Ok since no one would reply to the earlier thread I had to make another one for part 2 . I doubt no on even reads the stories anymore but I am still going to write them .


Day 10 , England . Mid day : 



Commander Williams - " Well men . It seems as if the captain has not returned with our secret weapon . So we will proceed as planned . Have the ships ready for departure . We are sailing in five minutes " 
Lord Herrald - " And what should we do with the prisoners ? " 
Williams - " They will be executed tommorow . And as for our good captain . Have a search party out for him . Bring him back in chains and he will be executed accordingly " 
Herrald - "  I'll see to it that your orders are carried out Commander " 





Now the a fleet of ten ships are off to Dedmond's Waters to face off against death himself , whilst our captains are sailing on thier way to England with the map . And as for the Unlucky Charm ....... 



Day 10 , The Unlucky Charm . Mid day . 



Crew member 1 - " Um.... Sir . It seems we be sailing into a storm " 
Twinks - " A storm you say ? Well that shouldn't be too hard for this ship to handle . "
C M ( Crew member ) - " What are your orders ? Captain ? " 
Twinks - " Batten down the hatches and brace for a storm . Lower the sails and we should sail smooth and easy " 





So the drew did as commanded by the confident captain and the started to brace for the impending weather before them .   They soon entered the storm and the ship held up well . Along with a little wind and some rain , the storm did not brew as to a hurricane . It was bareable weather .  Then the winds got stronger and stronger . But the ship stopped moving upon a sudden .  


Twinks - " What happened ? Did we hit something ? " 
C M 3 - " No . I don't think so ? It seems we have stopped moving . " 
Twinks - " Impossible . The winds are blowing at least 105 kilometers per hour . The sails are lowered . We can't just " stop . Sailing " 
C M 1 - " Captain . You should see this . There be a Black Spot in the water before us " 
Twinks - " This is the most unusual day ever "  



Listen to this till I say stop :   http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uVAy2uOpA0E   


Thunder and lightening started to be heard and struck . The sky turned from bad to the worst as a mist began to cover The Unlucky Charm .   And from the black spot in the water arose skull . The skull continued to rise and underneath it was a pole . The pole continued to rise and underneath the pole was a ship that looked 50 % bone . What wasn't bone was rotten wood . It had been kissed with the curse of death and decay . And the Captain of this ship was , Captain Dedmond .  ( You can stop  listening to the theme now )  . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond was teleported from his ship to the Unlucky Charm . 





Dedmond - " Time to pay up Zed  .  My map . As promised . Or have you yet again shown up empty handed ..... without my payment ?  " 
Twinks - " Who is Zed . More importantly . Who are you ? " 
Dedmond - " I be captain Dedmond . Captain of The Reaper's Bride and owner of these waters . Who in Valley of the shadow of me are you ? " 
Twinks - " I am Twinks . Captain of this ship . " 
Dedmond - " Did you say captain of this ... ship " 
Twinks - " Yes I did . I stole it from some idiot pirate . Poor sucker left it with me to guard and I stole it . What a foolish man " 
Dedmond - " What ?     Was the name of this " Foolish man " Captain Zed ? Did he keep his sword on his right leg ? Did he have A captain's hat ? " 
Twinks - " Yes " 
Dedmond - " That man was supposed to pay me a map . I cursed the captain of this ship to die ... today . He was supposed to be hear . NOT YOU "  
Twinks - " Did you just say ... curse ? " 
Dedmond - " Aye . And since you are the captain of this ship , you are going to have to pay me .... OR DIE " 
Twinks - " Well it just so happens that I am not captain of this ship . As a matter of fact no one is the captain for now one has a captains hat "  








As the words were uttered from Twinks' mouth , a strong breeze blew . And item was being carried by the sea breeze which then landed square on Twinks' head . It was Zed's captain's hat that blew off his head . As the hat landed on Twinks' head the sails of the ship changed into a blood red color and a strong light shone from the heavens . In this light was an image of Zed sailing towards England on Twink's ship , with the Map to Atlantis in his hand . 



Dedmond - " You are the captain now and you will pay me . And seeing as how you have not the map I am going to kill you " 
Twinks - " You don't scare me . I have seen guys uglier than you in my nightmares " 
Dedmond - " Good . But the difference between me and them is that * Whispers in Twinks' ear * I . Am . Real .   " 
Twinks - * Draws sword . *   " Well I am not going down without a fight " 
Dedmond - " But ye are going down . Hahahahahahah !!! " 

The crew of skeletons and half dead men swung over from Dedmond's ship to The Unlucky Charm .  

Dedmond - " Kill them . KILL THEM ALL !!!!!! " 


On his mark a sword fight burst out betwixt the two crews  .  One crew fighting to win , the other to stay alive . 




SWORDFIGHT : 


* Dedmond withdraws his blade and swings it at Twinks . Twinks runs away in retreat . Dedmond begins pursuit . Crew member 1 slashes at Dedmond . Dedmond blocks and stabs him in the chest whilst ducking the blade of another crew member . Pulls out blade and slices the other crew member in the chest . Dedmond continues walking after the captain when he is slashed at by crew member 5 . He blocks it and slices the other crew member five's head off .  Another crew member ambushes the captain and slices his right arm off .  Dedmond turns around and slices the crew member's right arm off then stabs him . Dedmond takes up the crew member's severed arm and inserts it where his right arm . The new arm the rots and turns to bone with little rotting flesh . Dedmond - " Ahh . Good as new  "  Meanwhile Twinks is slashing away at some of Dedmond's crew . He swings right slashing on Of Dedmond's crew  . The he ducks and run towards the spot where Dedmond made the mark , the mark that was made where the captain of The Unlucky Charm would die on that day . A flash of lightening struck and Dedmond appeared behind Twinks .  Twinks turned around in recognition to Dedmond's presence and swung hitting the captain right on temple which connect the lower jaw to the upper jaw . Dedmond's mandible ( lower jaw ) fell to the ground . Dedmond then stabbed Twinks in his heart , imprisoning his soul in his sword . Twinks fell and landed on the marking and in the same shape of it . 




The dept was payed and fulfilled . Dedmond then cut off Twinks lower jaw and placed it where his was supposed to be . The same thing happened to it that happened to the arm . Dedmond's crew had now finished wiping out Twinks crew only leaving one man . That man was sentenced to serve aboard Dedmond's ship ... even after death . 



Dedmond - " Zed . You have tricked me for the last time . I will find you again . And when I do ....... I'll be sure you Rest . In . Pieces "








That was chapter 8 part 2 . Chapter 9 coming soon