It was only until recent times that I heard of this game, back in the day, Sega CD technology wasn't to everyone's taste and was so expensive, hence why I didn't really hear of this much before. But to play this game is to find out a few additional features of a Sonic 2D game. In this game, time can be altered by means of going through specific time posts, something not evident in other early Sonic releases. You can go to the past or you can go to the future. The sort of future Sonic experiences will depend on the destruction of a mechanism within a level designed to change time. A good future can be achieved by destroying a mechanism found in the past (complicated, I know, its a time thing, but it must be done for a favourable outcome). Sonic's objective is to try to save Amy Rose, make her debut in the Sonic world, from being roboticized by Dr. Eggman, once again trying to dominate the entire planet. Amy will be captured by Metal Sonic, also a first timer in Sonic games, and Sonic will have to fight head to toe with this latest Eggman creation to achieve his goals. Eggman designed Metal Sonic for the purpose of testing it against Sonic, which is his real objective over anything else. No chaos emeralds in this game, just time stones which, as the name suggests, alter time. Overall, a pretty interesting game to try and beat, with new aspects of it, such as time-travelling, making the game enjoyable. Definitely a new dimension has been added.

Again I would suggest you space out you paragraph next time and maybe add more details next time as well, also you could add the categories to your review next time as well.Anyway this was pretty good for a review yet I  would suggest you do these three things in your next review!

This isn't a bad review, but you could use more detail. And space it out more like B619ook said.

This was a pretty good review, it could be better if you added more detail and made it easier to read. Read this. https://www.vizzed.com/boards/thread.php?id=58382

I was unfamiliar with this sonic game. Thanks.

Barathemos : Is that Fireproof's Banjo Kazooie guide? It's about 9,000 words long!

ross4587 : I do suggest that you do add more words and categorize your review into story, overall, sound, etc. I hope you can do better in the future!  

I am not being blunt, I am just HELPING.

Not a bad start for a review, it is pretty good. Although I will say that you should space it out and break your review down accordingly into categories, such as graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc. Once you do that it will be more organized and visually more appealing and neat. Try to give enough detail for each category as well, I'd go between the 500-1,000 word range or higher, because that is where most good reviews fall into. Overall, not a bad job, you have decent detail and good stuff to say about the game, just break it down and go into depth a bit more and I think you'll get it. Good job on this review though, you have a lot of potential, keep up the great work and keep practicing and making more reviews! I look forward to reading your next one!