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A Vizzed-Up Story: Chapter 2

 

10-06-13 11:31 AM
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Here's chapter two of the story. If you have not read chapter one, I will provide a link down below after my writing. Thanks for reading this, and try to enjoy. Again, this is NOT for the TdV, just for fun and helping me to get back in writing.



Chapter 2: Fries and Lies



We hit a burger joint once tgags said that. I ordered a cheeseburger, a few hot wings, and some chili fries. He got a hamburger, a hotdog, smoothie, and regular fries. All we did was eat and get back to our usual banter about random things before I asked about the identity thing. Except, after a while, something unusual happened.



"Man, this is some good food," I said.



"Yeah, I guess so. A bit cold, though," he replied. He looked around, and the strangest thing happened. While I was eating, I heard a sound of some waves. When I looked at tgags, he acted like everything was fine. There was definitely something going on.



"What was that? Did you feel that wave of... power?" I asked.



"Hm? No. Not at all. Let's go, I'm pretty full," he says mischievously.



We walk around the city, and end up at an arcade. He's about to go in, until we hear a bang. Smoke rises up from middle of the city, and then many people start screaming. Tgags sighed, and ran to the scene.



"Tgags! What the heck are you doing? That's not our business!" I yell. He ignores me, so I run after him. When I get there, police are around the premises. Tgags is just standing there, staring into the cop's car in front of him. He acts normal and we walk away, until he sees a certain person getting into the police car he was staring intently at. He looked like he felt a sharp pain. Was he... loathing that person? While he was looking at him, he fell down, starting to breathe heavily. As the car drove away, he yelled words I'll never forget.



"That w-was Barathemos, the complete being of darkness. He's basically a being from the fires of Hell itself. He's returned," he says.



"What? Who? Why?" I stammered.



"I have to tell the others. And, sadly, you're going to be in the middle of this. You're the one we were waiting for. I know we just met, but you're the only way me and my people are going to survive... Come with me to the forest we met at..." His voice trails off.



"What are you saying? Have you been playing World of Warcraft? Are you out of your mind?" I ask. "No way I'm going with you. I'm calling the ambulance. They'll help you."



"Oh, shut it. I'm not having any mental or sanity issues. And if you're not coming with me, then..." He rose his arms, punched me, knocked me backwards, and the last thing I felt was a shock of lightning on my back. Everything was pitch black as he picked me up and carried me away.



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This is chapter two. Chapter one can be found below under the summons. Was this chapter good? Leave some feedback, please. I'd appreciate it.



tgags123 : You're in the story and just shocked me with lightning, Lightning Thief.

Barathemos : Cue Barathemos, the being of darkness from Hell itself! (You did want to be a bad guy, right?)



Chapter one:



https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66518
Here's chapter two of the story. If you have not read chapter one, I will provide a link down below after my writing. Thanks for reading this, and try to enjoy. Again, this is NOT for the TdV, just for fun and helping me to get back in writing.



Chapter 2: Fries and Lies



We hit a burger joint once tgags said that. I ordered a cheeseburger, a few hot wings, and some chili fries. He got a hamburger, a hotdog, smoothie, and regular fries. All we did was eat and get back to our usual banter about random things before I asked about the identity thing. Except, after a while, something unusual happened.



"Man, this is some good food," I said.



"Yeah, I guess so. A bit cold, though," he replied. He looked around, and the strangest thing happened. While I was eating, I heard a sound of some waves. When I looked at tgags, he acted like everything was fine. There was definitely something going on.



"What was that? Did you feel that wave of... power?" I asked.



"Hm? No. Not at all. Let's go, I'm pretty full," he says mischievously.



We walk around the city, and end up at an arcade. He's about to go in, until we hear a bang. Smoke rises up from middle of the city, and then many people start screaming. Tgags sighed, and ran to the scene.



"Tgags! What the heck are you doing? That's not our business!" I yell. He ignores me, so I run after him. When I get there, police are around the premises. Tgags is just standing there, staring into the cop's car in front of him. He acts normal and we walk away, until he sees a certain person getting into the police car he was staring intently at. He looked like he felt a sharp pain. Was he... loathing that person? While he was looking at him, he fell down, starting to breathe heavily. As the car drove away, he yelled words I'll never forget.



"That w-was Barathemos, the complete being of darkness. He's basically a being from the fires of Hell itself. He's returned," he says.



"What? Who? Why?" I stammered.



"I have to tell the others. And, sadly, you're going to be in the middle of this. You're the one we were waiting for. I know we just met, but you're the only way me and my people are going to survive... Come with me to the forest we met at..." His voice trails off.



"What are you saying? Have you been playing World of Warcraft? Are you out of your mind?" I ask. "No way I'm going with you. I'm calling the ambulance. They'll help you."



"Oh, shut it. I'm not having any mental or sanity issues. And if you're not coming with me, then..." He rose his arms, punched me, knocked me backwards, and the last thing I felt was a shock of lightning on my back. Everything was pitch black as he picked me up and carried me away.



----------------



This is chapter two. Chapter one can be found below under the summons. Was this chapter good? Leave some feedback, please. I'd appreciate it.



tgags123 : You're in the story and just shocked me with lightning, Lightning Thief.

Barathemos : Cue Barathemos, the being of darkness from Hell itself! (You did want to be a bad guy, right?)



Chapter one:



https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=66518
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10-06-13 11:38 AM
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Nice job! Exciting chapter! I can't wait for the end. I wonder what will happen. (Hehehe).
Nice job! Exciting chapter! I can't wait for the end. I wonder what will happen. (Hehehe).
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Nice story. I, for one, approve of these Vizzed fanfics. I look forward to reading more!
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tgags123 :

I'm writing this as I go! Hehe, I just had to make the introduction early.

I'm gonna write a lot of chapters today, which means a whole BUNCH this week! It'll be awesome, hopefully. Trying to incorporate the *ahem* "ideas" you gave yesterday in the PM.

Wanna talk about that some more? PM me if you do.
tgags123 :

I'm writing this as I go! Hehe, I just had to make the introduction early.

I'm gonna write a lot of chapters today, which means a whole BUNCH this week! It'll be awesome, hopefully. Trying to incorporate the *ahem* "ideas" you gave yesterday in the PM.

Wanna talk about that some more? PM me if you do.
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