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The Tales of Wanted Dead Zed . Chapter 9

 

10-14-13 06:20 PM
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Chapter 9 of book 2 . No one reads them anymore but enjoy anyway . Who am I even talking to ? Myself ? Meh . Well enjoy this story myself . Thanks Zed . Hey anytime Zed .  



Day 10 , night . English Fleet . 




Commander Williams - " Lord Herrald . What is our status and location ? " 
Lord Herrald - " The ship is in .. well its shipshape . The winds are getting stronger and we are just about to enter Dedmond's Waters Commander " 
Williams - " Good . Arm the ships . Tell them to be ready for the arrival of this " Captain Dedmond "      " 
Herrald - " Yes Sir " 



Word was passed on ship after ship to be ready . The Fleet of English vessels were now entering the dreaded waters that had been cursed along with its owner .  It did not take long for the weather to get worse . Thunder started . Lightening Flashed . Rain beat dwon upon the ships . Twas almost like a hurricane 



Herrald  - " The weather has worsened . Maybe these waters are cursed " 
Williams - " That is just bad weather . We experience it all the time Lord Herrald . Don't be supersticious  like a foolish man . " 
Herrald - " Aren't you the least bit worried about this ? " 
Williams - " A little bad weather cannot scare me . I have a fleet of ten ships armed with canons and privateers . I am not worried at all " 
Herrald - " Well maybe you are right . " 
Williams - " I am . Now stop acting like a scared baby and toughen up like the confident and strong man you are  " 





The weather continued until .... it calmed down a bit . The seas were beginning to be settle . The lightening and thunder ceased and the rain had stopped thumping the ships . 



Williams - " Well it seems we are approaching the eye of this storm . And this " Dedmond "  is nowhere to be found . 
Herrald - " I guess you were right ..... " 
Privateer 1 - " Sirs . The water around the ships are turning black . " 
Williams - " What ? Well I wonder what strnge phenomenon is this " 



Soon the ships had come to an abrupt stop halfway between the eye of the storm . The water that surrounded the circular body of water was natureally coloured but the water in it was now completely black . 

Privateer 3 - " Sirs . The ships have stopped sailing but the wind is still blowing and the sails are lowered " 
Williams - " What in the name of England ? " 




Soon all the ships started moving to the side outer ring of the eye , starting with the one the Commander was on . When they arrived at the ring they started sailing in a circular formation , following the ring of the eye . 




Williams - " Well I'll be "  


This continued until all the ten ships were sailing in circles .  Then . Something started to rise in the center of the eye .  All the ships looked in wonder at it . 


Privateer 5 - " Sir . Something is rising in the center " 
Williams - " What is it ? Can you get a clear view ? " 
Privateer 5 - " Its ..... a skull " ( Listen to this till I say stop ) :  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E





The skull in the water continued rising and under the skull was a pole . The pole continued rising and under the pole was a ship . It looked 50 % bone and what wasn't bone was rotten wood . It was surrounded by a mist and had an eire aroura around it . It was kissed with the curse of death and decay . And the captain of this ship was none other than the somewhat cruel , Captain Dedmond .  ( You can stop listening to the theme now )  


A Flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was transported from his ship the the Head ship of the Fleet , on which the Commander was sailing on ( the ships are still circling )  .   



Dedmond - " I thought I told you English folk to stay away from my seas
Williams - " I am here to tell you that by a decree of the King , These waters are no longer yours . " 
Dedmond - " Do you know what happened to the last ship that approached me in such a manner ?
Williams - " You sunk them ? And for that I also must place you under arrest for the disruption of trade " 
Dedmond - " I see my reputation preceeds me . But do you really think that you can hold me ?
Williams - " And why wouldn't we ? " 
Dedmond - " Have you ever witnessed a shipwreck . Mr . Williams ? " 
Williams - " As a matter of fact yes . I have . And if you don't want your ship to suffer the same fate I recommend that you surrender now or rot in prison " 
Dedmond - " Only one thing wrong with that
Williams - " And what might that be ? " 
Dedmond - " Look at me !!! I am already lived a Lifetime and More !!! My flesh has rot . Cursed by death and decay !!! The only thing that can harm  me is being stupid and not recognizing my strength and duty . !!!! " 
Williams - "  Really ?  What is your duty Mr. Dedmond ? " 
Dedmond - " I'll show ya



A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleorted back to  his ship , The Reaper's Bride . ( English ships are still moving . )  Dedmond's ship turns and targets an English vessel , trapped within the cricular vortex aat the ring . 



Dedmond - " Fire !!! " 



 On his command . six canons were fired at the ship . All of them hitting it on target . 



Dedmond - " Again !!! " 




And again another barrage of canon balls hit the ship , which was now sinking . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleported back to the head ship . 


Dedmond - " That is my duty
Williams - " Arrest this man . Now !!! " 
Dedmond - " ........... * Whispers * Fire . " 



The privateers arrested the captain and put him in chains but behind them the fleet of ship were being fired at and destroyed one by one until only that one was left . Dedmond's handcuff then rusted and fell off his hands as the captain walked free . Dedmond then walked to the Commander and trust his blade through the commander's heart , sealing his soul in the sword . 



Dedmond - " Enjoy death " 



A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond's crew of half dead men and skeletons were transported to the English ship . 


Dedmond - " Kill them . KILL THEM ALL !!! " 



On his command the crew started slashing away at the privateers . One by one they died until only one was left . He was taken by Dedmond back to his ship to serve as  crew even after death . Dedmond had defeated the fleet of English ships and then his ship descended with him and his crew on it , leaving a jolly roger sign in the water . 






