Ok so I am going to start book two soon . But Chapter 1 is not quite ready as yet so I am just going to give you and intro



Dedmond - " Ten years . ?Zed . ITS TIME TO OWN UP TO TO YAR WORD !!! HAHAHAHAHAHAH !!! "  Roger - " Zed is wanted . Dead . I need his head on a platter . And I seem to already have ... * Takes out sword * ?the silver wear . " Zed - " Ohh yeah . Thats the stuff Amy . . Oww. Gentle gentle . "  Amy - " Don't tell me what to do " People always want to kill you Zeddy " Zed - " You're right . Its probably nothing "



Dedmond - " Release the man eaters !!! " ?Roger - " Set a course for the Atlanticah !!! "  Two men . One prize . Swords will clash * Sowrd clashes * Shots will be fired * Gunshot noises * Some people might even Die . Behold the tale Of Dead Zed .  Dedmond - " The Map Zed " Zed - " Funny thing . I don't have it " ? Dedmond - " I was hoping you would say that * Draws sword * " Zed - " And I had a feeling someone wanted to kill me this morning " ? ?Roger - "  I'll need a crew " ?  ? Herrald - " You will be given a new crew and ship ?" ?Zed - " ?Ok Dedmond wants to kill me . Roger wants to kill me . I think Spain wants to kill me too . ?How am I going to get myself out of this one now  ?Meh . I need some rum "?






There will be swordfight in which I will skipp a couple of lines and write the word " SWORDFIGHT " . I will give the decsription of the swordfights . Where the swords swing , who they hit . All the details . Like this post if you want me to add that to the stries

So your going on your second chapter I see! Not bad but whats up with all the question marks in the intro, It kinda makes it harder to read. Well besides that you did  absolutely good on the into. So keep up the good word my pirate captain!

I have no idea how those question marks got there actually . Sorry about that . I'll edit the post if possible .  Thanks for the props Man .