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As some of you might know, I am a huge fan of Gravity Falls, and this morning, I had finished a special story for you guys. I started it yesterday afternoon, and this chapter took me about three hours to finish. I did this just for you guys, to show how much of a Gravity Falls fan I am, however, it is just a small story that I am not going to continue it. Could you guys give me some reviews? I would really appreciate it.

It goes something like...

“That’s it Stanford! I give you one last chance to hand over what I desire. You have one minute before I raze your beloved shack!” Gideon screamed across the small field at the Pines family.

Stan Pines grumbled back in a mix of shock and disgust, “What’re you talking about Gideon? You have the shack, what else is there for you to take from us?”

Gideon slowly began to walk toward the family, past the crumpled remains of the Mystery Shack roof until he was barely a few feet from his long time enemy.

“There is one more thing I can take from you! There is one thing that means more to you than this shack, even more than your own family!”
“You rotten little brat!” Stan screamed back and looked as though he were ready to grab the kid, but one look past Gideon at the two tough looking men standing by the entrance to the shack caused him to take an immediate step back.

“Oh poor Stan, there is nothing you can do to harm me as this is my property. May I also caution that you only have 45 seconds remaining?”
“Grunkle Stan, what’s he talking about?” Dipper whispered nervously, trying his best to catch any clues that would shed some light on the situation.

“Nothing kid, it’s just the jumbled mess of a crazed nine year old.” Stan said back, though his face was turning pale, and Dipper could notice a slight tremble in his voice.

“Dipper, something doesn’t seem right here.” Mabel said to her brother in a similar hushed tone.”

“Tell me about it,” Dipper whispered back, “I haven’t seen him this nervous since he lied about rescuing Waddles from the pterodactyl.”
“Agreed,” Soos said while recording the unfolding scenario on his phone, “Something’s up.”

"Enough of your bickering! Stanford, you now have 30 seconds, hand it over or I shall bestow the most horrifying of consequences upon thee!”

“Look Gideon,” Dipper said, still trying to piece together what Gideon was trying to accomplish, “We don’t know what you’re talking about, you have the shack, and that is all we have.”

“Do not lie to me Dipper,” Gideon growled back. “I DO NOT WANT THE SHACK! Let me be clear, it’s what’s in the shack that I’m after, and you very well know that!”

“In that shack,” said Stan, looking even paler, “is nothing more than a few tourist traps and thrift store furniture. That’s the way it is now, and that’s the way it has always been.”

“Oh I’ve had enough of this, I really have. You may have 15 seconds left, but since I’m such a nice guy, I’ll quicken the inevitable.” Gideon pulled out a small phone from his pocket and began to push a few buttons.

“Well, it’s been nice knowing you guys,” said Soos as he finished his recording and shoved the phone back in his pocket.
“Stanford, do you recall a few weeks back? June Second to be exact? On that day, I told you that you will all pay recompense for your transgressions. Well guess what, that time has come.”

Smiling, Gideon held the phone up to his ear and spoke three words into it, “Tear it down”

The Pines family stood rooted to the ground as they watched the place they called home for a month slowly fall apart.

One by one, each window shattered as if smashed with a hammer. Following that, the entire attic collapsed and within seconds, what was left of the shack appeared to be very unstable.

“All right men, before we annihilate the rest of this dump, I want you to go in and search every room that’s intact. I want every inch searched and don’t come back until one of you has that book in you possession!”

“Dipper,” Said Mabel in a tone that only resembled fear. “He knows! Please tell me that you have the book. You didn’t leave it in the shack, did you?”

Dipper tensed up as he reached into his vests inner pocket but relaxed once he felt the cover of the worn book. “Yeah, I have it.”That would explain how he came into contact with that magic amulet he had a while back.

“Mabel, are you thinking what I’m thinking?” Dipper whispered as quietly as he could to his sister.

“What, that Gideon’s a dork? I think we all know that.”