That was chapter 9 of book 2  . Wadya think ?  
Chapter 9 of book 2 . No one reads them anymore but enjoy anyway . Who am I even talking to ? Myself ? Meh . Well enjoy this story myself . Thanks Zed . Hey anytime Zed .  



Day 10 , night . English Fleet . 




Commander Williams - " Lord Herrald . What is our status and location ? " 
Lord Herrald - " The ship is in .. well its shipshape . The winds are getting stronger and we are just about to enter Dedmond's Waters Commander " 
Williams - " Good . Arm the ships . Tell them to be ready for the arrival of this " Captain Dedmond "      " 
Herrald - " Yes Sir " 



Word was passed on ship after ship to be ready . The Fleet of English vessels were now entering the dreaded waters that had been cursed along with its owner .  It did not take long for the weather to get worse . Thunder started . Lightening Flashed . Rain beat dwon upon the ships . Twas almost like a hurricane 



Herrald  - " The weather has worsened . Maybe these waters are cursed " 
Williams - " That is just bad weather . We experience it all the time Lord Herrald . Don't be supersticious  like a foolish man . " 
Herrald - " Aren't you the least bit worried about this ? " 
Williams - " A little bad weather cannot scare me . I have a fleet of ten ships armed with canons and privateers . I am not worried at all " 
Herrald - " Well maybe you are right . " 
Williams - " I am . Now stop acting like a scared baby and toughen up like the confident and strong man you are  " 





The weather continued until .... it calmed down a bit . The seas were beginning to be settle . The lightening and thunder ceased and the rain had stopped thumping the ships . 



Williams - " Well it seems we are approaching the eye of this storm . And this " Dedmond "  is nowhere to be found . 
Herrald - " I guess you were right ..... " 
Privateer 1 - " Sirs . The water around the ships are turning black . " 
Williams - " What ? Well I wonder what strnge phenomenon is this " 



Soon the ships had come to an abrupt stop halfway between the eye of the storm . The water that surrounded the circular body of water was natureally coloured but the water in it was now completely black . 

Privateer 3 - " Sirs . The ships have stopped sailing but the wind is still blowing and the sails are lowered " 
Williams - " What in the name of England ? " 




Soon all the ships started moving to the side outer ring of the eye , starting with the one the Commander was on . When they arrived at the ring they started sailing in a circular formation , following the ring of the eye . 




Williams - " Well I'll be "  


This continued until all the ten ships were sailing in circles .  Then . Something started to rise in the center of the eye .  All the ships looked in wonder at it . 


Privateer 5 - " Sir . Something is rising in the center " 
Williams - " What is it ? Can you get a clear view ? " 
Privateer 5 - " Its ..... a skull " ( Listen to this till I say stop ) :  http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E





The skull in the water continued rising and under the skull was a pole . The pole continued rising and under the pole was a ship . It looked 50 % bone and what wasn't bone was rotten wood . It was surrounded by a mist and had an eire aroura around it . It was kissed with the curse of death and decay . And the captain of this ship was none other than the somewhat cruel , Captain Dedmond .  ( You can stop listening to the theme now )  


A Flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was transported from his ship the the Head ship of the Fleet , on which the Commander was sailing on ( the ships are still circling )  .   



Dedmond - " I thought I told you English folk to stay away from my seas
Williams - " I am here to tell you that by a decree of the King , These waters are no longer yours . " 
Dedmond - " Do you know what happened to the last ship that approached me in such a manner ?
Williams - " You sunk them ? And for that I also must place you under arrest for the disruption of trade " 
Dedmond - " I see my reputation preceeds me . But do you really think that you can hold me ?
Williams - " And why wouldn't we ? " 
Dedmond - " Have you ever witnessed a shipwreck . Mr . Williams ? " 
Williams - " As a matter of fact yes . I have . And if you don't want your ship to suffer the same fate I recommend that you surrender now or rot in prison " 
Dedmond - " Only one thing wrong with that
Williams - " And what might that be ? " 
Dedmond - " Look at me !!! I am already lived a Lifetime and More !!! My flesh has rot . Cursed by death and decay !!! The only thing that can harm  me is being stupid and not recognizing my strength and duty . !!!! " 
Williams - "  Really ?  What is your duty Mr. Dedmond ? " 
Dedmond - " I'll show ya



A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleorted back to  his ship , The Reaper's Bride . ( English ships are still moving . )  Dedmond's ship turns and targets an English vessel , trapped within the cricular vortex aat the ring . 



Dedmond - " Fire !!! " 



 On his command . six canons were fired at the ship . All of them hitting it on target . 



Dedmond - " Again !!! " 




And again another barrage of canon balls hit the ship , which was now sinking . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleported back to the head ship . 


Dedmond - " That is my duty
Williams - " Arrest this man . Now !!! " 
Dedmond - " ........... * Whispers * Fire . " 



The privateers arrested the captain and put him in chains but behind them the fleet of ship were being fired at and destroyed one by one until only that one was left . Dedmond's handcuff then rusted and fell off his hands as the captain walked free . Dedmond then walked to the Commander and trust his blade through the commander's heart , sealing his soul in the sword . 



Dedmond - " Enjoy death " 



A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond's crew of half dead men and skeletons were transported to the English ship . 


Dedmond - " Kill them . KILL THEM ALL !!! " 



On his command the crew started slashing away at the privateers . One by one they died until only one was left . He was taken by Dedmond back to his ship to serve as  crew even after death . Dedmond had defeated the fleet of English ships and then his ship descended with him and his crew on it , leaving a jolly roger sign in the water . 






That was chapter 9 of book 2  . Wadya think ?  
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