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To Atlantis We Sail :D Chapter 1
10-27-13 06:56 PM
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Ok Book 3 . Chapter one . Got some new characters and some new dangers . If any of you readers have suggestions then please let me know Here goes England , 1960 ..... day of the week . Morning : Zed - " Ahhh . Hey Amy should I get this sword ? " Amy - " Ever since the King appointed you general for leading a fleet you have been acting differently " Zed - " We are living in wealth for an amount of time . Why not cherish it ? And I think I am going to get the swords" Amy - " Whatever . I just want to hurry home " Zed - " Yeah . We leave tomorrow . Are you sure you can survive without me ? " Amy - " I am coming with you " Zed - " What ? Why ? It is much safer here and ..... better . You don't want to spend time on a dirty old ship " Amy - " Nice try but you are going to have to try better and harder to get rid of me " Zed - Twas worth a shot " The crew and Zed and Amy were now typically royalty . Because Zed was going to lead an expedition for England he was treated accordingly . They were set to leave tomorrow . To Atlantis Zed and his crew would sail . with his new ship he would have a fleet of ten more to lead . All was good for the captain . Night . They had made it to their homes and Zed and Amy were in bed preparing for Amy - " Goodnight Zed . To think . Tomorrow we will be sailing the seas searching for treasure . " Zed - " Sweetdreams Amy " Amy dozed off but Zed waited until about 4 in the morning and waited for the appropriate moment to leave . Soon that moment came . The captain put on his pirate clothes and took about three bed sheets . He quietly ran outside after writing and leaving a note on a table in the living room . What was he going to do now ? The captain did not have possession of the map... instead it was being guarded at the local library . Being as it was so early in the morning the library was locked but stillhad two guards on watch . The keys were given to a head council to keep for a night . Looking quiet normal and fittd in Zed snuck over to a head council's house . Luckily for him there was a tree right next to the bedroom window . The doors of the house were all locked so Zed would have to use the tree . Zed drew his sword which he always had on hand and used it as a sickle to climb the tree . A limb extended right towards the window which Zed used to draw closer to the house . When he came close enough he noticed the library keys on a nightstand on the other side of the window . The captain also had a knife which he used to make a circle in the window . He did not take the knife out but rather moved the handle up as ta make the circle fall out to him so he could catch it . This worked to perfection and Zed then received teh keys . He used the same method that he used to climb up the tree to get down . Morning . 5 : 30 . There was a little more light in the sky and Zed had made it to the library . There was also a tree there which he climbed to get to the top of the building . He still had the bed sheets though . He tied four rocks which he had picked up from the ground to the four corners of one sheet . He then three the sheet down and jumped off the really tall building BUT used to other sheet as a parachute . The two guards were in front of the library and the sheets fell directly on them .... . Before they could get it off the captain let go of his parachute halfway down and also landed on top of them . Zed - " Thanks for breaking my fall fellows " The captain then opened the library with the key he stole and left the knocked out guards in the dust . Afterwards he proceeded to the back of the library where he found a book which had a golden medallion on the cover . This he took . He then continued to search till he found .... the Map . He simply tucked it in his Pirate shirt and proceeded towards the door which he locked . He then hastily ran back to his house with the stolen items . He unlocked his door , ran upstairs and then jumped into bed without Amy noticing . Then immediately she woke up . Amy - * Yawns * " That was a goodnight's Zed - " Like a baby darling " Amy - " Why are you in your pirate clothes ? " Zed - " I wanted to surprise you ..... Surprise " Amy - " Ok...... You look sweaty . What were you doing ? " Zed - " The sheets are hot so I sweat a lot . Yeah thats is " Amy - " Are you sure you are OK ? You seem a bit off " Zed - " Nope . Everything is dandy " * Kisses Amy's forehead * " Don't wrry your pretty little head about it " Amy - " Ok ......... " The two then got ready for the day ahead got dressed . They ate breakfast and on their way out Amy noticed a note on the table in the living room . Zed had originally left it there in case he got caught but did not an no longer needed it . Amy - " Hmm. A note " Zed - " Don't read it !!! " Amy - " Why not ? It is just a note " Zed - " Um..... Because it is a ...... written on paper . Mind the paper cuts . Here let me get that for you * Takes note and crushes it up then throws it away * Amy - " Ok....... Why did you do that ? " Zed - " It is just a note . No worries . " Amy - " You stole something last night didn't you " Zed - " Whaaa ? No no no non no no no no no no nope .... Ok yes " Amy - * Sigh * " Ok . What was it ? " Zed - " A key . and