A random poem I wrote a while back, please tell me your opinions of it! ^__^

Regardless of its nature, I will never give in to the perception of hopelessness or impossibility.
Even if everyone in the world calls me insane, I will pursue a miracle beyond all despair. I will never yield to the barriers that society may deem as the cold, simple laws of reality--be it the lack of power to accomplish your dreams, the very idea of death and mortality, or even the fragile fact that something precious that has been lost cannot be embraced again in all its glory, without being stepped upon... Nothing. I will never despair. Even if I am confronted with my own pitiful weakness, I will not hate myself for it and I will simply maintain my will, face forward, and continue on without thought.
Even if my limbs are eaten alive, my tongue is ripped out and my throat is slashed, and everything I care for is violated and killed, this will never change.
And finally, I will never look down on other beings, regardless of any and all circumstances.
If, at any point in time, I am to yet still attempt to trample over them despite that absolution, I will not make excuses. Even if it seems as if doing so would drive me beyond insanity, I will acknowledge the entirety of my sins and stand up again.
This is the nature of a certain child who was never shown anything but coldness, despair and total inescapability by this world and who still cannot expect understanding from it due to the drowning, encompassing nature of such precedence--and this is also the nature of the adult she became.
I will immortalize it within my soul as I continue my journey with her.