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A Poem About Loss
a couple's happy life ends prematurely
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07-07-13 03:21 PM
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Mark was stood at the station

He was standing there in anticipation

Another date with the lovely Kylie

Made Mark feel all warm and smiley

Her train will be arriving soon

Mark was happy and over the moon

But the train came off the track and hit a big tree

Instant death for poor Kylie

Later Mark was told of what happened to the train

Now his life is misery and pain
Mark was stood at the station

He was standing there in anticipation

Another date with the lovely Kylie

Made Mark feel all warm and smiley

Her train will be arriving soon

Mark was happy and over the moon

But the train came off the track and hit a big tree

Instant death for poor Kylie

Later Mark was told of what happened to the train

Now his life is misery and pain

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sonicbros : Well, great poem! I got to say that you have great skill in poetry man! This poem also has really great and clever rhythm, but it was also a really sad poem though. . .

Keep up the great work man!
sonicbros : Well, great poem! I got to say that you have great skill in poetry man! This poem also has really great and clever rhythm, but it was also a really sad poem though. . .

Keep up the great work man!

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sonicbros :
This is a very good but very emotional poem.
It shows people can die at any moment and it bring emotion and how peoples loved ones can die.
Nice poem as always
sonicbros :
This is a very good but very emotional poem.
It shows people can die at any moment and it bring emotion and how peoples loved ones can die.
Nice poem as always

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