I want to make a Vizzed story, inspired by tgags123.

No, this is not TdV bait. I'm not doing this for cheap points on the TdV. These are going to be little shorts, mainly for amusement, made in parts, maybe one per day. I feel creative nowadays, and what better way to do it than writing stories? I'm not feeling myself as a writer, and I guess a nice restart would be Vizzed.

I'll make this a continuous story if people seem to enjoy it. This is not meant to be a copy, and I'll try to make it as different as possible.

Here's an optional background/intro for the story that you don't have to read:

I, goodboy, live on Earth, obviously. I basically just roam the planet, with no motivation whatsoever. My family was separated from me at birth, and I ran away. Far, far from the orphanage. Those evil little people kept me locked up in there, and I would no longer stand for it. Now, I'm just roaming around. Until I found a certain... area that gave off a vibe, per se. I thought no one was around, so I stayed. And I made a nice decision.

Except, I've learned... There are inhabitants here. And they aren't normal people. And, apparently, I'm not either.

This is the story of me, goodboy, and how I live my life after I find these... Viziters. (No, this is not the official name, just a fun one.)


And this is just the intro. Tomorrow, chapter one will be how goodboy finds these people, what happens, and so on. Is the plot nice, and sort of creative? Would people be interested? Feedback would be nice.

tgags123 : You inspired me to make this series.
Singelli : I sort of wanted feedback from you the most, as you usually have the best opinion on things. xD

EDIT: I'm gonna go ahead and make the first chapter soon. Not sure if I can squeeze it in now, but I'll try.

goodboy : Wait what?  I think you're thinking of someone else. XD haha!  Ummm.... I don't really give great advice, do I? When have I advised you on anything?

err.. just ignore the above sentences. XD

I think it's pretty obvious you're not doing it for TdV spam.  I mean, unless you have tons of work stored up that you've written earlier, it's always awesome to see bits of creativity floating around the board.  With my first TdV, I tried to challenge myself to write something every day in this forum, but due to my rambling nature, I fell off that wagon about a week in.  If you can keep up the pace, keep the plot going, and keep it interesting, why would it be a bad thing? Definitely go for it!

Just don't make me a super villain bound and determined on destroying everyone.   I don't want too many of my secrets revealed, after all....

Singelli :

Haha! Don't discredit yourself! You're really helpful!

Yeah, I don't want to spam. I obviously haven't written this up earlier, unless I've been stalking the board for a while. I'm gonna try to at least hit 50 chapters, to be honest. I want to get better and better at writing, and not spam. Thanks for the encouragement!

Don't worry, you won't be a bad guy. Your secrets are safe.

Singelli : Haha that last sentence xD