“No Mabel, I think he has a copy of the book and now he wants mine as well. Who knows what he could do with both, He’ll have unlimited access to everything that goes on in this town.”

“Dipper, do you know what this means? We need to press him about it now, it’s no use keeping it a secret if it’s our only way of saving the mystery shack.”

“Ok Gideon, you win,” said Dipper as he slowly took a few steps towards the boy. “What do you know about the book?”

“Dipper!” shouted Stan, still getting more nervous by the second. “Please, I know what you’re about to do and it’s not worth it. Just leave Gideon alone.”

“Quite old man!” Gideon said with a smirk. “My boy, Dipper, thank you for finally deciding to step up. It’s a shame you won’t be able to save the shack, but still I admire your small amount of courage.”

“This has nothing to do with him!” Dipper shouted at Gideon. “Just tell me what you know about the book so we can end this right here and now!”

“This has everything to do with him! He is in possession of the book and I have been searching for that book for quite some time.”

“He does not have the book Gideon,” said Dipper with fear again washing through his body as he reached into his pocket to pull out the book. “I have the book.”

“My, my Dipper, I was right all along, you do have a book. However, you are not as smart as you think you are, because that is not the book I am looking for.”

“For starters, you might be wondering how I know of your book. If you were to believe that I had a book as well, you would be right.” As Gideon finished his sentence, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a similar book to Dipper’s, but had a large number two printed on the cover.”

“No, this can’t be happening,” said Stan as he took a few steps back.

“Grunkle Stan, are you okay?” said Mabel, “What’s going on? You don’t seem to be acting yourself.”

“Nothing kid, I’m fine, I just need to go and um, get some fresh air, that’s all.” Responded Stan, he then turned and began headed towards the forest.

“Dipper, have you noticed the number on your book? You know, the big number three on the cover. Mine has the number two on the cover. Has it ever occurred to you that there would also be a book labeled as number one?”

“Well guess what? There is, and do you want to know who currently owns that book? Well this may come as a shock to you, but the owner of the other book is none other than your Great Uncle Stan."

“How do you know that Stan has a book?” Asked mabel as she too began to walk towards Gideon. “What else do you know?”

“My, are we all eager to get answers…”

“I shouldn’t have stopped recording, this stuff’s golden,” interrupted Soos as he began walking towards the cart. “If you guys need me, I’ll be taking a quick nap in the cart.”

“Earlier today,” Gideon continued, “One of my one time acquaintances was inside of Stanfords mind, and he had showed me an interesting memory, one that proves he’s keeping secrets, even from his closest family members.”

“Look here Gideon,” Dipper started. “Stan would never keep secrets from us. He.. He.. Okay, you got me on that one, but at least I trust him a lot more than you.”

“Yeah!” Added Mabel

“Foolish children! Why do you not want to accept the truth? Don’t you at least want me to tell you what this secret is?”

“Go ahead already,” said Soos who had began recording again from the cart.

“Hidden somewhere in the Mystery Shack is a room. I was told that this room can be accessed through the vending machine, and holds many dark secrets.”

“Really Gideon?” laughed Dipper “I’m pretty sure we found all the hidden rooms by now…”
“Like the wax museum room.” Interrupted Mabel.

“And the room where Stan locks up all his gold,” Added Soos

“Wait, what?” both twins responded.

“In the basement, Stan has a room where he stores all of his gold,” answered Soos. “He um, told me not to tell anybody about the room.”

“Well anyway, he’s right about the vending machine, I saw him go in a few times during my midnight raids of the kitchen.”

“And why did you not tell any of us?” screamed a now angry Dipper. “We could have prepared or have done something similar.”

“I couldn’t tell if what I saw was real or if I was just sleep walking most of the time.”

“Okay,” said Mabel. “How many times have you seen this happen?”

“Like three, four, maybe two times. It’s hard to keep track of such things when your intent was on food.”

