This isn't bad for a first review, but I think that you could go into more elaboration and get into the specific things with this review. You need to categorize the parts of the game like the graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc. Once you do that, give them a score and then give reasons and a detailed explanation as to why you gave that score or why that part of the game was or wasn't good and how it made you think of the game overall, detail is important so try to aim somewhere between a 500-1000 review next time because those are some of the best ones.
I know this is a first for you, but just keep practicing and reviews will get easier to do for you, practice makes perfect and if you do the stuff like I said in your next review, word count and length won't be a problem. Also try to keep your review neat and organized when you categorize them, that will help you a lot and make them more appealing to the eye when they are neat and easy to read.
Overall, good work keep it up and keep working hard, I look forward to seeing another review from you shortly!
This isn't bad for a first review, but I think that you could go into more elaboration and get into the specific things with this review. You need to categorize the parts of the game like the graphics, sound, addictiveness, etc. Once you do that, give them a score and then give reasons and a detailed explanation as to why you gave that score or why that part of the game was or wasn't good and how it made you think of the game overall, detail is important so try to aim somewhere between a 500-1000 review next time because those are some of the best ones.
I know this is a first for you, but just keep practicing and reviews will get easier to do for you, practice makes perfect and if you do the stuff like I said in your next review, word count and length won't be a problem. Also try to keep your review neat and organized when you categorize them, that will help you a lot and make them more appealing to the eye when they are neat and easy to read.
Overall, good work keep it up and keep working hard, I look forward to seeing another review from you shortly!