentence the demon sprinted out from the trees at lightning speed and decapitated Sean with one of it's claws,Hailey screams and runs away with Matthew)

MCGEADY: You may strike me down,but God's soldiers fight on and Satan will never win

(The demon punches Father McGeady so hard it makes him fly through the air and hit hard against the trees,the demon then sprints after Hailey and Matthew who are nearly out the field)

MATTHEW: Oh man,oh man,I should of just stayed home with my stupid room mate

(The demon sprints by Matthew,slicing him in half as it goes by with it's razor sharp claws,it heads to Hailey and tackles her down)

HAILEY: You will not win,you will never win

(The demon blows out black smoke from it's mouth into Hailey's mouth,her eyes soon turn red and glowing like the demon's,she stands up,no emotion in her face,she walks back into the field with the demon and hides in the trees as more people come into the field to take a shortcut,the demon smiles,Hailey smiles back)

THE END
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