“Enough!” Shouted Gideon, “I am virtually positive that the book is in that room, and once I obtain it, many more secrets of Gravity Falls will be revealed. Once all three books are in my possession, the world will be mine!”

“No! I’m not giving up mine that easily!” Screamed Dipper, “You will not take this book, no matter what you threaten me with!”

“Oh Dipper, that’s why I’m going to wait until I have the old man’s book, that way I can unleash utter horror upon you. Once I do that, the book is mine for the taking.”

The ground trembled and the shack shook violently as a small explosion originated from within. Small plumes of smoke began to leak from the open windows, turning what was once a beautiful sunny day, into a foggy nightmare.

“Well,” said Gideon cheerfully, “looks like we found the entrance to the room. Now if you would excuse me, I have business to take care of.”

“Oh, it’s important for you to know that once I conclude my business in there, I shall find the most creative of endings for you Dipper, as well as your family.”

“No! This ends here Gideon!” Screamed Dipper. Now nothing could be seen in Dippers face except for pure anger. “You Gideon. Are crazy! Why are you trying so hard to get the books, when day after day, you failed?”

“Why? I’ll tell you why!” Screamed Gideon, his eyes were now glowing red, “Because I have been searching for a hundred and fifty years!” Gideon then swayed a bit and collapsed.

Well that's it. It was very long but I hope that you like it. This is the first fan fic that I have ever wrote and I hope that you people like it. I doubt that most of you had a chance to read the entire thing, but if you did, I applaud you for being such a trooper and a fan of reading random posts. I hope this proves how much of a fan I am.


As some of you might know, I am a huge fan of Gravity Falls, and this morning, I had finished a special story for you guys. I started it yesterday afternoon, and this chapter took me about three hours to finish. I did this just for you guys, to show how much of a Gravity Falls fan I am, however, it is just a small story that I am not going to continue it. Could you guys give me some reviews? I would really appreciate it.

It goes something like...

“That’s it Stanford! I give you one last chance to hand over what I desire. You have one minute before I raze your beloved shack!” Gideon screamed across the small field at the Pines family.

Stan Pines grumbled back in a mix of shock and disgust, “What’re you talking about Gideon? You have the shack, what else is there for you to take from us?”

Gideon slowly began to walk toward the family, past the crumpled remains of the Mystery Shack roof until he was barely a few feet from his long time enemy.

“There is one more thing I can take from you! There is one thing that means more to you than this shack, even more than your own family!”
“You rotten little brat!” Stan screamed back and looked as though he were ready to grab the kid, but one look past Gideon at the two tough looking men standing by the entrance to the shack caused him to take an immediate step back.

“Oh poor Stan, there is nothing you can do to harm me as this is my property. May I also caution that you only have 45 seconds remaining?”
“Grunkle Stan, what’s he talking about?” Dipper whispered nervously, trying his best to catch any clues that would shed some light on the situation.

“Nothing kid, it’s just the jumbled mess of a crazed nine year old.” Stan said back, though his face was turning pale, and Dipper could notice a slight tremble in his voice.

“Dipper, something doesn’t seem right here.” Mabel said to her brother in a similar hushed tone.”

“Tell me about it,” Dipper whispered back, “I haven’t seen him this nervous since he lied about rescuing Waddles from the pterodactyl.”
“Agreed,” Soos said while recording the unfolding scenario on his phone, “Something’s up.”

"Enough of your bickering! Stanford, you now have 30 seconds, hand it over or I shall bestow the most horrifying of consequences upon thee!”

“Look Gideon,” Dipper said, still trying to piece together what Gideon was trying to accomplish, “We don’t know what you’re talking about, you have the shack, and that is all we have.”

“Do not lie to me Dipper,” Gideon growled back. “I DO NOT WANT THE SHACK! Let me be clear, it’s what’s in the shack that I’m after, and you very well know that!”

“In that shack,” said Stan, looking even paler, “is nothing more than a few tourist traps and thrift store furniture. That’s the way it is now, and that’s the way it has always been.”

