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Stalking Is Bad For Your Health (Part 3)

 

10-02-13 03:44 AM
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(And now part 3,Gary and Montgomery have just entered the park,following Marion)

GARY: This is bad,The nerve of this girl to do this to me and not even tell me

MONTGOMERY: This is really getting to you,Do you not think this is pretty dangerous even for us? A lot of weirdos come into the park at night (pauses) Like you

(Montgomery laughs as Gary punches his shoulder)

GARY: I just want to see what she is doing and that is that

(Just then,Marion stops by a park bench and a young man is walking towards her)

GARY: Look,look,A guy walking her way,And she stopped,Is this her date you think?

MONTGOMERY: Who knows,Could just be a friend,Maybe there is an emergency or something and she couldn't contact you right away

GARY: An emergency? What kind of emergency has her meeting a guy in the park? I told you,She has decided to not meet me,Me,The great Gary Hathaway and so she will meet with some other moron,I knew this Marion was no good

(Marion is then talking to the guy as they stand by the park bench)

GARY: I bet they are talking all kinds of mushy garbage

MONTGOMERY: Listen to you,You don't get jealous much do you?

(Marion and the guy talk more,She then puts her arms around his neck)

GARY: I don't believe this

MONTGOMERY: Oh dear,Maybe this is a hot date

GARY: I'm going to put a stop to this if they start smooching

(Soon,the guy is struggling as Marion starts biting his neck,the guy screams)

MONTGOMERY: Wow,she is a bad kisser huh?

GARY: What is going on here?

(The guy's screams soon stop as Marion sucks the remaining blood out his body,his body drops to the ground)

MONTGOMERY: Gary...She's killed him,Did you see that? She has just killed him!

GARY: Come on,Come on,Let's get out of here

(Marion turns and sees Gary and Montgomery,her eyes red as blood,she bares her fangs and then wings sprout out from behind her,she screeches loud)

MONTGOMERY: What....

(Gary pulls Montgomery away to run)

GARY: Just run man,I don't know what is going on

(They both run as Marion flies towards them like a bullet)

MONTGOMERY: She's coming right for us! She's gonna g...

(Montgomery couldn't finish his sentence as Marion darted past him and slashed his neck open with the sharp tip of one of her wings,He collapsed to the ground and soon died,Gary had no time to mourn,He was running for his life through the park)

GARY: HELP! SOMEBODY!

(No one seemed to be in the park except Gary and the winged demon that was Marion,Gary ran getting close to the exit,Marion swooped down and grabbed him by his shoulders)

GARY: NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME,I'M GARY HATHAWAAAAAA.....

(His scream was loud but soon faded as she took him higher up in the sky to devour him,back down in the park all was quiet,and Marion soon landed,wings gone,fangs gone,eyes back to normal,she smiled and walked to the park exit)

THE END
(And now part 3,Gary and Montgomery have just entered the park,following Marion)

GARY: This is bad,The nerve of this girl to do this to me and not even tell me

MONTGOMERY: This is really getting to you,Do you not think this is pretty dangerous even for us? A lot of weirdos come into the park at night (pauses) Like you

(Montgomery laughs as Gary punches his shoulder)

GARY: I just want to see what she is doing and that is that

(Just then,Marion stops by a park bench and a young man is walking towards her)

GARY: Look,look,A guy walking her way,And she stopped,Is this her date you think?

MONTGOMERY: Who knows,Could just be a friend,Maybe there is an emergency or something and she couldn't contact you right away

GARY: An emergency? What kind of emergency has her meeting a guy in the park? I told you,She has decided to not meet me,Me,The great Gary Hathaway and so she will meet with some other moron,I knew this Marion was no good

(Marion is then talking to the guy as they stand by the park bench)

GARY: I bet they are talking all kinds of mushy garbage

MONTGOMERY: Listen to you,You don't get jealous much do you?

(Marion and the guy talk more,She then puts her arms around his neck)

GARY: I don't believe this

MONTGOMERY: Oh dear,Maybe this is a hot date

GARY: I'm going to put a stop to this if they start smooching

(Soon,the guy is struggling as Marion starts biting his neck,the guy screams)

MONTGOMERY: Wow,she is a bad kisser huh?

GARY: What is going on here?

(The guy's screams soon stop as Marion sucks the remaining blood out his body,his body drops to the ground)

MONTGOMERY: Gary...She's killed him,Did you see that? She has just killed him!

GARY: Come on,Come on,Let's get out of here

(Marion turns and sees Gary and Montgomery,her eyes red as blood,she bares her fangs and then wings sprout out from behind her,she screeches loud)

MONTGOMERY: What....

(Gary pulls Montgomery away to run)

GARY: Just run man,I don't know what is going on

(They both run as Marion flies towards them like a bullet)

MONTGOMERY: She's coming right for us! She's gonna g...

(Montgomery couldn't finish his sentence as Marion darted past him and slashed his neck open with the sharp tip of one of her wings,He collapsed to the ground and soon died,Gary had no time to mourn,He was running for his life through the park)

GARY: HELP! SOMEBODY!

(No one seemed to be in the park except Gary and the winged demon that was Marion,Gary ran getting close to the exit,Marion swooped down and grabbed him by his shoulders)

GARY: NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME,I'M GARY HATHAWAAAAAA.....

(His scream was loud but soon faded as she took him higher up in the sky to devour him,back down in the park all was quiet,and Marion soon landed,wings gone,fangs gone,eyes back to normal,she smiled and walked to the park exit)

THE END
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