Pok?mon Light Platinum is such a great hack to play. It's not a challenging game if you know what you are doing. I'm giving this game a 10 overall because this Pokémon game seems to be more popular amongst the other Pokémon games on this website. I'm giving this game an 8 for the graphics because I personally think the graphics could be better in some parts, but the graphics are pretty great overall. I'm giving sound a 9 because the game audio itself is spot on and personally great. I haven't experienced a sound glitch while playing Light Platinum so the sound was a pretty good factor for the game. Addictiveness gets a big, fat 10 not only because it's popular amongst the other Pokémon games on this site but lots of people like to play this game every time they get on this website. Light Platinum is really popular and most people have gotten this specific game on an emulator called "Visual Boy Advance" which is a Game boy Advance emulator. The light platinum storyline gets a 10 because throughout the game, there is lots to offer. For example, After beating the Zhery league, you get to head to the Lauren Region, Take on 8 more gyms to fight the Lauren Elite 4. There's more to offer in this game like free Pokémon and more rivals to fight. Pokémon Light Platinum has a really good storyline. I love it. Depth of this game gets a 9. Pokémon Light Platinum does take a while to beat, but it's worth it because this is a pretty popular Rom hack of Pokémon. If you like to play a pretty long Pokémon hack, Light Platinum is just for you. Last but not least, Difficulty. Difficulty gets an 4 because trainers in this game may be easy, but when you face the first Pokémon League, you are SO in for a challenge. The champion is VERY tough. I mean it. I love me a good challenge at Pokémon Leagues. The controls for this game are not really confusing. Controls for this game gets a 3 just cause the controls are not hard at all to figure out.

Nice job on your first review man, I think you did and you covered a lot of the key things a review should have on your very first try, so excellent job. May I suggest though that you break your review down into categories like graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc and then go from there talking about them. You don't really have to, but I think it makes it look more professional and better to read if it is broken down into sections rather than just one gigantic summary. 


I am glad that you reviewed this game though, I agree it is pretty awesome, it is my favorite pokemon hack of all time, and it is one of the most played games on vizzed as well so I think you made a good choice to review this game. Overall keep up the good work, just be sure to break down your review and then discuss it in detail, then length shouldn't be a problem. The only other thing I can say is, if you want to improve, keep writing more reviews and it will get easier. You have the main idea, you will just continue to get better through practice. Keep up the good work!