“Oh I’ve had enough of this, I really have. You may have 15 seconds left, but since I’m such a nice guy, I’ll quicken the inevitable.” Gideon pulled out a small phone from his pocket and began to push a few buttons.

“Well, it’s been nice knowing you guys,” said Soos as he finished his recording and shoved the phone back in his pocket.
“Stanford, do you recall a few weeks back? June Second to be exact? On that day, I told you that you will all pay recompense for your transgressions. Well guess what, that time has come.”

Smiling, Gideon held the phone up to his ear and spoke three words into it, “Tear it down”

The Pines family stood rooted to the ground as they watched the place they called home for a month slowly fall apart.

One by one, each window shattered as if smashed with a hammer. Following that, the entire attic collapsed and within seconds, what was left of the shack appeared to be very unstable.

“All right men, before we annihilate the rest of this dump, I want you to go in and search every room that’s intact. I want every inch searched and don’t come back until one of you has that book in you possession!”

“Dipper,” Said Mabel in a tone that only resembled fear. “He knows! Please tell me that you have the book. You didn’t leave it in the shack, did you?”

Dipper tensed up as he reached into his vests inner pocket but relaxed once he felt the cover of the worn book. “Yeah, I have it.”That would explain how he came into contact with that magic amulet he had a while back.

“Mabel, are you thinking what I’m thinking?” Dipper whispered as quietly as he could to his sister.

“What, that Gideon’s a dork? I think we all know that.”

“No Mabel, I think he has a copy of the book and now he wants mine as well. Who knows what he could do with both, He’ll have unlimited access to everything that goes on in this town.”

“Dipper, do you know what this means? We need to press him about it now, it’s no use keeping it a secret if it’s our only way of saving the mystery shack.”

“Ok Gideon, you win,” said Dipper as he slowly took a few steps towards the boy. “What do you know about the book?”

“Dipper!” shouted Stan, still getting more nervous by the second. “Please, I know what you’re about to do and it’s not worth it. Just leave Gideon alone.”

“Quite old man!” Gideon said with a smirk. “My boy, Dipper, thank you for finally deciding to step up. It’s a shame you won’t be able to save the shack, but still I admire your small amount of courage.”

“This has nothing to do with him!” Dipper shouted at Gideon. “Just tell me what you know about the book so we can end this right here and now!”

“This has everything to do with him! He is in possession of the book and I have been searching for that book for quite some time.”

“He does not have the book Gideon,” said Dipper with fear again washing through his body as he reached into his pocket to pull out the book. “I have the book.”

“My, my Dipper, I was right all along, you do have a book. However, you are not as smart as you think you are, because that is not the book I am looking for.”

“For starters, you might be wondering how I know of your book. If you were to believe that I had a book as well, you would be right.” As Gideon finished his sentence, he reached into his pocket and pulled out a similar book to Dipper’s, but had a large number two printed on the cover.”

“No, this can’t be happening,” said Stan as he took a few steps back.

“Grunkle Stan, are you okay?” said Mabel, “What’s going on? You don’t seem to be acting yourself.”

“Nothing kid, I’m fine, I just need to go and um, get some fresh air, that’s all.” Responded Stan, he then turned and began headed towards the forest.

“Dipper, have you noticed the number on your book? You know, the big number three on the cover. Mine has the number two on the cover. Has it ever occurred to you that there would also be a book labeled as number one?”

“Well guess what? There is, and do you want to know who currently owns that book? Well this may come as a shock to you, but the owner of the other book is none other than your Great Uncle Stan."

“How do you know that Stan has a book?” Asked mabel as she too began to walk towards Gideon. “What else do you know?”

“My, are we all eager to get answers…”

“I shouldn’t have stopped recording, this stuff’s golden,” interrupted Soos as he began walking towards the cart. “If you guys need me, I’ll be taking a quick nap in the cart.”