A map " Amy - " YOU STOLE THE LIBRARY KEY AND THE MAP ??? !!! " Zed - " I said a key and A map . And yes but keep it down ... We don't want the crown to hear about this " Amy - " I can't believe you did this . Why did you do this ? " Zed - " No time to explain . Grab your things and lets leave and get the crew before the crown finds out . " The General opened the door and was greeted by a head council and about 15 soldiers pointing guns at him . Zed - " Aww sea monkeys " The captain was taken in chains to the royal court that day . But before we was taken he said something to Amy Zed - " Roger is still here . Find him . Take a ship . Get the crew ..... and meet me at sea . an island in Bahamas . I'll be there " Amy ran off informing Roger or searching for him anyway and Zed was brought to the royal court with two guards to his side . King - " Captain Zed . Stealing ? From the crown ? The penalty will be death . By Hang " Zed - " Um... yeah about that do you think I could pick that please ? My execution method ? " King - " You want to choose how you die ? " Zed - " Yeah . If I am going out might as well be a way I find fit . I mean it is the least you can do . I did give you the map after all " King - " Fine . What method of Execution do you wish to be appointed ? " Zed - " Cement shoes " The map and book were taken from Zed and he was sentenced for execution the following day . The map was this time given to general Pete to keep . Amy met up with Roger and he complied to the plan . The various crew members were found and a ship was given to them . They did not have to steal it but they bought it as they no longer lived like pirates and were free . The next morning Roger was now the captain off the new ship and was accompanied by Zed's old crew . Roger - " It has been a year since I felt this free . Too many stuck up British folk . Needed to smell that salty see air againnnnnnah ( that was fir you user ) . " Matthew - " I agree . Too many rules . It felt like I was in jail again . " Luke - " Yeah . It makes me as jolly as a roger ( that is where his name came from yes ) to get back to the pirate life " Roger - " LIsten up yah scury dogssssah !!! It seems that our beloved captain has concocketed another one of his hairbrain shemes . Now we will sail to the Bahamas ... Is that right Ms . Amy ? " Amy - " Yes Captain Roger " Roger - " Good . Swab the deck ! Batten down the hatches ! Drop the sails ! Let the seas be ready for The Red Quennnnnnah ( New ship's name ) Hahah ! Sp that was chapter 1 . Wadya think ? England , 1960 ..... day of the week . Morning : Zed - " Ahhh . Hey Amy should I get this sword ? " Amy - " Ever since the King appointed you general for leading a fleet you have been acting differently " Zed - " We are living in wealth for an amount of time . Why not cherish it ? And I think I am going to get the swords" Amy - " Whatever . I just want to hurry home " Zed - " Yeah . We leave tomorrow . Are you sure you can survive without me ? " Amy - " I am coming with you " Zed - " What ? Why ? It is much safer here and ..... better . You don't want to spend time on a dirty old ship " Amy - " Nice try but you are going to have to try better and harder to get rid of me " Zed - Twas worth a shot " The crew and Zed and Amy were now typically royalty . Because Zed was going to lead an expedition for England he was treated accordingly . They were set to leave tomorrow . To Atlantis Zed and his crew would sail . with his new ship he would have a fleet of ten more to lead . All was good for the captain . Night . They had made it to their homes and Zed and Amy were in bed preparing for Amy - " Goodnight Zed . To think . Tomorrow we will be sailing the seas searching for treasure . " Zed - " Sweetdreams Amy " Amy dozed off but Zed waited until about 4 in the morning and waited for the appropriate moment to leave . Soon that moment came . The captain put on his pirate clothes and took about three bed sheets . He quietly ran outside after writing and leaving a note on a table in the living room . What was he going to do now ? The captain did not have possession of the map... instead it was being guarded at the local library . Being as it was so early in the morning the library was locked but stillhad two guards on watch . The keys were given to a head council to keep for a night . Looking quiet normal and fittd in Zed snuck over to a head council's house . Luckily for him there was a tree right next to the bedroom window . The doors of the house were all locked so Zed would have to use the tree . Zed drew his sword which he always had on hand and used it as a sickle to climb the tree . A limb extended right towards the window which Zed used to draw closer to the house . When he came close enough he noticed the library keys on a nightstand on the other side of the window . The captain also had a knife which he used to make a circle in the window . He did not take the knife out but rather moved the handle up as ta make the circle fall out to him so he could catch it . This worked to perfection and Zed then received teh keys . He used the same method that he used to climb up the tree to get down . Morning . 