“Earlier today,” Gideon continued, “One of my one time acquaintances was inside of Stanfords mind, and he had showed me an interesting memory, one that proves he’s keeping secrets, even from his closest family members.”

“Look here Gideon,” Dipper started. “Stan would never keep secrets from us. He.. He.. Okay, you got me on that one, but at least I trust him a lot more than you.”

“Yeah!” Added Mabel

“Foolish children! Why do you not want to accept the truth? Don’t you at least want me to tell you what this secret is?”

“Go ahead already,” said Soos who had began recording again from the cart.

“Hidden somewhere in the Mystery Shack is a room. I was told that this room can be accessed through the vending machine, and holds many dark secrets.”

“Really Gideon?” laughed Dipper “I’m pretty sure we found all the hidden rooms by now…”
“Like the wax museum room.” Interrupted Mabel.

“And the room where Stan locks up all his gold,” Added Soos

“Wait, what?” both twins responded.

“In the basement, Stan has a room where he stores all of his gold,” answered Soos. “He um, told me not to tell anybody about the room.”

“Well anyway, he’s right about the vending machine, I saw him go in a few times during my midnight raids of the kitchen.”

“And why did you not tell any of us?” screamed a now angry Dipper. “We could have prepared or have done something similar.”

“I couldn’t tell if what I saw was real or if I was just sleep walking most of the time.”

“Okay,” said Mabel. “How many times have you seen this happen?”

“Like three, four, maybe two times. It’s hard to keep track of such things when your intent was on food.”

“Enough!” Shouted Gideon, “I am virtually positive that the book is in that room, and once I obtain it, many more secrets of Gravity Falls will be revealed. Once all three books are in my possession, the world will be mine!”

“No! I’m not giving up mine that easily!” Screamed Dipper, “You will not take this book, no matter what you threaten me with!”

“Oh Dipper, that’s why I’m going to wait until I have the old man’s book, that way I can unleash utter horror upon you. Once I do that, the book is mine for the taking.”

The ground trembled and the shack shook violently as a small explosion originated from within. Small plumes of smoke began to leak from the open windows, turning what was once a beautiful sunny day, into a foggy nightmare.

“Well,” said Gideon cheerfully, “looks like we found the entrance to the room. Now if you would excuse me, I have business to take care of.”

“Oh, it’s important for you to know that once I conclude my business in there, I shall find the most creative of endings for you Dipper, as well as your family.”

“No! This ends here Gideon!” Screamed Dipper. Now nothing could be seen in Dippers face except for pure anger. “You Gideon. Are crazy! Why are you trying so hard to get the books, when day after day, you failed?”

“Why? I’ll tell you why!” Screamed Gideon, his eyes were now glowing red, “Because I have been searching for a hundred and fifty years!” Gideon then swayed a bit and collapsed.

Well that's it. It was very long but I hope that you like it. This is the first fan fic that I have ever wrote and I hope that you people like it. I doubt that most of you had a chance to read the entire thing, but if you did, I applaud you for being such a trooper and a fan of reading random posts. I hope this proves how much of a fan I am.
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I just finished this, and might I say, I'm quiet impressed! You did a great job pulling out so many references to several of the episodes, and managed to capture the essence of the characters well. I could picture them saying these lines (Soos: Three, Four, Two). You also brought something I hadn't considered about the season finale, to my mind: the two books are in the shack still! Now I'm on the edge of my seat, wondering what will happen there. xD

And yes, I'm a big fan of the show as well.
I just finished this, and might I say, I'm quiet impressed! You did a great job pulling out so many references to several of the episodes, and managed to capture the essence of the characters well. I could picture them saying these lines (Soos: Three, Four, Two). You also brought something I hadn't considered about the season finale, to my mind: the two books are in the shack still! Now I'm on the edge of my seat, wondering what will happen there. xD

And yes, I'm a big fan of the show as well.
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This is good and all but why the 150 years? Anyway congrats on the fanfic!
This is good and all but why the 150 years? Anyway congrats on the fanfic!
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