5 : 30 . There was a little more light in the sky and Zed had made it to the library . There was also a tree there which he climbed to get to the top of the building . He still had the bed sheets though . He tied four rocks which he had picked up from the ground to the four corners of one sheet . He then three the sheet down and jumped off the really tall building BUT used to other sheet as a parachute . The two guards were in front of the library and the sheets fell directly on them .... . Before they could get it off the captain let go of his parachute halfway down and also landed on top of them . Zed - " Thanks for breaking my fall fellows " The captain then opened the library with the key he stole and left the knocked out guards in the dust . Afterwards he proceeded to the back of the library where he found a book which had a golden medallion on the cover . This he took . He then continued to search till he found .... the Map . He simply tucked it in his Pirate shirt and proceeded towards the door which he locked . He then hastily ran back to his house with the stolen items . He unlocked his door , ran upstairs and then jumped into bed without Amy noticing . Then immediately she woke up . Amy - * Yawns * " That was a goodnight's Zed - " Like a baby darling " Amy - " Why are you in your pirate clothes ? " Zed - " I wanted to surprise you ..... Surprise " Amy - " Ok...... You look sweaty . What were you doing ? " Zed - " The sheets are hot so I sweat a lot . Yeah thats is " Amy - " Are you sure you are OK ? You seem a bit off " Zed - " Nope . Everything is dandy " * Kisses Amy's forehead * " Don't wrry your pretty little head about it " Amy - " Ok ......... " The two then got ready for the day ahead got dressed . They ate breakfast and on their way out Amy noticed a note on the table in the living room . Zed had originally left it there in case he got caught but did not an no longer needed it . Amy - " Hmm. A note " Zed - " Don't read it !!! " Amy - " Why not ? It is just a note " Zed - " Um..... Because it is a ...... written on paper . Mind the paper cuts . Here let me get that for you * Takes note and crushes it up then throws it away * Amy - " Ok....... Why did you do that ? " Zed - " It is just a note . No worries . " Amy - " You stole something last night didn't you " Zed - " Whaaa ? No no no non no no no no no no nope .... Ok yes " Amy - * Sigh * " Ok . What was it ? " Zed - " A key . and A map " Amy - " YOU STOLE THE LIBRARY KEY AND THE MAP ??? !!! " Zed - " I said a key and A map . And yes but keep it down ... We don't want the crown to hear about this " Amy - " I can't believe you did this . Why did you do this ? " Zed - " No time to explain . Grab your things and lets leave and get the crew before the crown finds out . " The General opened the door and was greeted by a head council and about 15 soldiers pointing guns at him . Zed - " Aww sea monkeys " The captain was taken in chains to the royal court that day . But before we was taken he said something to Amy Zed - " Roger is still here . Find him . Take a ship . Get the crew ..... and meet me at sea . an island in Bahamas . I'll be there " Amy ran off informing Roger or searching for him anyway and Zed was brought to the royal court with two guards to his side . King - " Captain Zed . Stealing ? From the crown ? The penalty will be death . By Hang " Zed - " Um... yeah about that do you think I could pick that please ? My execution method ? " King - " You want to choose how you die ? " Zed - " Yeah . If I am going out might as well be a way I find fit . I mean it is the least you can do . I did give you the map after all " King - " Fine . What method of Execution do you wish to be appointed ? " Zed - " Cement shoes " The map and book were taken from Zed and he was sentenced for execution the following day . The map was this time given to general Pete to keep . Amy met up with Roger and he complied to the plan . The various crew members were found and a ship was given to them . They did not have to steal it but they bought it as they no longer lived like pirates and were free . The next morning Roger was now the captain off the new ship and was accompanied by Zed's old crew . Roger - " It has been a year since I felt this free . Too many stuck up British folk . Needed to smell that salty see air againnnnnnah ( that was fir you user ) . " Matthew - " I agree . Too many rules . It felt like I was in jail again . " Luke - " Yeah . It makes me as jolly as a roger ( that is where his name came from yes ) to get back to the pirate life " Roger - " LIsten up yah scury dogssssah !!! It seems that our beloved captain has concocketed another one of his hairbrain shemes . Now we will sail to the Bahamas ... Is that right Ms . Amy ? " Amy - " Yes Captain Roger " Roger - " Good . Swab the deck ! Batten down the hatches ! Drop the sails ! Let the seas be ready for The Red Quennnnnnah ( New ship's name ) Hahah ! Sp that was chapter 1 . Wadya think ? |
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Awesome as always! (I always welcome shout outs ) What is this, the 5th time he's been excuted? He should get a little punch card for next time. xD Awesome as always! (I always welcome shout outs ) What is this, the 5th time he's been excuted? He should get a little punch card for next time. xD |
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A user of this : Yeah . Poor captain . I wonder how he is going to get out of this one Lets just wait and see and shall we ? |
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